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SpoonfedArt
Small steps. Commissions are closed for the moment. Just working through my queue.
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I kind of want those "further adventures" to focus on Twilight mind controlling the rest of her friends.
And while this story is well written for what it was "Twilight mind controls Dash into having sex with her" is kind of overdone as a fic concept (at least to me).
(Heck, that's kind of why I made my commission what it was. There needs to be more of the reverse)
I'm loving dominant futa Twi
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To be honest, this part is really here only mostly as a setup for later scenes. I knew that it would be kinda cliche to start with it, but at the same time the idea just got stuck in my head and I had to do it. But the next chapters are going to be quite different from the usual. There are a lot of depraved hijinks that Twilight will be getting up to and not only with her friends.
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Ah.
Now that gives me something to look forward to.
I really like this concept of the princesses having a supernatural aura of command that makes regular ponies obedient to their will. And, it's made even better with the addition of some good old fashioned futa dom. I definitely enjoyed this one and look forward to more!
I just looked up the original image (cover art) and I was not expecting them to be anthro.
I'm okay with this.
Here's an interesting twist, the spell is actually one of celestia's and when she finds out that Twilight cast it she decides to train her in its full potential. even going so far as to have sex in the throne room while petitions are going on and none of the ponies even blink.
Quick question. Anthro Ponies or EG?
How Do I find the original Art
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Go to Derpibooru, open any image, replace the number in URL with the one from the description.
Very good story
Excellent nut
Good luck in the contest
I know she didn't do it, but I would've loved to see Twilight change her tomboyish, athletic friend into a feminine, submissive housewife.
I Want to see what you have in store For the story
This is your official review from Dirty Little Secret's Dirty Little Contest!
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------ Review ------
Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-The way Rainbow internally justifies what she's doing is a nice touch.
-Also nice to see Twilight's gradual corruption into doing worse and worse things.
-A few grammar issues:
pet Rainbows fit bellyDash’s perk butt shakewhat you were signing up to,” She giggled.-- in that last one, there are two problems: ‘she’ shouldn’t be capitalized, and there’s no way she could have ‘giggled’ that whole phrase.-The crazy words for cum got a bit excessive.
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“You’re giving hella lip for someone with a huge dick planted in their cunt.”-- doesn't sound like Twilight at all.-Could use some more extended afterglow.
-How does Twi come to terms with what she did? Would Rainbow keep doing this without the spell's influence? If no, does Twi use the spell to make her do it anyway? Or maybe Twi could take off the spell mid-fucking, then seduce Rainbow the old fashioned way, to prove that she can? Or maybe later Twi finds out that the spell doesn't work, Rainbow fabricated the whole thing -- including the princess's letter -- because she's such a slut? Basically, I want to know how this affected their (non-mind-controlled) relationship. I want to see what happens after the fact.
-The pregancy scare at the end was pretty cute.
------ Scores ------
To clarify what these scores mean, check my judging rubric.
Cloppability: 97/100
Allure: 91/100
Enticement: 85/100
Immersion: 54/100
Prose Quality: 80/100
Total Score: 407/500
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I like how Dash has a toned figure and rather modest cup.
Sooo many go for 'bigger is better' and it ends up being all the same, let alone make any sense. Variety is Great 👍 Equality... not so much.
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I will enter it to dic(k)t.cc
It just dawned on me...
This is just a weaker version of the need it want it spell. Slightly altered.....
Alternativ ending:
"Oh hi Fluttershy, glad you could make, there is a spell i wanted to test and you were the first pony in was thinking of....
Twi grind evil as the door closes