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The Wife of the Old Draconequus - misskoifishpony



The legend of how the rare Sleigh Beggy became the wife of the mage that is neither fae nor human

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What Would A Mother Not Do For Her Child?

“Some old wounds never truly heal, and bleed again at the slightest word.”

George R.R. Martin, Game of Thrones (A Song of Ice and Fire, #1)

What Would A Mother Not Do For Her Child?

“Abacus Cinch speaking.”

Echoed Abacus Cinch’s voice slightly in the silent, ominous, nightshade home study. Her voice muffled through the tiny speakers of her royal purple laptop.

The moonlight and pitch black sky shining from the windows complimented the darkly lit office so well. Such light even gave glimmer and shine to the school principal’s glasses in the midst of this lightless void. While the artificial, bright screen of her laptop shined upon the two mysterious yet well dressed gentlemen by her office’s doorway. The light gave prominent attention to the dark sunglasses they wore, the deep black color of their suits and ties, and the stern expressions on their faces.

While their attention was focused on the recording, Abacus subtly shifted her gaze to the open folder that she hid behind her laptop. In the open folder was a document titled, “Last Will & Testament of Curta Cinch”.

No matter how much she told herself not to read it, her eyes couldn’t help but do so. She knew this document like the back of her hand. The number of times she’d read it were simply incalculable, having thoroughly memorized it to the point she could recite it perfectly. She told herself not to look for it, yet she did it anyway.

To Abacus Cinch.” Later down the document read, “I devise and bequeath guardianship of Fluttershy Cinch’s trust until she has reached the age of eighteen.

Trust.

Abacus’s mind recalled this term clearly from the definition section of this document. And according to this short will, “trust” means Curta Cinch’s entire estate and property, real as well as personal.

And knowing that information as she did, forced her tohid her gritted teeth behind her closed frown. Her hand subconsciously commanded her hands into tight, balled fists.

This Will… this unnecessarily short Will… her last written testament on this earth…. everything that her mother had… all too neatly placed within one trust alone… and that trust belonged to her.

To Fluttershy.

To her sister’s daughter.

To her sister.

To Sunf…

If only she knew all this beforehand… before taking her mother’s vile deal on the day of her sister’s funeral.

Oh please, dear,” Her inner voice hissed. “Just admit it. You would have taken the deal anyway if you knew.

Despite how unearthly and demonic this voice sounded, Abacus couldn’t help but find her own voice to match it, ignoring the somewhat concerning implications that came with such a thing.

Do you honestly have nothing better to do than to criticize me?” Abacus argued with her inner voice silently.

And you do realize that the girl is eighteen and out there in the world without you?” Her cruel inner voice responded. “Without your guidance? Spending allll that money… without a care to spare.

Suddenly, Abacus’s mind couldn’t help but punish her by presenting a memory she would rather forget. Her thoughts flashed back to when her own mother pushed her out of the house. Her younger self cried and begged, groveling shamelessly upon the ground. But, this didn’t provoke any emotion from her mother, only her signature cold yet stern look before elegantly closing the door on her face. Her younger self ran to the door, calling out her mother’s name, and struggled to open the locker door with all her strength.

She looked so tall then. Towering over her till her shadow consumed her completely. It was like looking upon a stone monolith, cold, hard and unfeeling …

Why did I…?

Abacus silently sneered in pain as she felt a quick but sharp migraine like pain in her head. Despite its short appearance in her mind, the pain of such sting lingered. The principal made a note to herself to run for her medicine cabinet as soon as this meeting was over.

“Hello?”

Abacus’s muffled voice interjected, breaking the lull of silence in the room at last. Breaking her attention away from the will…. and her thoughts. Every individual in the office brought their attention closer to the laptop, their ears lingering on that static quiet. This quiet did not last long as the fast click ended the call. Cinch reached over to the keys and stopped the recording.

She lifted her cold, narrowed leer to her guests and this prompted one of them to question, “And you believe that this call was from your niece?”

“Who else would know my personal number gentlemen? Only my daughter, my maid, and my niece have this number.”

