Forgiveness Accepted

This story is a sequel to Forgiveness Denied

With BrawnyBold's permission decided to make a sequel to his "Forgiveness Denied" story during the events of the episode "Marks for Effort".

STORY:
The Cutie Mark Crusaders won't forgive Twilight and Cozy Glow after what happened at the School of Friendship. When Neighsay hears about this he decided to take an advantage on Twilight by creating an angry mob to attack her so he can take over the school.

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Pete100

Pete100 #1 · May 3rd, 2022 · 4 · · Chapter 1 ·

"Anything's better than that stupid School of Friendship with that selfish Princess of Hypocrite." Sweetie Belle said.

Honestly, the funny thing is that most stories actually write twilight like that.

"You won't talk us out of this one girls! We're done! We resigned as the students of the School of Friendship!" Apple Bloom shouted. "Because you three along with Fluttershy, Pinkie Pie, Spike and Starlight only cared about helping Twilight run that stupid school instead of caring about us!"

What makes them think that?

"We still have nightmares of all kinds of trouble that we got ourselves into." Sweetie Belle said. "And they'll never go away."

What trouble?

"Why should we?" Sweetie Belle asked. "She never made mistakes in her life."

Oh boy. I’m pretty sure someone has a list.

"Yes." Rarity said. "Try to distance yourselves even further from her Twilight and Cozy for the way they hurt. That will definitely fix it."

It kinda would.

"We said forget it!" Apple Bloom snapped. "How can we trust you three, Twilight, Cozy Glow, Pinkie Pie, Fluttershy, Starlight, and Spike! If you all don't trust us or give us a chance have a place in your school?! This whole thing is nothing but a joke!"

The others weren’t even involved.

Tiber Septim II

Tiber Septim II #2 · May 3rd, 2022 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

That can’t be good.

Magic135

Magic135 #3 · May 5th, 2022 · 1 · · Chapter 1 ·

I always felt that if the episode added a scene where Starlight told the girls that if the CMC would be great teachers, why did they say anything about that? Maybe if the episode had a scene like that, maybe if would be better, at least in my eyes. And I'm not liking what Neighsay is planning.

DecoGalileo