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Midknight_Stardust


Weaver of stories of action, drama, love, sex and a loyal knight of the Sunset Empire! Hail to the phoenix empress! Sunlight & Sundagio are # 1

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Oh my. This will be interesting. :twilightblush:

Though little suggestion from me, I uh... I don't want you to get in trouble, but I think you might wanna hide that picture a bit, it falls into more questionable, and while it's not overly explicit, I just don't want you getting in trouble with the mods. :twilightblush:

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Theres no nipple showing and their privates are covered. Literally nothing wrong with the picture so until someone actually says something it's staying as is

Comment posted by Princess Platinum Blonde deleted Nov 14th, 2019

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Oh trust me Twilight is gonna have a FIELD DAY with these two and so is Fluttershy ;D

Comment posted by Princess Platinum Blonde deleted Nov 14th, 2019

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Alright, I was just saying, that's all. Not trying to tell you to take it down, I just didn't want you getting in trouble, that's all.:twilightblush:

Either way, I will be interested in seeing some more. :raritywink:

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Bad in the sense that they'll be bad up till the point where they get broken by Twilight and Shy(possibly others too but why spoil the surprise)

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Oh no its fine I understand but yeah I know the rules and know what can be shown and what can't so I should be alright in that regard

Comment posted by Princess Platinum Blonde deleted Nov 14th, 2019

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Depends on your definition. Bullies are bad, they will be picking on, making fun of and humiliating Fluttershy for a portion of the next chapter. Of course I am gonna take time to show how 'bad' they are and besides they aren't even actually legit bad they are just acting for Fluttershy's sake. It's porn logic, it's not supposed to make sense

Comment posted by Princess Platinum Blonde deleted Nov 14th, 2019

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Trust me. You will GET bad girl Sunset. Just not in the traditional 'villain' bad girl sense. This story isn't meant to be a grand revenge tale of Fluttershy vs evil Sunset. Sunset is mainly just gonna be acting like a prissy stuck up highschool cunt who thinks she's better than everyone else...so basically part 1 Sunset just not you know...evil

Comment posted by Princess Platinum Blonde deleted Nov 14th, 2019

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-_- if you haven't read it why bother commenting.

Comment posted by Princess Platinum Blonde deleted Nov 14th, 2019

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Because that's fucking stupid and makes no sense -_-

Comment posted by Princess Platinum Blonde deleted Nov 14th, 2019

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if you're gonna be an asshole then leave and use proper grammar and fucking English unless it isn't your main language cause you sound illiterate as Hell

Hmmm. This holds promise, but I currently have a backlog of clop I need to get through. I'll track it though!

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Apperciate the comment and any feedback ^_^

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Awww, and here I was hoping to read someone being stupid.

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yeah nah I have no patience for some dumbass troll trying to make me feel bad for making this story cause they don't understand smut logic and cant type a decent sentence to save their fucking life

Well now, this is interesting. A bunch of roleplay by the girls to satisfy a bunch of kinks? Should be entertaining.

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Just some good ole fashion smut fun with magical girls. Fun times all around ;D And Fluttershy getting some VERY well deserved pay back. Who knows, they might not be the only ones having a fun time on CPA campus

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Really now? Well, we'll just have to see what happens next.

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Its gonna be fun writing this cause there are gonna be a couple scenes between characters until it all ends up in detention.

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How dominating should we expect Fluttershy to be? Can't wait to see what she does to Sunset.

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Expect Shy to get fed up with Sunset's shit and get a little...batty:raritywink:

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Yyyyyeeeeeeeeesssssssssss!

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Oh yeah I am going there and its gonna be HOT lmao

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And she is gonna fuck Sunset batty...batty I say!

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You know, you could do a call back to the Equestria girls short where she dresses up in that goth outfit maybe she can bring along that staff of hers and use it to tease them. like say rubbing the staff between their legs and that kind of stuff.

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Oh now that I did not think of lol. I am planning on making Sunset and the dazzlings as the main 'bad guys' of all this. Like Sunset and the Dazzlings are working together in a frienemy sort of way but Sunset and Adagio are the ringleaders cause of course they are

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It would actually be pretty interesting to have Fluttershy bring out a dominant seductive side. As for a way to bring the staff in on it, it could have been kept in Twilights locker it could even be stored in the prop area in the school theater.

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I am totally gonna keep that in mind. It's a shame I had to turn off rating for this story cause of some fucking troll but whatever

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That's okay it's going to be going in my favorites list anyway.

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Thanks lol. Feel free to check out my other stuff if you haven't already. Got another story I am working on along side this one. That's all about Adagio x Rarity

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I've been reading your stuff for a while. In fact I'm following you as well.

PS I'm also reading the Rarity story.

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Awesome. This new story I am writing is gonna be a full on romance night for Rarity and Adagio and I cannot wait to finish it lol. So far 4500 words in

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Rarity happens to be my third favorite of the mane 6. Number two is Twilight number one is Fluttershy.

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I will have to think of a good Shy story to write besides this one then lol

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turned rating back on. Lets see how this goes now lol. I dunno what triggered so many people about this story. Its like they've never seen smut on here before and it isn't like I am trying to be super deep or anything with the plot and who goes out of there way to just downvote bomb someone like that you know?

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Have a like. Those who downvoted suck.

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Id rather someone tell me what they legit didn't like rather than just downvote and leave. Those kinda people are for real petty as fuck

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So can you tell me what derpibooru pic this is? I’d like to see the full picture. No need to link it, just give the number please

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