“Any calls from this number or any other unknown number since then?” The other man in the room inquired.

“No,” said Abacus as she closed her laptop. Before she rose from her seat, she pulled out a red folder that was underneath the folder for her mother’s will. Once in her arms, she slowly directed herself towards the straight laced men.

“However, I was able to track the number to Leapdon. As to where in Leapdon,...”

She reached into the pocket of her jacket, and pulled out a written check, which she was quick to present to the two strangers.

“That’s where you gentlemen come in.”

As one of them politely reached out for the check, Abacus recoiled it back like a viper ready to strike its prey. Then, she reminded them in an icey tone, “I expect nothing but the utmost discretion, gentlemen. If any of you breach this particular element in our contact, do expect an expensive lawsuit and a ruined reputation among the aristocrats of this country and beyond. The Cinch family is well regarded globally after all. Is that understood?”

“Understood,” One of them affirmed in a deep tone, with a little bow of his head.

“We shall not fail you, Ms. Cinch,” The other affirmed right after, following in his partner’s lead by bowing his head as well. “Nor your family.”

With a murmured, unconvinced scoff under her breath, she slowly handed over the check. No matter what she said,... what matter what she did or ever did in the future,... in the end,... these men would always be loyal to her mother. Not her.

Tension of the office was soon broken when the front door to the Cinch household opened. Abacus focused heavily on the sound of bags being placed by the front door, along with the sound of steps passing by the closed office doors.

“Sunny,” Abacus commanded sternly. “Come here for a moment.”

Abacus couldn’t help but roll her eyes and groaned once she heard the faint, annoyed moan that escaped her daughter’s lips.

The doors to the office flung open due to Sunny’s careless and belligerent touch. As for the Men in Black wannabes in the room, they swiftly stepped away from the flying doors in order to avoid their blow. However, their faces showed no concern or surprise when this occurred.

As for Abacus, she was completely yet silently appalled at what she was witnessing. Sunny wore an outfit that the principal could only describe as “trashy”. Added to this, the attire was completely torn and stained to the point beyond salvation.

Her school uniform from earlier was nowhere to be found… for the third time this month. The girl’s scent absorbed all the booze, drugs, and illness that occurred at the hormone induced party from earlier. And this scent completely conquered all the air in her precious office. Sunny’s hair was a mess, her heavy makeup was smeared, and dark circles weighed down underneath her already cold yet unforgiving eyes.

Hmm, my my,” The inner voice taunted. “I wonder who she got those eyes from huh? Certainly not from her father.

Shut up, shut up, shut up,” Abacus internally fought back. After she did so, another surge of pain stuck her mind.

“You rang, Cinch?” hissed Sunny in her slightly drunk but mostly tired state, making a point to emphasize her hiss at the end.

Abacus’s attention turned towards her guests, in order to hid her frustrated yet annoyed expression from her daughter. She quickly composed herself during this turn and commanded the men in the room, “Gentlemen, could you wait outside for a moment? I would like a word with my… daughter.”

“Of course,” One of them responded, before closing the doors behind them.

Once the two were alone, Abacus’s attention returned back to Sunny. Before she could say anything, Sunny quickly interjected with, “Ugh, could you, like, do me a big favor Cinch and hurry up with this whole grounding thing? I neeeeed some sleep and I’m too tired to put up with your-.”

With a wave of her free hand, Abacus replied with, “There’s no need for that tonight. Instead, I believe I have a proposal that you will find quite… appealing.”

“It better be, Cinch.”

Abacus gave her daughter a subtle, but nasty look before walking towards her office window, “Things have become dire in terms of the case surrounding your cousin’s disappearance.”

“Do you mean the case surrounding my cousin running away from you for good, and thus making the best decision of her life?” Sunny commented with a smirk. “You know, that kind of dire. Yeah, I think I’ve heard.”

“Hold your tongue,” Abacus snarled.

“Oh c’mon! You know that I’m right,” Sunny continued, her smirk grewing with each word uttered, utterly unfazed by her mother’s wrath. She couldn’t even help but let out a drunk chuckle through her smirk.

