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AndwhatIseeisme
I write stories mainly featuring small horses having sex with one another, and that is probably all you really need to know about me.
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Hating the story already, gives us hardly any background on what to expect.
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I know it's subtle, but if you read the title and the summary very closely, you might be able to glean out some of what happens.
I'm actually kind of hoping for that sequel nowI wonder what the story is about
This literally just popped up on the list.
How the hell did you already get 9 upvotes?
~Skeeter The Lurker
The lack of a Random tag on Fluttercord frightens me.
OK, the story's synopsis alone gives it a spot in my Bookmarks folder. Please respond to this comment.
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Done, you're welcome. I don't do autographs.
... I have four words.
Fluttershy and Discord have sex.
Is that like having tea ?
Fluttershy and Discord have tea.
They do that all the time.
So sex is a type of tea ?
A herbal tea ?
Can you get it at coffee shops ?
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Sex is like tea in that there are many different ways to enjoy it.
You can enjoy it everyday as a simple fact of life like the British and afternoon tea.
You can enjoy it heavily ritualized and with exacting standards like the Japanese and tea ceremonies
You can enjoy it in unusual and creative ways like Americans and iced tea
Or you can fuck it up and just make it weird like the American South and sweet tea.
And, of course, you can also never enjoy it and just pretend you have by repeating how you've heard others have it, like a Star Trek Fan and tea, Earl Grey, hot.
lol, I'm not sure if I'm gonna be reading this any time soon, but I've got to give you a like for that "super vague" description.
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Wait, crap! Is that all it takes to get likes? I've been putting way too much effort into this whole writing thing.
Typos:
"its" not "it is/has"
Fuck, there was so much about this I enjoyed reading!
I'll settle for a single silly sex snippet
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Fixed. Thanks
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Some innovative and chaotic sexual tricks, very suitable for sex with Discord.
-Definitely the most Discordy Discord clopfic I’ve read.
-I’m particularly a fan of Fluttershy eating herself out while getting knotted in her ass.
-Nice to see a relatively uninhibited Fluttershy
-Grammar issues are mostly minor and dialog-related ... but abundant:
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to let her breathshe fought to breath-- breathe.-
Discord-6"-- no end punctuation.-Improper dialog tags:
"Wait," Fluttershy arched an eyebrow, "why does the"Thank you, Discord," Fluttershy picked up an appleFluttershy interrupted, "I thought we agreed not to discuss that thing that you never saw," she said"Certainly," she hopped off her seatFluttershy responded, "I think I could use a quick nap for the moment. Maybe when I wake up, you can be in the middle?" she asked innocently.-Improper dialog interruption:
And he," pointing to the still upside-down discord with the dog dick, "isinside her ass," he pointed to Fluttershy, "and the sooner we can-
the other me's can get themselves positioned.-- missing end quote.-
""Very well,"-- too many quotation marks.-Rainbow-flavored cum is genius.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 91/100
Allure: 85/100
Enticement: 98/100
Immersion: 91/100
Prose Quality: 55/100
Total Score: 420/500
The more specialized scores for individual prizes, as well as the results of the community poll, will be published when the full results are announced. If this story wins any awards, there will be another post in the story comments sometime after June 9th announcing that this story has won.
Thank you for participating, and thank you for contributing to Fimfic's collection of clop!
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This is probably the best compliment I could hope for on this fic. I was really trying to get him right. Thank you.
I feared from the title this would be pretty vanilla, but thankfully I was mistaken! Loved all the kink!
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Thanks. Writing vanilla sex with Discord would just be a waste. Half the fun of writing this was coming up with fun things Discord could do with his powers to enhance sex. I mean, any stallion can screw a mare in the butt, but how many can let her eat herself out while doing it?
Glad you enjoyed it.
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Yeah, hard to top Shy getting the knot but you managed with her eating herself!