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Midknight_Stardust


Weaver of stories of action, drama, love, sex and a loyal knight of the Sunset Empire! Hail to the phoenix empress! Sunlight & Sundagio are # 1

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"Anyway I'll see you later girls!" Sunset said heading out of the room and towards her final class period of the day which was creative writing. As she left the room Pinkie and Sci-Twi were still left along with Fluttershy and Rainbow who were about to leave right after Sunset but before Rainbow left she turned to Sci-Twi and said.

Creative writing? I need that class!

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It was so much fun to take when I was in school lol

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I don't think I have a class like that in my school. Lol

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I don't think it's a widely taught class anymore which is sad

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Thanks for taking an interest in the story. Next chapter should be up today if I get the right mood to write when I get home

JWR

I'm intrigued. I look forward to seeing the next chapter later today.

It was from that moment on that Sunset would consider always wearing gloves before touching any of her friends.

Nice line right there.

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ha honestly i didnt know how else to end the chapter

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Is this set in the same universe as "Here Kitty Kitty!"?

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Eeeyup I just forgot to tag it cause im a forgetful dumbass xD

Really really REALLY hope Sunset and sci Twi get together! But i wouldn't mind say a bit of MoonDancer with Sci twi for a ..Nerd Sandwich!:rainbowwild:

JWR

I like how you chose to describe the sex. It's erotic, but not smutty. You were detailed, but it still felt romantic. I'm curious to see where it goes.
(BTW, this is the only chapter with smut, right?)

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Yes this is the only smut chapter. The sequel will go more into Sci-Twi and Sunset's side things

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Glad your enjoying it. One more chapter for this story today and then it's done but there will be more shipping involving them for sure

JWR

Is it wrong that I see this as headcanon, as in, this happened or will happen at some point in their relationship?

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Haha not at all. I could see this going down to. Perhaps not exactly this way but it could happen

"Yeah I bet" Sunset said blushing over to the side as she watched them finished their practice having been pretty reserved the entire time.

OH GOD!!

Currently the room was occupied by five of the rainbooms and two of its members:

I think there is a "missing" missing somewhere there.

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thanks for pointing that out. missed that in editing

I'd love to see a sequel where they deal with Rarity's mother.

Anyway, amazing story!

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Oh there will be trust me. As it is stated Buttercup aka Pear Butter is alive but remarried to Cherry Jubilee in recent years much to the distain of Rariy's mom who was is REALLY bitter over her husband leaving her.

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It's gonna be dramatic as fuck.

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Who doesn't love drama? XD

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Exactly. Oh and things will get steamy. Like...really steamy.

There's a bit too many run-on sentences, could do with a bit of editing. Still it's an amazing story!

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I am actually working on editing it. I just need some time. Thanks for liking the story though. Means a lot ^_^ Every comment helps to give me motive to improve

This was a fun story! Would love to see more. :twilightsmile:

Okay, Sweetie Belle x Applebloom spinoff when? 🤣

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If more people ask for that? I shall work on it ;D Trying to expand my shipping library.

I just got inspired for a story thanks to your Rainbow Dash being such a jerkwad. :rainbowlaugh: I loved this story. Really funny but not too overbaord. It's a nice balance of comedy and romance. :raritystarry:

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Thank you ^.^ Hahah and yeah Rainbow never knows when to shut up sometimes

Hey!

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That's what makes her so great!

They should put Dash's lovelife on blast, she seems so interested in everyone else's.

It was a normal day at Canterlot High School and all was going as normal.

I mean. Yeah. Y'know. that's a sentence.

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Not sure what your point is but ok 🤔😅

I would like to know if you will continue with the previous one? to see how they got to know each other better 😏
by the way I think it's great that you put pinkie as AJ's cousin very few put her in the eg version and I think it's cute 💜

PS: I'm new to fandom and I just wanted to see it out of pure curiosity some eg fanart and I came across the cover of this fic and it was like 😮 but after seeing the eg specials I liked the shipp 👍 😍

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Work has been making it hard to find motive to write but I do plan to continue

11642397oh wonderful worth the wait ;)

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