“As I was saying,” Abacus responded, drawing back her anger and returning to her previous tone, “things have become dire when it comes to finding your cousin. The law enforcement in this town are completely useless, the mayor is an idoitic fool, and the media has been no help done to our cause.”

“Don’t you mean your cause?”

“Do. Not. Test. Me.”

“Oh I’ll stop,... as soon as you stop making it too easy for me.”

Sheesh, she’s quite clever when she’s drunk, isn’t she?” Then, Abacus mentally calmed herself with, “Just be patient, Abacus.”

“As a result,” Abacus explained further. “I had no choice but resort to The Cinch Security Force.”

“I thought those guys looked familiar. Haven’t seen them since Aunt Sunflower’s-”

Abacus whipped around furiously at the mention of her sister’s name. She gave her daughter a fiery look and scolded, “I told you to never mention that name in this house!”

“Why?! Because only you, and you alone are allowed to say her name?! Wow, once again Cinch, you never fail to be hypocritical! Not to mention cruel!”

“One more smart remark out of you and I’ll shred this!”

Abacus aggressively presented the red folder, unconsciously going against the perfect plan she had laid out in her head beforehand.

Sunny’s eyes fluttered in surprise at such a presentation. However, such shock didn’t last long and her tired yet bored expression returned, “Uh, what’s that?”

Abacus’s gaze widened as she realized what she had just done. What her temper and impatience had done. She quickly regained her posture and demeanor. Then, she took a step back from Sunny and answered in a fake casual tone, “Oh this? It’s nothing much. Just the ticket to an early departure from this household.”

“You mean, I don’t have to wait until I get into college to move out?”

“That is correct.”

“Pfft! I don’t believe you. There’s no way that you, of all people, would propose something like that in a million years!”

Then again,” Sunny then thought to herself, somehow maintaining her clarity of mind. “She is desperate.

“You’re right, Sunny,” Abacus responded honestly, “I wouldn’t. Which is why I need you to do something for me in return.”

“Ah, there is. The strings. I should have known,” Then, the young teenager groaned. “Alright Cinch, what is it that you need me to do?”

“I need you to accompany The Security Force and find Fluttershy.”

“What?!” Sunny exclaimed, any sense of alcohol induced lethargy immediately leaving her. “You’ve got to be kidding me! There’s no way that I do that! I knew you were desperate Cinch, but I didn’t know that you were crazy too!”

With one eyebrow lifted, Abacus questioned, “Are you saying that you’re refusing my offer?”

“That’s exactly what I’m saying, Cinch.”

“That’s too bad, my dear daughter.”

“I told you to never call me that,” Sunny mumbled angrily.

But Abacus ignored this mumble and explained further, “I was rather hoping to give a little extra reward to go along with your new ticket to freedom. Maybe,... perhaps,... oh I don’t know,... the name of your biological father?”

Sunny’s eyes slowly widened at the mention of her father and her mouth fell slightly in shock. Abacus had just witnessed something truly rare from her rebellious daughter: silence.

The older woman waited patiently for her child’s response in the darkness. She quietly absorbed all the distress and stupor slowly spreading across Sunny’s face and body. For a moment, Abacus could see Sunny tremble a little.

“Wha… What?” Sunny stuttered in disbelief softly, “What did you… just say?”

“You can even have his address if you wish. But, based on your current interest in this conversation, I can see that you have no inkling to visit and converse with him. So, I’ll just-”

“NO! WAIT!” Sunny emotionally called out, while desperately reaching out to her mother.

Abacus stopped instantly at her daughter’s plea, halting her journey to her desk. Abacus smirked with great satisfaction before turning around to face Sunny. The smirk did not last long and her composed, resting expression returned.

“There’s no need to shout, daughter,” Abacus scolded insincerely, “If you’ve changed your mind, you could have just calmly said so.”

“B-Before I accept your deal,” Sunny stuttered in horror along with a bit of disgust in herself for being brought to begging. “I want to know one thing.”

