• Published 15th Mar 2019
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The Negotiation - TheVClaw



Shortly after Thorax became the new ruler of the Changeling Kingdom, he asks Spike for some assistance in solving the conflicts between himself and his brother Pharynx. Luckily, Spike's reputation as a slut helped to make Pharynx agree to a sit-down~

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But then, uhhh… after I had dinner with Shining and Cadance, I ended up walking into a broom closet by mistake, and…”
Thorax paused for only a second before he shrugged, and finished by saying, “Well, I walked in on Spike ‘entertaining’ two of the Crystal Guards. And, uhhhh… after a little awkwardness that came from him explaining everything to me, he… kinda offered me to join in~”

Hmm, that sounds interesting.

Really love your work. The main story is actually the main reason why i created an account for this site. Although i really wish you would update the main story, i'm just glad that you're still writing new chapters as well as new side stories. Hope you have fun writing and that you have a great day. 😕 🖥 😍 👏 👍

What is Pharynx so upset about at the end? :rainbowhuh:

I'm only halfway through the first chapter, and I do really like your 'verse, but please, for the love of fuck, calm down with the italics and bolding and capslock. They're meant to be used sparingly, like pepper or cinnamon. Too much, and you end up desensitized. Trust your readers to fill in the normal cadences of a conversation based on context, and save the BOLD. ITALIC. CAPITALIZED. FOR. EMPHASIS. for when you need the literary equivalent of a nuke.

In reality, it had to have been less than two months since Pharynx and Spike last had sex

I believe you mean Thorax, not Pharynx.

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Indeed I did. I just fixed it. :)

Yes dude Spike's ass is that good. :moustache:

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Because he "surrendered"! :rainbowwild:

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