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SpoonfedArt
Small steps. Commissions are closed for the moment. Just working through my queue.
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That was fantastic!
Celestia and Twilight having loving and yet rediculously kinky sex that they both enjoy immensely is best, and something that isnt done enough.
The description of the sensations and smells were wonderful throughout.
And of course, suckfics are bestfics.
Thank you so much for writing this
Featured at ten upvotes? What is this sorcery?
Definitely needs a follow-up where Celestia turns Twilight into a cumdump (maybe even turning her into a breeding mare).
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I second that.
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Featured is pretty much based on views, not votes.
So when exactly will Luna want to form a 'bond of trust' with Twilight?
I read the title as “Deep Thrust”
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Luna and Tia sharing her would make it just. Mmm. Goot. Very goot.
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This is set before NMM, so if I get the chance to commission an episodic sequal, one of the episodes will be twilight trying to make Luna feel loved and welcome in equestria when she was shutting herself away between episode 1 and Luna Eclipsed.
This would of course be best done by twilight satisfying both endowed sisters in a crazy threesome.
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That might've been intentional.
Deep trust, deep thrust, deep throat. So easy to confuse and go from one thing to another accidentally, you know.
well it's kinda embarassing but can we get a second chapter?
nice work
Why do you keep using descriptors for bad things for smells you think are good? It feels like you don't know what they mean, and are using them because you think the words are more impactful, when there are equal words that are positive instead.
was a wild story I hope there's a sequel where she fucks Twilights pussy ,maybe even after Twilight becomes a alicorn she gets her own horsecock to fuck Celestia's throat and pussy.
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I have to agree here. Your privates, male or female, should never stink offensively. That's a sign of poor hygiene (which I can't imagine celestia having) or an infection.
It would be one thing if the scene were set up as occurring, say, right after a sweaty workout before a shower. But just waiting for a lesson shouldn't have produced stank.
Other descriptors (referring to pre as -slime) follow the same path. It's as if the author is trying to force the reader to interpret what is going on in the most (physically) disgusting way, but none of the characters are following through with it.
Of the odor stinks, then they're should be an effort to avoid it. If something is slimy, then she shouldn't want it touching her. Having all parties perfectly fine with it causes as weird disjunction between the text and how the reader reads it.
Let's say the author really wants to keep these descriptors. It's about the power trip of an authority figure forcing a student to perform these acts that the student finds disgusting. Then you can keep all the negative flavors without any problems. Or if twi really wanted to perform these acts but had to force herself to accept "less perfect" aspects of biology in order to do what she wants.
But without at least one character (preferably the pov) actively having bad reactions it just feels so out of place.
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Can't believe I actually have to respond to this. Reads as if you guys have never heard of fetishes. Did you consider that some people might actually enjoy typically unpleasant things?
It's filthy and it's nasty, but that's what makes it good.
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That would still mean you think the sensations are good, so you should be using the positive descriptors. That's how the english language works.
I've found my new favourite futa author.
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That's actually not how English works. In English you describe things however you want because they're literally just words used to convey ideas. The author's use here is simply to provide context to the reader for the smell and then to subsequently describe the character's reaction to it.
"The Orc used his rusty dagger to cut open a gash in his chest, searing pain raged across his body, something Orcs like him reveled in."
I described an action, then I provide context as to how it feels, and then finally describe the character's reaction to it. After all, masochists still feel the same pain anyone else would, but they take great pleasure in it, so not adding that context would be an injustice to describing the experience.
I'm not, by the way, saying your way of writing is incorrect, but I am saying that it's not superior to any other style of writing. Many authors follow the "Action -> Descriptor -> Reaction" paradigm and to say one's style is incorrect when all English is for—like any other language—is just to convey ideas, no matter how you want to as long as it's grammatically correct and spelled well. Now, there's certainly styles that are more popular, but that doesn't invalidate others; even Fimfiction has its own style in its "Writing Guide" that many would consider incorrect, but once again, it's just a stylistic choice.
I'm actually certain she means exactly you know what, Twilight.
I wonder how she intends to test this.
Maybe shrink her cock down to average size, blindfold Twilight and let her identify the correct one among a number of other cocks?
(Some of the guards may be willing to help with that test.)
Rumor says even Sunset Shimmer occasionally makes short visits though the mirror.
How did you think Cadance ascended?
Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.
This is quite the story to get deepthroat fans happy
A spell to stimulate her pussy? One lover still resulting in a Spitroast
it's awesome that you could make such an interesting long fic just about sucking a cock. the details are great, and that aftercare was pretty sweet!