“Go on,” said Abacus, giving her the permission to proceed with her question.

“How long… how long have you known?”

“About his location? Oh just recently, I assure you,” Abacus lied. “I was going to tell you sooner, but given how… ‘busy’… your schedule has been, I haven’t had the chance to tell you.”

“You… you were?”

“But of course,” Abacus lied once more. “He is your father, you have every right to this information… that is… if you behave and do as I say.”

Sunny trembled once more and tore her gaze away from her mother’s eyes in order to process everything that was going on.

The more time she spent in this room with her, the more air she felt leaving her body. It was suffocating. She felt like the walls were caving in slowly all around her. This office was getting smaller and smaller by the minute. Sunny was feeling everything all at once. Hope, anger, sadness, guilt, confusion, greed, selflessness, and maybe happiness? It was hard to tell.

After so many years of being emotionally numb,... Sunny’s mind and body didn’t know how to respond to this fast rush of emotions. She didn’t know if she could make such a decision right now. All of her common sense and logic was leaving her. But her mother gave her no time to properly think things through.

“So,” said Abacus, presenting the red folder in front of Sunny once more. “Do we have a deal, my dearest?”

Sunny lifted her bewildered and shaky gaze just high enough to see the red folder. She couldn’t see her mother’s patient yet calculating gaze, too busy drowning in her own emotions.

Sunny’s hands acted on her own, shakily reaching towards the folder. Without reflecting upon what her hands were actually doing, she grabbed it. Abacus released the folder with ease.

As Sunny defenseless stared down at the folder, with fear and hope, Abacus directed back towards her desk.

“Thank you so much for assisting The Security Force on this matter, Sunny. They shall be most appreciative for all your help. Oh speaking of, could you be a dear and let them back in? There are some details that need to be ironed out before the three of you can venture out and find your cousin.”

Before Sunny could respond or move, the office doors behind her opened. The two men in suits welcomed themselves back in. As they walked past her, her mother quickly shifted her attention towards her guests.

Sunny had lost all sense of what to do. She could feel the tension of her building emotions inside her body as she stared at the scene before her. Her feet slowly and hesitantly moved her backwards without her even realizing it. Before Sunny could question anything, she was out of the office and ran up the staircase.

As for Abacus Cinch and the Security Force, none of them were aware of the medium sized fae sitting on Abacus’s shoulder.

The fae was a white Macaque-like creature. A fuzzy, seemingly cute ape from afar; but, if you glanced at it carefully, you can see that the seemingly soft fur was actually prickly and sharp. There was a black undertone to its white fur that covered the creature’s face instead of the white fur. Adding to its menacing appearance were the dagger like claws on its hands and feet.

These hands were petting and stroking Abacus’s slightly frizzed, bunned up hair. Fangs subtly protrude from it’s tiny mouth. It’s thin lips were closing to Abacus’s ears, moving up and down in a hushed manner. A mouth that was easily overshadowed by its huge, glowing, aye aye like eyes. The glow from these eyes highlighted the heavy bangs that hang under Abacus’s cold stare.


Meanwhile, Mrs. Cake had just pulled out a fresh, warm, dry load of laundry and carried it to Sunny’s room. As she folded the heavenly scented clothes upon Sunny’s bed, she couldn’t help but think about her children and her husband waiting for her back home. Making the long day’s of work all worth it. Just to kiss her babies good night. Just hop into a warm bed with her husband. Mrs. Cake let out a tired yet soft smile instinctively at such thoughts.

Suddenly, Mrs. Cake jumped at the sound of the bedroom doors swinging wide open and hitting the bedroom walls behind them. The maid spun around as fast as she could, and was met with the instant collision with Sunny.

“M-Miss Sunny?! What’s going-”

Before she could finish her question, Sunny answered by wrapping her arms around Mrs. Cake and sobbing into the understanding woman’s shoulder. Sunny dropped the red folder upon the floor as she tightened her hold on Mrs. Cake.

Mrs. Cake’s surprised and tense body relaxed as she returned Sunny’s hug.

