Well done. This was a seamless, easy, searing hot read.
Favorite moment was when Scootaloo was down low with tail high looking at the games. Stunning visual.

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Thanks! ^.^ It’s always great to know what parts people liked the most! That lets me know to do that kind of thing more in the future!

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Awesome story

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Sequel?

Ho boah.

I hope to god you're planning a sequel

all three holes filled (including anal)

And here I thought they were fucking her in the ear.

Masterpiece written by a most marvelous Author. The build up was awe inspiring and the action was breath robbing.

A good story for everyones favorit Bookshelf

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So far not likely ... unless it’s commissioned again.

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???

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Nah, that’s that other story that was in the feature box lately. What was it called, ‘mental stimulation’ or something like that?

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Thanks! ^.^

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My apologies.

That's my retarded way of saying 'Damn, that's really good' when I'm incapable of words and I'm only able to make sounds. You have a clean, concise, and evocative prose that I admire.
~ Yr. Pal, B

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^.^ I kind of expected as much, but I wasn’t sure.

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I think it was called
Once You Go Black, You Go Deaf

Man, I hope to have some spare money to commission ya one day, you do some amazing shit.

Nicely done my dude, nicely done.

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Patreon supporters get discounts!
But even with all the money in the world, my waiting list is obscenely long.
Speaking of which, I should probably get back to work on that...

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Perhaps one day I'll become a Patreon, when I can afford the $50 slot for that sweet 90% discount
lul

Like all your storys this was fucking epic

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I try. ^.^ What’s your favorite part?

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Yeah, keeping it fresh through a long scene like that is one of the hardest parts!

OMG, sequel please! This was great

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I usually don’t do sequels for commissions unless it’s requested by Patreon or another commission...

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Aww, ok. There's definitely room for one with the other crusaders, but thanks anyways!

Dude, that hit all the kinks. The way you described her arousal, and the way that it all came together in the end. Top notch.

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Thanks! ^.^ Though I’m sure I could come up with a few kinks that aren’t in this story! But that’s just because I’m a professional.

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Pfff, I meant like all *my* kinks. But yeah, you are an idol to aspire to. Just uh, don't expect me to suck your dick lol.

I'm not Scootaloo...

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Just uh, don't expect me to suck your dick lol.

Damn ... I’m in the wrong line of work.

Can't wait for the sequel.

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Well, yes, you literally can’t. Because so far, there’s no plan for a sequel to be coming...

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That's a shame, would have loved to have Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle join in on the fun.

Well now that was really something.
You really teased us over and over again with the pacing of the chapter. Writing such a lengthy clop and keeping it feeling fresh and exciting is very impressive.
The visual aspect was so well done I almost felt like I was Scoots throughout the whole experience after the first few chapters.

chapter 2 is 10/10. overall story is a 9.75/10 with a golden seal of approval.

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overall story is a 9.75/10 with a golden seal of approval.

Am I wrong for wanting to know what that missing 0.25 is for?
I’m always looking for ways to improve, and to me, that looks like room for improvement!

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Well I would say it not as impactful as some other work of yours. Doesn't mean it's not good but it's missing something to push it into the great bar. However you I'm all about the inner meaning of a story and how they feel even after the story ends. Everything is just kinda to the point . Scootaloo meets her ideals and in a moment of excitement she lets them have a night of passion with them. Clear cut straight to the point. It was a clear case of infatuated with them got the best of her.

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Well, at least not bad, though. ^.^

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It's never bad lol

Absolutely love it! Cute and fluffy; sweet and sensual. Good job!

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Cute and fluffy; sweet and sensual.

Heh, and those are hard adjectives to earn in a story about a filly getting gang-banged!

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Speaks to the quality! :D

I hope someone commissions a sequel.~ This was great.~

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~ This was great.~

Thanks! ^.^ What’s your favorite part?

I hope someone commissions a sequel.

Me too!
You could always ... be the change you want to see in the world...

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We'll see how this month's bills go :P

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My favorite part. I'd say either the moment when someone Points out Scoots gave the wrong birth date for the age she came up with. (honestly I sometimes forget how old I am and have to do that math)

And the scene where Scoots tells her friends she got them invited to to meet the band next time they have a show, and then asked what the hell she did to get them to do that.

Of course I also liked the sex :P It was fun seeing Scoots almost instantly get addicted to the sex

I'd say this is your magnum-opus.

It's actually amazing.

I'm assuming based on the subtext that Star is going to have a serious relationship with Scootaloo but allows the others to join in as well.

Wonder who will take a shine to the other 2?

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Huh ... and here I thought my Opus would be the Sex Ed series or the Precious Little series...

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Well... we'll see in time.

Speaking of replying late, I did read this one too, and only just realised after speaking to you on the other fanfic you wrote this one too, I don't post comments too often but after seeing how responsive to the other fic I thought i'd give ya my thoughts.

Again I really liked this one, but one thing I had on my mind was I thought it would of been nice to see a scene with just Scoots and Star on their own first, rather than jump right into the group sex, mostly because Scoots had a thing for Star, she admired him the most, so perhaps a chapter dedicated to them first would of been nice, slowly introduce her to the concept of adult sex for the first time with him, I would of found that a way to make it a bit more loving between them, and then after they had their own fun, either have him introduce her to the rest of the gang, or have the gang walk in on them, thus leading to the group sex then, at least for me personally I would of liked to see that, and I didn't see that this one was a commission? so what was your reasoning behind jumping straight into the group sex?

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Well, I had almost 10k works of foreplay in Chapter 1, so I wouldn’t really say I jumped right into it...
Now that you mention it, yeah, it might have been nice for her to have an intimate 1-on-1 first before going into the gangbang ... but yeah. It is what it is, and since the gangbang was where I wanted the fic to end up and it had already gone through a lot of buildup, I guess I just went for it.

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When I said it went right to the sex, I didn't include the foreplay, I was mostly referring to when the sexual activities started, minus the foreplay, and I might of meant jumping right into the group sex, think that might of not come across as I was thinking.
But yeah, it would of been nice to see, but I still liked what you did go with in the end, and hey, it left off with a opening for a sequel, so perhaps down the line Scoots could have her one on one, while the other two have their own fun with the rest of the group, and then after they come together for the big finalie, something like that is how I would imagine it. :)

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-That wasn't my fault that time though. Brandon killed me.
-No I didn't....
-YESYOUDID
-You liar!
-Ok to be fair i think one of them shot my sticky bomb.

Another great story from the great author.

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The great author, huh? That’s going to go right to my head.

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I like where your head's at!

I'd love a continuation of this, it was so deliciously detailed

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Well, the sequel is currently on my list of story ideas for my Patreon supporters, and voting is open right now.