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Tank Drill
Retired Brony, if you come across this account, I welcome you. My stories are dated, but show my writing progress. Have fun with that.
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What's this? A Startrixburst clop fic? Heck yes I'm upvoting this!
I like the pairing and the sex scene is nice, but there are problems with verb tense throughout the story.
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To be honest, I have no clue on how to fix those as my English teacher(s) had their ways of teaching of who I am today. I do have an editor and the majority of it is fixed, but I don't have the reading ability to catch my own mistakes unless someone points it out. Thanks for the input, I just need to find more editors to overlook my work. I do have Grammarly which helps me get by.
Not only a good story, but good equality and communist behavior of sharing. Very good. The soviet union approves of this relationship and hereby awards it the medal of wholesome degeneracy.
Pretty steamy...😏😏😏