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What year did he come from?
This story is great so far, keep it up. Cant wait to read more, also what happend to his rifle? It's like after luna ported him into the castle all his gear is gone.
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It's set during ww1 and from chp2 his current year is 1918.
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Thanks but I haven't read chapter 2 yet and I knew it was ww1 because it was the only war that has used gas masks on the battle field
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His rifle along with his other belongings were taken from him when he was moved over to the castle. This was due to him being emotionally unstable and from Luna seeing its main function first hand when they met. Ch3 will go into more depth as to why everything was taken.
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I think 1916 or 1917. Trench Warfare was common in WW1. No mention of tanks, and mentioning of gas (presumably Mustard Gas) further cement this.
Very good story so far please keep it up!
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why are they already talking about integration instead of talking about getting him home? do they know something he/we do not?
Awesome story! Keep up the good work
I love it. Keep up the good work.
God, it's been so long since I seen an MiE story, it brings back good feeling. I'm gonna have to take a look at this in the next day or two. Glad to see something like this around.
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Not only that but he is calling the enemy Huns which was a simpler way of saying Austro-Hungarian forces mainly used by the British during the first world war.
One of the more well written stories I’ve seen, keep it up! I’m looking forward to what you have in store!
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Nope Huns was used for the Germans, not Austro-Hungarians.
Shouldn’t the title be “We Brave Few?”
So far so amazing! I can't wait to read more!
My god, am hooked on this story.
It’s good, slow, and dosen’t rush. It also paints Leo’s personality well, a man tainted from the trenches of the western front...
Really enjoyed this. Not the typical soldier in Equestria story where the protagonist just dies and wakes up in Equestria. Really liked the way you handled him transferring him there. And I love how you gave the teleportation spells a little effect on him. Anyways, keep up the good work!
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The current date in the story when he was brought to Equestria is mid-1918 near the end of the first world war. The second chapter confirmes this date.
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I appreciate the support and will continue putting all my effort into every chapter I make.
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who knows?
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Glad to see that you're liking the story. With current holidays next chapter is about 1/3ed done. who knows maybe I'll crank it out when I'm done replying to these comments.
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I appreciate the praise. I hope I do not let you down as the story continues.
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Shows that if you get enough likes you can change a story's name. Amazing suggestion, was kinda half asleep when I was coming up with the name. Cheers!
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It's nice to see that my approach for the story is coming through to the readers. Thanks for the support!
Hmm. Worth a look.
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Yeah no.
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1/10
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Posting another chapter so soon. C'mon, tell us. Who's your secret editer?
10012770 thank you for your feedback. I put tremendous value upon it.
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You have no clue why I rated and down voted your comment.
10012818 you should write a review of it on your blog, www.creedthoughts.gov.www/creedthoughts.
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You are right I should make a blog post about it. Oh that link did no work.
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Yes it was. Huns was what the Uk called Germans due to a speech during the Boxer Rebellion where the Kaiser said that they would be the Huns reborn to the Chinese rebels
Ouch the First World War. He is going to have massive PTSD or as it was called back then Shell Shock. I think Pinkie needs to stay far away as I think in her exuberant attitude she will trigger an episode. I hope he can bond with Fluttershy as she would be the best for such a damaged soul right now. At least for the Element Bearers.
We can see the beginnings of why they started splitting up people from the same hometown and families in conflict. Both World Wars devastated entire generations in some towns. I wonder if the Princesses will catch on to this and I wonder how they are feeling about hearing how one species is tearing itself apart. Although the sad part to all of this is that we all know it will only be getting worse in less then twenty years when we should've known better.
Why add this in the synopsis when you've also added this in the genre tags?
Nice story lad keep her goin.
Very nice, I’m excited to see more. I feel that twilight is definitely gonna make him have at least one PTSD moment like when he met celestia. Also while I’m more of a WW2 nut, I will be seeing 1917 tomorrow, so I should be more knowledgeable for the next chapter! Can’t wait!
Can't wait for the next chapter
It was worth the wait to read this, but your killin me with this waiting time! This is one of the few WIP stories I actually hope for updates.
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well here's another one. I'm not making an excuse, just had other things on my mind. I tend to write when the moment strikes. I'll make sure to speed things up. maybe listening to lo-fi at night will get me in the mood more often. 😂
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here's two, sorry for the wait once again.
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1917 is an amazing movie, I watched it actually after I made this novel too.
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thanks for the kind words, I'll make sure to speed up the wait time.
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Some people just don't read them, so I have to make sure the message gets across. Also, that people who start reading the book know clearly what it focuses on. Lastly, it's kind of my calling card now. 🤣
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One of the main reasons I started this novel. I found WW1, in particular, to be very interesting. How people were so pro-war before and how minds quickly changed. I plan on maybe doing a WW2 novel after this one, we will see.
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I'm my own editor, shhh, don't tell anyone okay
I honestly want the Main 6 and Celestia to go in his dream and see there horror. good job on the story
Honestly, the way this story writes out PTSD is honestly amazing. For a moment you're reading a description about a hallway and the next you're back in the trenches. It's amazing.
Unless Twilight had property transferred via a legal proceeding or died dismay would be a better fit in this sentence.
La historia a progresado de una manera muy interesante, aunque me molesta un poco de que a mi parecer se deshumanicen a los Alemanes.
Long live the Kaiserreich!!!
Even though, WWI for me was just a waste of everything, it destroyed Europe and it did not contribute anything, may God rest the souls of those soldiers in peace, both from the Entente and the Central Powers.
As Equestria has had nearly 1000 years of peace I don't think they can understand just why humans can fight at the drop of a hat. We have been at war with ourselves since we first came out of the trees. I think Celestia and Luna just cannot comprehend why we fight and why some of us would gladly sigh up.
You are doing a wonderful job of writing your scenes where the world phases between Equestria and the trenches and back.
Just a few editing suggestions
boot camp for luna
I still say she will freeze in the dream
Uhh I think ya meant cant* keep up
I think the pic looks like a pit droid from Star wars vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/starwars/images/8/86/DUM-pitdroid_negtd.jpg/revision/latest/scale-to-width-down/499?cb=20071012163057
A very nice story, ya just need an editor.
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Agreed