La historia a progresado de una manera muy interesante, aunque me molesta un poco de que a mi parecer se deshumanicen a los Alemanes.

Long live the Kaiserreich!!!

Even though, WWI for me was just a waste of everything, it destroyed Europe and it did not contribute anything, may God rest the souls of those soldiers in peace, both from the Entente and the Central Powers.

As Equestria has had nearly 1000 years of peace I don't think they can understand just why humans can fight at the drop of a hat. We have been at war with ourselves since we first came out of the trees. I think Celestia and Luna just cannot comprehend why we fight and why some of us would gladly sigh up.

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Scooping up all the hair, I placed it in the trash before going back to wash my hands and face. Looking back in the mirror I saw my ma and pa waving as I walked upon the gangplank towards the ship.

I waved back as the horn blew. Keeping my steady pace I looked up towards the massive stack. ‘ This is it, there was no turning back now.’ I told myself, the knots from the excitement of going to war started to appear in my stomach as I looked up.

I nodded, “fire when ready ,” I commanded.