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Yeah, like that rare breed of horse that reproduces with their knees.
9751723
A kneefukarian. Very rare.
Sweetie belle: Can you rut me?
Big mac: I'll consider it
CMC: Cutie mark Crusader underage fuckbuddies, yeah!
Big mac and Sweetie Belle: Used fuck!
My conscience:
It's very effective
9751976
They have their cutie marks.
So they are legal.
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Macintosh speaking a lot? You sick fuck we can't have this nasty stuff on this website. SHAME I SAY GO SIT IN A CORNER I SHALL NOT PARTAKE IN THIS FILTH.
Ay ay ay
It should be "presence".
You aren't supposed to start a new paragraph when it's the same character talking. It makes it difficult to figure out who is talking since a new paragraph is supposed to indicate a different character speaking. As it is, you often can't tell who said what until several lines of dialogue later.
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I'm all for constructive criticism but I don't see what you are talking about.
9757888
A new paragraph indicates a new speaker, for example this:
Makes it look like Apple Bloom is saying "Now now..." at first. It should be written like this:
So there is no confusion at who is speaking.
An exception is when the dialogue is interrupted with narration that is multiple paragraphs. In that case the subject of the narration should be the character that is speaking in the next paragraph. So taking that whole string of Mac's dialogue should go from this:
to something like this:
If youre going to change a characters genitals, like yo did with scoots, you really should mention it in your fic, not just your spolered synopsis. You should also change the character focused on when you change the paragraph, because it got really confusin a few times.
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Except the first chapet mentions they dont in this fic. Big MC is wondering if this is one of the CMC Mark attempts.
9767052 True.
I mean in the general 'current' sense, that they have their marks.
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Yeah. They're too grown up now. Good thing we got new blank-flanks!
I'm pretty deviant, but this may be too much for me.
surprise futaloo is best futaloo
that was hott