“There, there,” Mrs. Cake whispered in a comforting tone, “I’m here, dear. I’m here.”

Author's Note:

Miss Koi does not own or have any rights to MLP, Equestria Girls, or The Ancient Magus Bride (this includes characters, story/plot, or anything relating to that sort).

All my thanks to The Fan Without a Face for editing this chapter & for being the story editor for "The Wife of the Old Draconequus"

If you're a fanfic writer in need of a great story editor, please go check out editing services page on their profile page: https://www.fimfiction.net/user/224464/The+Fan+Without+a+Face

Thank you once again for reading this chapter and for your ever continued support of this story <3 Out of the three new chapters, this was the chapter that produced the writer's block for me. But luckily, I came across this song and it's very name became the name for this chapter & easily guided me through this chapter

This song not only perfectly fits yet perfectly not fit this chapter in the best way possible, it perfectly fits yet not fit the relationships going on between Cinch & Sunny, Cinch & Fluttershy, Fluttershy and her mother, Cinch & Sunflower and their mother, and the harmful legacy/continuous cycle carried on from the Cinch family that preceded Cinch, Sunflower, Fluttershy, and Sunny. The funny thing about this song that makes it even more destined for this story and this chapter and for all the relationships is that this song is from the musical "Ever After", which I believe is the musical adaption of the movie "Ever After". For those who don't know, "Ever After" is a slightly older, non Disney and live action retelling of the fairy tale "Cinderella". AND this song is sang by Cinderella's step mother describing not only her relationship with her own daughters and Cinderella, but her journey through motherhood and possibly why she does the horrible things that she does & how she became the character we see in Cinderella. After all that, how could I not use this?!XD

I have many dreams for "The Wife Of The Old Draconequus" (like a fanfic reading or an audio book version, published hard cover book copies of it, etc.), and one of them is animatics about it^^ I would love love to see someone make an animatic about Fluttershy's and Sunny's relationship to Cinch, Cinch's and Sunflower's relationship to their mother, Fluttershy's relationship to Sunflower, and all that set to this song^^ <3 That would be amazing^^!

There will be no new chapter this week since I'm still working on Chapters 8,9,10. Once I finish Chapters 8,9,10 I will send them to my wonderful editor. And once properly edited, then I will post them in a weekly fashion:) I promise to try to not make you guys wait too long for Chapters 8,9,10 <3

Comments ( 18 )

My god this chapter was really intense and I LOVE it.

I have to say that I feel bad For sunny flare and Mrs cake and that I Hate cinch but understand her reasons. But I seriously hope that fluttershy NEVER go back with her and have a happy life.

I really enjoy reading this because you did a good job projectine that song into this and even though I'm a little sad because you're not posting this week I understand why.

Anyway can't wait For the arrival of the new chapter whenever you post it.

This was...intense to read. Very emotional.

We get a look into how deep the abuse in the Cinch household goes...Abacus Cinch is still terrible, but she was treated terribly by her own mother...and is maybe being influenced by that fae? And we see that Sunny has just as bad of a relationship with Abacus as Fluttershy does. The pain in this family seems to run very deep...

And ooooh, it'll be interesting to see what happens as the Security Force and Sunny follow Fluttershy's trail...I can't wait to see what happens if or when they find her and Discord.

A good read! I'm looking forward to the chapters ahead!

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My god this chapter was really intense and I LOVE it.

Haha lol so glad that you loved how emotionally intense chapter wasXD ^^

that I Hate cinch but understand her reasons.

Daww haha good to know that my writing & this chapter were there to help you to see her reasons & understand despite hating her, that was my goal^^

I really enjoy reading this because you did a good job projectine that song into this and even though I'm a little sad because you're not posting this week I understand why.

Anyway can't wait For the arrival of the new chapter whenever you post it.

Yay^^! I'm so happy to know that I was able to successfully master the tone of the song into this chapter^^! Thank you so much for understanding my reason for not posting next week, for always reading each chapter, for always looking forward to the next chapter, and for always leaving your thoughts in the comments:) <3

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This was...intense to read. Very emotional.

