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After the events of School Raze, The Cutie Mark Crusaders are feeling hurt and betrayed after what Cozy Glow did to take over the school and erased the magic of Equestria and never got a chance to save it. So they resigned their positions as tutors of the School of Friendship and go back to Cheerliee's class as it became a shock to Twilight and her friends when they heard what happen and try to think of a plan to cheer them up and convince them to come back to Twilight's school.
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I think you mean Trixie.
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Fixed.
Like the start
Good start.
This might be selfish but I think a certain dragon could cheer them up.
I'm afraid the only ones who can get out of the funk is themselves.
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That or maybe Luna.
I was wondering how the main six would see how not being clear with the CMC about joining the school can lead to problems.
There should be some mentioning that Cozy failed her test on purpose and Twilight accused the CMC for helping Cozy.
Thank you for following my suggestion!
Maybe you can include Diamond Tiara and or Silver Spoon to help cheer up the CMC in a way?
Glad to see that Twilight and the others realized their mistake for not listening or taking the CMC seriously.
I'm afraid to find out who got the jump on them.
Wow, I appreciate you for mentioning me!
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No problem if I need any more ideas for the next chapter I'll let you know.
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Personally, I think this would've been a proper season 9 premiere.
I’m eager to find out who the mysterious figure is.
Please keep going with this story, I myself was very disappointed that the CMC was stuffed in the closet and no pony seemed to care. I must see how this is resolved and if anybody ever loves the CMC. Notice my avatar? these ponies need love.
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I go with Grogar, Chrysalis, Discord, or some other darken made up named pony.
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Maybe I would've had Diamond Tiara a little more cross at Twilight and her girls for what they were doing to the CMC in not making them feel wanted, and maybe should've reminded them that it was the CMC and not the Mane 6 that helped her.
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Well Discord did reform himself and disguised himself as Grogar. So Chrysalis was on the loose hiding around the Everfree Forest so that's sounds like a good idea so if you had more suggestions for the 4th chapter let me know.
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3 names come to mind for possible revenge:
Cozy Glow: she could've ingested some kind of dangerous magic to make her into a bigger and powerful pony that has power to make her able to grab the Mane 6.
Queen Chrysallis, and you'd have to include she captures Starlight
Cozy Glow would be the strongest candidate for revenge and logically, the CMC would get a 2nd chance to go against her and this time, they would be able to win and outsmart her, and the magic the CMC would use would break the magic hold on Cozy Glow that made her big and unstable. Of course Sweetie Belle seems to be the only magical pony though, unless Applebloom and Scootaloo can do something to trick Cozy Glow and hold her in place. Then the Mane 6 would be awestruck.
Maybe Sunset Shimmer has trouble fitting in on the human world, isolated, people never give her a chance, so she finds her way back and takes revenge on the Mane 6, and when healed, she asks to want to come home.
Those are ideas off my head, but I would go with the logical choice in Cozy Glow so that the CMC had a chance that they were denied to stop her.
So the figure captures the Mane 6, Starlight Glimmer, the young 6, and Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon...
Make sure you note all that as it seemed like at the end, it's just the Mane 6, but if the other ponies are around, they'd have to be captured as well, unless some paralyzing spell was used to freeze the others in place?
I want to see the CMC as heroes and be given a special prize, and include Scootaloo's family Holiday and Lofty to see the proud moment along with Rarity's family Magnum and Betty, and of course Granny Smith and BIg Mac.
This story is amazing. I wonder who's the one who locked Twilight's friend.
I think you mean, "No, we can't!" Scootaloo shouted.
Great chapter!
are you going to make part 2 of this story
Better be Piezookas(Bazookas that shoots out pies).
I hope you have a wonderful event for the CUtie Mark Crusaders so they are loved by every pony. Thank you for having them save the day as they should've saved the day in the final episode. Your story is good, but you got a couple of grammar and sentence structure issues, but it's still understandable and wonderful to read of how the fillies took the train to save the Mane 6, the School 6 I guess what Yona and the others are, and DIamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. The Diamond Dogs were the last suspects, I was going with maybe Grogar, Cozi Glow finding a way back, maybe Queen Chrysalis even, but you Law and Ordered us on the suspects.
and so once again the day is saved thanks to the Cutie Mark Crussaders
When's the last chapter coming out?
I appreciate the thanks!
This proves the CMC can stand tall, no matter how small.
That's what I called a happy ending
And they've never been in the thick of any of the action over the entire series.
Which is probably what inspired Guardians of Crystal Growth.
My friend, I have been waiting for this for a very long time. I'll read it on my bus trip tomorrow to Rohnert Park and my down time in Petaluma while I wait for Wendy's to serve the 10:30am lunch to bring home. But I am very proud that you took a story and you finished it, no incomplete, no lost for over 5 years and the writer disappeared from the Earth. I am very happy you made the CMC feel very appreciated, very loved, and worked out any issue every pony was having. I'm happy the CMC is wanted and will be a wonderful addition to the school. Thank you for finishing the project, the 3 little cutie marks with big hearts to save their best friends is wonderful.