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Welcome all to another little commission. There's not much pretense in this one—these ponies come to Rainbow Dash because although she's a firm mistress, she's a firm mistress.
There are three chapters in all, and all have been written and will be published over time. I hope this tickles the fancy of a few of you. Enjoy.
—Damaged
What was playing on my mind when I read the title of this story:
9984326 I was surprised no one recognized the previous story's title.
Hm, alright. I'm not a hypno guy or anything but I really enjoyed reading about it here. Was pleasant and sensual, rather than raunchy, and I appreciate that kind of thing. I think what I liked most was how cute the relationship between "Blitz" and "Fire" was and how she thought of him. Very cute.
9984486 I like to make a distinction between hypnosis and mind-control. The former, when I write it, is consensual and doesn't force people to do anything they don't actually want to do. The latter is just like it reads—control, no free will.
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I'm pretty into powerplay and casual/public sex but I've always hated mind control. To me, it's kinda like a bad medium between consensual role play and non-consequential/reluctance. One has a lot of sweet couple feels and a fun situation, and the other is kinky, taboo, and usually pretty hardcore. Mind control takes out the reactions of both and makes a character into 'not the character'.
Hypno is a little more fun in that respect. I think it works well when its used to put the character in a different but not ooc state of mind.
Chastity cages with petplay there should be more stories like this even though it is not the main theme of the story.
But isn't being chaste like, the exact opposite of wanting to have sex?
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No it is about building sexual frustration
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I agree.
This was good. Hope there's more coming, if not, then thank you for the ride.
10917156 This is up for now. Glad you had fun!