Haha lol that's so far that's the group reaction to this chapter so farXD That was certainly one of my goals for this chapter, and glad I was able to succeed on that front better than I thought I wouldXD

and is maybe being influenced by that fae?

All that I can say about that fae and it's influence is that it wasn't there while Fluttershy was in the Cinch Household, it showed up after Fluttershy left. So the fae had no hand in how Cinch treats Fluttershy and Sunny. The fae is influencing Cinch, you are correct, but it does not affect how she treats others but rather how she treats and views herself. That's all that I can say;)

The pain in this family seems to run very deep...

Oooooohhh yeeeaaah, very deep. Like generations upon generations deep. At century at least deep.

And ooooh, it'll be interesting to see what happens as the Security Force and Sunny follow Fluttershy's trail...I can't wait to see what happens if or when they find her and Discord.

A good read! I'm looking forward to the chapters ahead!

So glad that you're looking forward to see what will happen next in this particular story thread and that you're just looking forward overall to what will happen next^^ Thank you as always for reading, supporting, and commenting/leaving your thoughts on each chapter:) <3

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It's nice to see this updating again!

Thank you as always for reading, supporting, and commenting/leaving your thoughts on each chapter of this story^^

Anyways, love this chapters title Hidden in Plain Sight. The format is fitting considering there's Discord and the title matches how Fluttershy is disguised as a fae from other fae here. A trick that Discord has done before on Capper a few chapters ago.

Daww I'm so glad that you loved this chapter and it's title and how the title was carried out through Discord's spell on Fluttershy and how that connects back to Discord's spell on Capper chapters ago^^ That kind of appreciation of readers just warms my <3

Also there's the fact that from Discord's pov, he mentions that he himself is unsure why be took Fluttershy specifically in when it blatantly obvious. Ship. Ship. Ship.

Here, let me help you with your little chant;) Ship! Ship! Ship!

Love the cameo of Trixie and her interactions with Discord reminds me of the duo's interaction in To Where and Back Again.

Oh good, I'm sure that you loved Trixie in this chapter (cause there's more Trixie to come) and her interactions with Discord (their interaction was a lot fun to write^^!) :) Thank you for such flattery to my writing by comparing it to a canon episode of the show^^ <3

Then there's the moment with Fluttershy on the phone. You captured the scene perfectly. I'm a type of reader that imagines myself from the protagonist's pov when reading and I could feel the every moment of tension/terror Fluttershy felt when she heard Cinch's voice. I wouldn't want anyone to suffer like what Flutters here has gone through. Astounding writing

Dawwww thank yooooouuuu :pinkiesad2::pinkiehappy::heart: I'm so glad that you enjoyed this part cause you have no idea how much time I dedicated to this part of the chapterXD Lol!

Also, I can't help but think that the crew that is sent in Cadance place is the rest of the mane six as mages. Would be funny if Fluttershy recognises SciTwi from school though.

I was wondering if people were curious about this part of Cadence's conversation with the possum^^ Keep on theorizing and have fun!

As for the next chapter, I wonder what is Sunburst's relation to Discord. And also I hope you are going to show Capper again. (Maybe using that suggestion I mentioned a while back of Discord forcing Capper to dance to his signature song)

Well, there's only one way to find out;) And that is the two upcoming chapters now available to you^^ I can't wait to see your reaction to "The Highest Leaves Of The Barest Fruit Trees" & "What Would A Mother Not Do For Her Child":)!

How very interesting...

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Interesting in a good ya or bad way? Hopefully interesting in a good wayXD Lol!

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Interesting in a good way...as is the usual with your stories. :)

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Oh good yay^^! Also Daww thank you, I appreciate that<3 Which chapter are you on? Did you just finish The Prologue aka the first chapter or are you further than that? Also, have seen the anime The Ancient Magus Bride and/or read it’s manga version?:)

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Further and while I've read some of the manga, I haven't gotten around to watching the anime. I have to say though, I love how creative you are with the fae and such.

