• Published 14th Apr 2020
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Twilight sparkle lord of death - Dark1777



The story begins on the day of the wedding rehearsal between BBBFF of twilight captain shining amor and princess mi amore cadenza.

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this is the end for part 1 of the story, i will continue part 2 next week, hope you guys will continue to follow my story, and thank you all for your support of my story , wish you a nice day!:twilightsmile:

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Well done with your work here so far. By chance can you give you're followers & readers a clue or hint to what we can expect or what you have planned in store for part 2?

I'll gladly/ happily wait for more ... :twilightsmile:

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in part 2 there will be the appearance of the Dark Queen and the owners of other Crystal Of Balance, In addition, there will also be the appearance of those who threaten the balance of Equestria and the universe

but I'm wondering what to name part 2

and it's a pity I won't pair Cadence with Twilight, I'll pair Dark Queen and Cadence instead, but I still hope you guys can continue to follow my story

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Thanks very much. With T.W. cutting ties with everyone including the E.O.H. will this by chance mean the end of Equestria itself? & if so, will the remaining heroes decide to once attempt to fix their mistakes or throw in the towel & call it quits?

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about the elements of harmony I have found a new owner for the Element Of Magic, that character will be revealed in season 2

This was a good story and I honestly am looking forward to part two.

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I vote for the return of Sunset Shimmer as magic :twilightsmile:

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Do you really think she'd be up to it? If upon finding out how her FORMER mentor BOTCHED things up with T.W. it's unlikely she'll want to put with her again. Speculation would have that S.S. plans to rub it in Sun-butt's face on what a complete failure she really is.

YAAAY, this story was pretty great !!!!!

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How about "The new life of Twilight sparkle"

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I bet in Trixie that would be really regret for what she did and gradually become a friend of all

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actually, part 2 of the story will focus on both Twilight and Dark Queen, so I wanted a name that not only focuses on Twilight but also focuses on Dark Queen and owners of the other Crystal Of Balance.

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I think it very interesting

I think the release of the second part of the story will have to be postponed to next month, sorry for the inconvenience, but I need more time to organize my work and the plot for the second part of the story.:ajsleepy:

Hope you can forgive me for the delay, and I will definitely continue the story

i look forward to the second part of this story. I enjoyed reading this story

Looking forward to the next.

Good time of day.
I wrote a short review of this work, trying to be as constructive as possible. Please do not take what is said in it to heart.
Have a nice acquaintance. Review

I knew that sooner or later I would meet weak work. And here it is, in front of me. Author, you should learn from other authors to write quality work. Because it does not reach the level of the usual history.

This story is amazing, can't wait to read part 2.

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