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TheVClaw


I'm a shameless neckbeard who has a knack for writing a LOT of smut. I have an Official Patreon page (Patreon.com/TheVClaw), and I also take commissions to help support myself as a freelance writer.

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By this point, I am wondering why Spike has not laid any eggs, especially with all the excessive breeding he has been getting from Ponies, Dragons, Diamond Dogs and the latest Griffins. Maybe he has already laid some and he has them hidden in a secret nest.

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Would it even be possible for a male dragon to lay eggs? I'd like to think only female dragons did that.

Although... A cuntboy Spike might be good for that...

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Oh, my!!
I can think of two ways it can happen and a scenario in one of those.

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In the land of fanfiction, all things are possible!
But a cuntboy Spike would be really awesome too.

I find it funny that this is a sequel to a story that isn't even completed yet.

"his airway became restricted by the gryphon’s chast clogging his throat"
Hmm... chast. Google says it's Russian: часть, translated: part. So grammatically it makes sense, but interesting sudden shift to Russian.

LOOK UP IN THE SKY! IS IT A BIRD, A PLANE? WHY YES IT, WHAT THE FUCK ARE YA, RETARDED? AND RIDING ON SAID PLANE IS MILD MANNERED BUZZ KILLINGTON, MUCH HATED FOR HIS COMMON SENSE, BUT IN THE NIGHT HE DONS CAPE AND COWL AND DISPENSES JUSTICE AS CAPTAIN OBVIOUS, SWORN ENEMY OF THE SAFE SPACE GANG AND CHEAPLY MADE BEARD TRIMMERS!

Okay, so, Vclaw. I'm going to be harsh here mate, but I don't hate you or this story. Please take matters in the spirit intended. So, lets get this out of the way... First off, up front, bi dude, so I can appreciate the love of a good fuck from both sides of the fence here. And I've enjoyed. And I've loved rampant slut characters in other stories (Bayonetta, Zig Zag from Sabrina, Fleetfoot from Calm WInd). As Zig said, her love of sex shouldn't have to be because of abuse, she just loves it and is in a career where she can make a living in doing it. But we also have Cloud, who...

And now let me alienate pretty much this stories fan pool: promiscuity in either gender, the two of them, is a poor quality to have in ones self. And as for the poison tree frog color braids brigade and their cuckolds, I'd like to take the diplomatic route called the Chaney Special and give a hearty and incadescent go fuck yourselves. "Taking slut back" is perhaps one of the stupidest positions any women has ever taken in the entire history of people making abject fools of oneself, and the fact that you, dear lady, think that your hormonal kudzo is granted some virtue where Chad is exhibiting typical male behavior is dazzling in the intricate denseness of its stupid.

Sluts, male or female, aren't some type of champion of freedom, their horny and admit it and are seeing others as a more engaging form of dildo. If thats your thing, and you can live with that, great. Follow your bliss, I'm happy for you. Scared and saddened your risking your health and can be so jaded, but you do you. But please stop trying to tell us how enlightened rampant fucking is and what a brave and wise soul you or a character is for chugging cock and gobbling cunt. You are engaging, hopefully, in a mutual exchange with another adult. Ideally its done with one with whom one has a deeper connection with, because lets face facts, its just sex is bullshit.

Spike... well, he's not pulling a Cloud Kicker. He's young, and a dragon, and it speaks volumes as to the twisted state of those fully grown stallions heart and souls that they are engaging with one whose an infant. Yes yes, legal espousals blah blah, they bloated a colts belly in a bathroom en masse the second the license came out. The fact that not one of them, with a room full of ready and able studs, said out loud "Hey, I'm in the catbird seat of virile stud muffin, so I maybe I should rutt the ones who are legally and physically an adult as opposed to one who looks like one of the school kids and literally needed royal chicanery for this to occur."

In short, Spike is engaging is potentially highly dangerous behavior at the cost of his own well being, and its nothing short of repugnant not only the encouragement of some random stallion he literally just met, or the room full of gryphons, would contribute to this, but the fact that his family, who claim to love him, haven't given him a good thump on the head the second he opens his gob to talk about his moral obligation to take cock from all and sundry.

For the love of all things, does anyone else find the fact that Celestia, a mare eons old, doesn't meet the words of a child telling her where he takes bear cock in the buck wheat makes him some guru and she should hold his feelings in some sort of regard should have been met with a raised hoof and followed "Ok, let me stop you right there sonny. If the next words out of that wang warmer isn't one hell of a sweet and dripping I'm sorry for thinking I know fuck all about life and love having lived what we who are actual adults would deam fuck all of anything, I'm well into Mommy Tia's About To Get Her Narc On up in this bitch." even slightly off?