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Which chapter did you just finish or currently on when it comes to my story?:) How far along are you in the manga aka which volume are you on?:) If you love the manga, then I think you'll love the anime^^ I personally started with the anime then manga, but from my AMB friends who started with the manga and into the anime, they said that they also loved the anime version^^ I'm so glad you like how I use the fae/magical MLP creatures in this story:) I give my ALL when it comes to creativity for this story and when handling the magic & fae because AMB just gave it their ALL when it comes to magic and fae

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I just finished the current chapter. As for the manga, I stopped at some point during the sixth I believe. I'm more of a novel reader and have a lot on my reading list, including the works of Michael Moorcock. And as far as I can tell, you always give it your all when you write. I mean that.

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Oh my gosh, you've already read all the chapters for this story?!XD Oh wow, thank you so much for reading this story, leaving a comment, and enjoying^^ I cannot tell you how much I appreciate it^^ I'll try to not make you guys wait long for the next updateXD Understandable why you're taking a break from the manga for awhile, good luck on finishing your reading list my dude:) But I still recommend the rest of the manga series cause it only gets better and better with each new volumeXD Lol! If you need more of a novel format yet it's still AMB, I highly highly recommend the two Ancient Magus Bride light novels:
Golden Yarn (https://www.amazon.com/Ancient-Magus-Bride-Golden-Light/dp/1626929750/ref=sr_1_1?dchild=1&keywords=ancient+magus+bride+light+novel&qid=1607998173&sr=8-1)
Silver Yarn (https://www.amazon.com/Ancient-Magus-Bride-Silver-Light/dp/1642750018/ref=sr_1_2?dchild=1&keywords=ancient+magus+bride+light+novel&qid=1607998173&sr=8-2)

And as far as I can tell, you always give it your all when you write. I mean that.

Dawww why thank you:twilightblush:

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Yeah, I'm a speed-reader. Great but as excited as I am, there's no need to rush. Take as much time as you need. And you're very welcome! :scootangel:

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You are, you a speedy speed reader^^! Lol^^ Daww thank you so much for your patience & for all your encouragement, I cannot tell you how much I appreciate it^^

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You're welcome! You deserve it!

About bloody time I finished reading these.
And holy crap was this an emotional ride.
I loved these chapters, I especially loved the built relationship of Fluttershy and Discord. While we haven’t seen much yet out of them, we are definitely seeing some progress.

I honestly cannot wait for the moment Fluttershy to be confronted but this security force and Sunny, and as we know the story, cause there’s so much character conflict.

If Fluttershy chooses to stay with Discord, than Sunny will never get to see her father. This is some serious drama and I’m in love with this story. I cannot wait to see it through and I’ll be here reading

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About bloody time I finished reading these.

Haha lol there's no worries or rush to read these chapters, these chapters are meant to be enjoyed at one's own pace ^^

And holy crap was this an emotional ride.

Haha lol that seems to be everyone's reactions to these three new chapters, especially the chapter "What Would A Mother Not Do For Her Child?"XD

I loved these chapters, I especially loved the built relationship of Fluttershy and Discord. While we haven’t seen much yet out of them, we are definitely seeing some progress.

Oh good, so glad that you loved these chapters & the relationship established so far for Fluttershy & Discord^^ <3 Don't worry, we're going to see more of them and their relationship;) And this relationship will only continue to grow from here;) That's all that I can say;) Lol!

I honestly cannot wait for the moment Fluttershy to be confronted but this security force and Sunny, and as we know the story, cause there’s so much character conflict.

Oh good cause we're going to see more of Security Force & Sunny;) Again, that's all that I can say;) LolXD

If Fluttershy chooses to stay with Discord, than Sunny will never get to see her father. This is some serious drama and I’m in love with this story. I cannot wait to see it through and I’ll be here reading

DAWWWW THANK YOU <3! Thank you so much for reading this story & for always supporting it/commenting it on it, I cannot tell you how much I appreciate this kind of praise & love & support <3

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