At the wedding hall
All ponies in the room including Chrysalis were shocked at this new form of Twilight.
“U ... um .... Princess Celestia, please tell me that Twilight has only become an Alicorn princess, right?” Rainbow Dash asks not sure.
“I'm sorry Rainbow Dash, but I don't think Twilight has become the princess Alicorn. Because as far as I know, there is no Alicorn of that shape. And furthermore we can feel Twilight possessing a much darker power than Discord and Nightmare Moon” Princess Celestia answered anxiously.
“D .... D ... dark? W ... What do you mean Princess Celestia? You mean ... T ... Twily is using dark magic?” Shining Armor asked in fear. He could never have imagined that his sister would use dark magic. And it was all his fault for not believing his sister and chasing her out of the wedding.
“I really hope not like that. But whatever this power is, it's really dark. I have never seen such a dark magic even if it was the dark magic of King Sombra. It .... Makes me feel scared ... A feeling that I forgot a long time ago.” Princess Celestia said in fear.
‘I .... It's for me !!! It's all my fault! I should have listened to Twily! I shouldn't have kicked her out of the wedding and abandoned her! What kind of brother abandoned his sister !? Shining Armor you are so stupid !!! What did you think !? 'Guilt and regret swallowed him. He was angry with himself for what he did during the wedding rehearsal.
‘T ... Twilight? D ... Dark magic? I ... Impossible!? Twilight will never use dark magic .... Right?... Oh, who am I kidding? It's all my fault,... I should have stayed there with Twilight. Instead, I was too focused on the Sonic Rainboom show and abandoned Twilight... I'm an Element Of Loyalty, what kind of loyalty would abandon friend to comfort a fake !?'
Rainbow is angry with herself for abandoning Twilight.
'Twilight can't use dark magic! That cannot be true... But the princess has no reason to lie to us,... And I'm the Element Of Honest, I cannot deny the truth .... And I should not deny the fact that Princess Cadence is a fake. I thought something was wrong with Princess Cadence, but because I was too focused on preparing for the wedding, I denied that fact and thought that Princess Cadence was just stressed out before the wedding ... And I abandoned Twilight. I don't deserve to be the Element Of Honest. 'Applejack thought disappointed.
‘I'm an Element Of Generosity... But I wasn't generous when leaving Twilight and checking out the impostor who treated me and my friends badly. I will definitely do everything to get Twilight's forgiveness. 'Rarity cried thinking about how selfish she was at the wedding rehearsal.
'I was too cruel to Twilight, while she needed me the most, I abandoned her... And now she is possessed by dark magic because of my cruelty... If something happens to Twilight,... I... I'll never be able to forgive myself! 'Fluttershy cried at the thought of losing Twilight forever.
Pinkie Pie just sat there silently, she didn't cry or move. She just sat there, but her mane and tail were straight and darker, she lowered her head to let her mane cover her face and her mouth muttered something like “it's all my fault”.
Spike was staring at Twilight's new shape, he was so shocked and couldn't think of anything, he didn't know what to do and didn't want to believe what Princess Celestia said was true. Twilight is the pony that incubated him from the egg, the two have been together until now, he sees her as his sister ... And now he realizes that he was lose her because of a stupid mistake of him.
‘Oh ... Twilight! What have I done? Once again I failed in the same way I failed with Luna when I gave Nightmare Moon the opportunity to take her and the price was a thousand years alone, I swore I would never let It happened again ... But now, again I failed as your mentor. Cadence is right, I'm her aunt, I should have known she would never behave like that even under stress. I shouldn't even hold a wedding while Canterlot is in the danger .... But, I will do everything to redeem my faults! Whatever the cost, I will definitely not let you fall into darkness... I promise, Twilight! 'Princess Celestia thought in agony.
“Oh ... Twilight” Cadence angrily looked towards the innocent unicorn she had once cared for and played when she was just a filly, they read books together, play together, and times she had read fairy tales before bed for Twilight. And now the innocent girl was hurt, pain, desperate and possessed by the darkness. 'Twilight, I will definitely save you from any darkness that possesses you!' She thought.
And then .... BAM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Twilight suddenly shot a dark gray magic spell at Chrysalis while she was shocked at the new form and terrifying the dark power radiating from Twilight.
Before Chrysalis could stand up, Twilight quickly moved behind Chrysalis and fired another magic spell at her. The gray magic hand with sharp claws appeared from Twilight's horn, grabbed Chrysalis and threw her at the wall, Twilight used her new wings to fly back to Chrysalis at the speed of light. The sharp from Twilight's wings cut into Chrysalis' chitin and a green blood gushed out from the wound.
Twilight continued to use her new wings as a weapon, along with the tremendous speed and power of a Death Lord, she repeatedly injured the changeling queen without giving her a chance to protest. Main five, Shining Armor, Princess Celestia and Cadence watched Twilight fight with fear and anxiety. They feared that Twilight would kill the changeling queen, even though Chrysalis was evil, and they hated her, but the more they didn't want Twilight to become a cold-blooded killer, they worried that if everything continued like that Twilight would sink deeper into the darkness.
After the constant and powerful attacks from Twilight, Chrysalis finally collapsed, unable to stand or even move due to her bleeding wounds. If it weren't for her the changeling queen and thick chitin shells, she would have died after Twilight's attacks.
