Makin' Whoopie

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Anal_Destroyer_0706

Anal_Destroyer_0706 #1 · Dec 14th, 2021 · · ·

A kinky yet cute story!

TheAlienBrony22

TheAlienBrony22 #2 · Dec 14th, 2021 · · ·

It's not that bad, great job.

n3k1dsk1llz

n3k1dsk1llz #3 · Dec 14th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Woo!
Thankies!

WaywardSon

WaywardSon #4 · Dec 14th, 2021 · 1 · ·

Delightful! The only jarring part for me is hearing Weird Al's voice for all of Cheese Sandwich's lines.

n3k1dsk1llz

n3k1dsk1llz #5 · Dec 14th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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Yeah. It was weird to write at times.

TheAlienBrony22

TheAlienBrony22 #6 · Dec 15th, 2021 · · ·

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I think that's what made the story good for me, I'm so used to listening to fan dubs, fan series, fanimations, and fanfic readings, plus rewatching the original show's material that I can just hear the voices as I read, and sometimes, I'll hear them as I write out my own stuff.

n3k1dsk1llz

n3k1dsk1llz #7 · Dec 15th, 2021 · 1 · ·

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I'm with you on that.

Even though it was a bit strange, hearing Weird Al's voice of Cheese as I wrote this made it more real and intimate.
Like...it's not really a sexy voice all the time, but you know it doesn't matter to Pinkie and that she enjoyed every second of it.

Just two ponies in love, really.

TheAlienBrony22