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Dashed


Just a guy who writes what comes to his mind, no plans, no hesitation. I've only recently got into mlp though so I have to do a lot of research on the fly.

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A man suddenly finds himself in Tartarus, no clue how he got there, and no idea how to get out, yet. As time continues forward he grows closer to the creatures locked up there. But one day new knowledge is found that could change everything. Will the human still be the same man as when he got there? Will Tirek finally get a heart as red as he is? And will everybody's favorite guard dog get his belly rubs!? (Hint: Yes, yes he will)

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Comments ( 27 )

This is a amazing chapter can't wait to see more of this story

You have my interest. I have a feeling Tirek will paint the ponies as tyrants of some sort, and himself innocent.

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to be fair he was betrayed by his brother wasnt he

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Not necessarily, he felt betrayed by his brother when he sided with the ponies instead of his own kin. Tirek's brother did try to get Tirek to join him, but Tirek chose to ignore him and in turn was banished to Tartarus.

I’m imagining Tirek gets all the pony magic then Ethan calls in his favor.

How dare u take his bone u monster!

yea this is why im guessing anon will just walk out again if he is put in tarturus

Tirek couldn't take magic away from items, would it be here ? Good story!

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Tirek mentioned the thing about wiping out forests to put it in perspective how much magic is contained inside unicorns. He meant he could slowly take the ambient magic from equestria like every other magical being can do when they're missing magic, just at a much faster rate due to his ability to abosrb magic.

And if by "items" you mean magical artifacts like grogar's bell, then no he can't absorb that magic. I meant that he can take the magic from any living thing. Whether that be plants, animals, or the more mythical creatures found across the world of mlp.

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6’ 2” myself, is nice sometimes, but not always. I served in the navy, and the ships aren’t really designed for someone my height or taller, so I would always be walking around the ship with my head down all the time when I was inside so I wouldn’t constantly hit my head, which happened anyways... a lot...
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Something about being too tall for convenience.

I hope this story isn't dead

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No, I'm just really bad at updating.

If you kill that bird, I will commit mass genocide!

But also, this is a lovely story. Thank you for making it. :D

Honestly having a bumbling human protagonist who just succeeds in all of his animal handling checks is a lot of fun. Him just instantly befriending any animal seems a little to easy, until you realize this is Equestria, and any form of love given = instant friendship.

Look like Tirek is handling his own Pinkie Pie.

Although that might be useful with he is meeting the pink one.

Recién leo está historia y digo que me gustó mucho pocas veces vi historias donde el humano va Equestria y es inmune con la magia, pues...por lo roto que es pero lo estás haciendolo muy bien, hasta ahora los personajes están bien hechos, la escritura de Tirek está bien hecha, estoy seguro de que así reaccionaria el personaje sin sus poderes, y con Ethan diría que es un personaje algo simple, o sea no lo veo tan como shockeado por la situación que está de este nuevo mundo sino más bien como que le da igual de que este Equestria, osea no digo que el personaje este a cada rato nervioso a lo loco, solo que nos muestre un poco que le afecta estar un poco lejos de su hogar, probablemente ya haya pasado un mes desde que salió del tártaro.

Buena historia, me encantó mucho, esperaré para el próximo (solo espero que no sean otros tres años) :twilightsmile:

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Me alegro de que estés disfrutando de la historia hasta ahora. Planeo retocar más adelante el hecho de que Ethan parece no tener emociones a veces y los efectos de que repentinamente le quiten a Ethan para luego empujarlo a Equus. Afortunadamente no tardaré tres años en sacar el próximo capítulo. Planeo tenerlo listo al menos para el final de la semana si el tiempo lo permite.

Gracias por comentar y lo siento por el traductor de Google. No he tomado una clase de español en años. Simplemente sentido en español podría hacerte sentir más incluido.

For english readers too lazy to use google translate like me:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. I do plan on touching up later on the fact Ethan seems to be rather emotionless at times and the effects of suddenly being taken away from Earth to then be thrust on Equus. Thankfully I won't be taking three years to get the next chapter out. I plan on having it out at least by the end of the week if time permits it.

Thanks for commenting and I'm sorry about google translate. I have not taken a spanish class in years. Just felt in Spanish might make you feel more included.

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Think about how much taller you'd be without all that blunt force trauma to the head.

Another companion joins our merry band of hoodlums!
Glad to see Tirek is at least being a begrudgingly helpful fella', Cerberus is as chipper as ever, and Persephone is growing into a pteror in her own right.

And we're slowly opening up on Ethan and his "weirdness", seems that we can tally up another form of magic his body just handwaves away like nothing.
Makes you wonder if it applies to just him and things that came with him, or if he could, like, spit in someone's face and they're unmagick'd for awhile. No flying, no shape changing, no spells, and no hoof-grabbing.

Anyway, glad to see a new chapter, well done!

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