Seeing that the changeling queen could no longer stand up, Twilight lowered to the ground and slowly approached where Chrysalis lay, Twilight looked at her with ice eyes with the killing intent of a Death Lord radiating around her, causing Chrysalis to die. Trembling with pain and fear.
“P ... p ... Please ..... Forgive me, you won! I will not invade Equestrian anymore! It's your! So please don't kill me! ” Chrysalis trembled and begged Twilight. If it wasn't for her being unable to move because of her injuries, she would kneel down and beg Twilight to forgive her.
However, Twilight did not say anything and continued towards Chrysalis slowly and intimidated. Making Chrysalis even more frightened, all Chrysalis could hear now was the sound of Twilight's hooves knocking on the floor as she walked closer to her, every step of Twilight pounding at her heart. Made her heart beat faster because fear Twilight will kill her.
“Stop Twilight !!!!!” Main Five, Shining Armor, Cadence, Princess Celestia running and standing between Twilight and Chrysalis to prevent Twilight from killing the changeling queen.
“Please Twilight! Listen to me, don't let the dark magic control you, it will only make you worse. ” Princess Celestia begged Twilight to listen to her. She is determined not to lose Twilight in the dark.
“That's right Twilight!!... You're right, she's evil, and we should listen to you,... But instead we let you down, we were too engrossed in preparing for the wedding, and we were not listening to you and even we have abandoned you,... We are bad friends... But please don't let dark magic control you, you're not a killer!” Applejack said sadly. All the other friends looked at her with pleading eyes.
“Twily .... Please ... I'm very sorry, I should listen to you, I shouldn't kick you from the wedding. I was a stupid, bad brother and .... And stupid! I don't deserve your BBBFF, but please Twily .... Don't ruin yourself ... Please! “ Shining Armor pleaded.
“Twilight,... Please stop. I know you're in pain and despair, but please let us help you Twilight, ... don't do this,... She's evil but doesn't deserve to die. ” Cadence said, trying to prevent Twilight from killing Chrysalis.
They all thought that Twilight was consumed by magic dark because of the suffering that her friends, brother and mentor had caused her... However, they didn't know the power that Twilight was holding was not dark magic, but that it was the ultimate power of death, now that she no longer felt pain, hatred or anything. Now she is the Death Lord who keep the balances between life and death. And she had no intention of killing Chrysalis, she only wanted to scare Chrysalis so that she would not dare to threaten Equestrian against.
so they have misenturpreted her new power. this wont end well
You are doing so well
With her new powers I wouldn't be surprised if Twi wanted to kill Chryssi she would even need to lift a single hoof to fo so.
She is pretty much the Grim Reaper after all
ok this is hooves down my favorite story on this website
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I'm the one who's his editor.
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Maybe it will and maybe it won't.
So how many chapters is this story going to have and will there be a sequel or a Sears of on this story i do hop so become it will be an interesting Sears
Okay this is a really good since when is the next chapter coming out 😁😁😁😁
This was a wonderful chapter! Keep up the good work!
Honestly its not bad i enjoyed reading it i hope there will be more chapter
I like it!! MORE PLS!
Need work, needs lots of work. I would have liked to see more description of hits of blows traded between Twilight and Chrysalis. More of a build up in power for Twilight, a little more struggle. Like seeing her experiment with her power and finding where her limit is, within character reason, e.g. non-lethal. How far is her telekinetic grab now? how strong are her simple magic blasts without straining herself, maybe the armor starts appearing as she fighting and taking down changeling after changeling?
These are just suggestions, though. What you have is good, but could be improved. Edgy, broody, and I look forward to how the others try and bring Twily back from darkness.
"This is my first time writing a story so it won't be very good, anyway thanks for watching."
And yet you have an 8 to 1 like/dislike ratio...
This is the first time I wrote a story. At first I was worried, I didn't know if my idea in the story was appropriate, and whether people liked my story ... I look forward to your comments and suggestions. for my story. And I'm really happy you guys like this story. and thank you very much for making comments on the mistakes in my story.
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I'm waiting to continue 10/10
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Because of my work, I will release one chapter every week. Hope you sympathize. And thank you for supporting my story. Have a nice day!
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Thank you for supporting my story. I'm glad you liked it. And have a nice day!
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I'm glad you like my story. And of course I will update new chater every week. Hope you will continue to support.
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Thanks for your advice. I will remember it. and thanks for reading my story. I hope you will keep watching my new chapters.
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I'm glad you like the story. Wish you a good day!
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no problem :)
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But, I think it will have a sequel to the story, but its contents are a secret. and thanks for reading my story. Have a nice day!
Thank you so much to everyone who supported my story and gave me advice. And I also thank my friend Midnight Might and my editor Edguy0009 for helping me with my grammar. Wish you all have a nice day!
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Nah, don't worry. This is a good first attempt at writing. And, course I'l keep reading.
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Thanks for your suggestions. I'll try harder next time. Have a nice day!
Honesty.
No, just no. You can't have someone die and then have them tremble, plead for their life, or pretty much anything else that only a living being could accomplish.
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i think that was mistranslated and was supposed to mean something along these lines "causing the resolve Chrysalis had to die" but hey you do you i can always be wrong
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Wow great chapter
If it wasn't for the fact that the death of Chrysalis would have probably created an equal amount of unbalanced level if death to the Changelings in much the same manner that the Equastrians would have had a massive amount of death I would think that Chrysalis' death would have been warrented. Making her not want to invade probably saves both races which keeps balance.