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AndwhatIseeisme
I write stories mainly featuring small horses having sex with one another, and that is probably all you really need to know about me.
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As a fellow competitor of the contest, I wish you luck too. This was a nice story to read.
You're an absolute madman, you know that? Straight bonkers.
...I respect that.
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We call this a pro-gamer move
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It's hilarious to me. Most of the rest of us have between one and four entries.
Then there's you and Sharaz unloading the double digits.
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Yeah... we may have gotten a little carried away, what with the 38 stories between us. I think he realized at some point that I was trying to catch up to him, which kind of kicked off a marathon for both of us in the latter half of April.
If you add the 3rd most prolific writer, Omegathyst, and his 9, that's over a quarter of the valid entries in this contest being written by 3 people. Pity poor DLS for his burden.
Disregarding the contest, I wish there were more CheesePie fics. Like really. They're canon and had a child. And they're just perfect in general, I love them. They deserve a lot more than they get.
OW! I think I got a UTI just reading this! LOL
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Bringing the meta into the sex scene itself is just too much, man. Really ruins any immersion there may have been.
-Telly narration.
-Absolutely no build-up.
-Around the world in 80 days reference? Now that you're referencing classic science fiction books, I can finally start getting some of these references! Much more fun than missing references to songs I don’t know!
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 70/100
Allure: 5/100
Enticement: 60/100
Immersion: 20/100
Prose Quality: 90/100
Total Score: 245/500
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Orgasm Denial
You're the master of teasing, keeping your lovers waiting until absolutely the last moment before finally taking them over the edge. Your clopfic was the last (valid) one submitted to this group!
Fav and upvote since I don't think many people would have these two trying so hard to get pregnant BEFORE they were married, so I'll consider it implied.
I'm sorry I noticed this story too late to actually be able to vote for something in this contest.