But even if we ignore all that, we cannot ignore the elephant in the room who dearly would like to leave now because the fucking dragon whelp keeps giving him weird looks and why the fuck is everyone just ignoring this I just came here cause there was cake and I just got off the boat what the fuck is this PLEASE SOMEONE BOX ME UP AND SEND ME BACK TO THE BLATANT HELL OF MY HOMELAND WHERE I ONLY HAD TO SPEND MY DAYS IN BLISSFUL IGNORANCE OF DRAGON SLUTS BECAUSE OF ALL THE TERROR, of one thing: He is not just some random citizen.

He is a political powder keg. He is a direct relative at the very least to one, if not all, and is even in their employ at times. And no, sad not in the slightest to say, not everyone will look favorably at this. But, you say, its spikes life and his choice, and he doesn't care. Exactly. Glad to see your mothers drinking of nail polish hadn't been the total killer of your brain cells.

Now, let me finish that the right way. But he should. Because his actions reflect on Twilight and the Crown, and even the Sisters. He should care even if no one else does that when they ask, not order or manipulate, or force, a concession, one small time frame where he doesn't have sex, that they wouldn't do so unless it was vital to matters at the moment. And he should also be utterly despondent the second they turned their backs on him, after he gave his word, he broke it.

But again, HE'S A FUCKING KID! He's young, and is going about this with the assumed invulnerability of the young. Its his job to be stupid, but its the adults in it who are supposed to running herd on this.

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Yeah... thats the real question huh? I sure feel like a silly, because thats the really puzzler rattler, the fact the biological realities interfere in this boondaggle of a clusterfuck is the real question for the ages. Hell, that would have probably actually stopped Spike for half a tick, because Reality favors us males in a myriad of ways, the most prevalent of which is that there are fewer consequences on a man being a slut then a women. Our rugged perfection grants us the uncanny ability to engage in all manner of stupid. And of course since much of females actual utility upon the market place of partner viability is their ability to squirt out a squirt, that might explain a lot of this.

And thus, we shall pier into the thought process of a Random pseodo pedo pony: Okay, lets review: This is not me being horrible or sick because apparently morals are mandated entirely on legal eagles and someone put some loco weed in the Royal Tarts oatmeal, I'm totally in the clear Guard wise because actively engaging in public coitus is only a thing that normies and repressed plebians have to worry about, not sophisticated and enlightened renaissance stallions like our little calvacade. We've no doubt reached the pinnacle of our cultures refinement since we are eagerly awaiting our turn in the avant garde, which is totes not just a bunch of stallions fucking our local monarchs little brother in a public toilet, but our grand statement against the deathly silent bigotry of those who very loudly think we shouldn't pork pseudo foals in public bathrooms.

IN SHORT I'M SOLD! I'm totally being stuffing myself in the jizz heaves of about thirty other males in the most blatant hot dog toss down a hallway in history, but sex! AND IT MUST BE MY BIRTHDAY BECAUSE THE CHERRY ON THIS CAKE IS THAT I CAN ENGAGE IN ALL THIS WITHOUT ALL THAT BRINGING KIDS IN THE WORLD STUFF BECAUSE THAT WOULD JUST TOSS A MONKEY WRENCH INTO ALL THE RISK I'M APPARENTLY TAKING ON BY ENGAGING IN A SEXUAL ACT IN PUBLIC ON WHAT FOR ALL INTENTS AND PURPOSES IS A INFANT! BECAUSE THE PRINCESSES HAVE BEEN QUITE FIRM IN THEIR STANCE ON THE MATTER AT HAND!

Why, I can only imagine what it would be like to have Blaze Clawstons dad as my dad? Why, he has the temerity to actually be such a disgusting conformist and form his own opinion that doesn't validate his sons behavior. Blaze is so awesome for letting his father have his opinion and still have him in his life. Its obvious his father is just mean and hateful and should be held in contempt for not really loving his son, because how can anyone love anyone without entirely approving all personal conduct unconditionally.

Yep, cause that being a free thinker is all about. Huh, maybe I should write all this down... nah. The group of stallions standing in front of a stall awaiting their trigger pull on what could quite likely the dragon pop equivelant of russian roullete might think me an odd duck.

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This is just an estimated guess, especially after the latest episode "The Molting". Smolder tells Spike that when he begins the molting he would get kick out by his parents, go have a hoard and guard it, terrorize towns/ponies, meaning that he will be living on his own. So my guess is that he is already a young adult by dragon standards. The only issue we are seeing is that he was raised in an environment surrounded by ponies, meaning that there was no one to tell him about his culture.

Also, you don't have to be such a dick about, especially to the writer of the story.

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Believe it or not, I think this story is actually good. It should be note that the sign of a great writer is an ability to invoke feeling in the reader

Mmmm I always enjoy the thought of Spike tied up. Good side-story.

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Honestly, who doesn't like a little bondage?~

I definitely understand Spike's love for griffon cock.

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With knots like theirs, how could he not?~

Great story! I do want to point out that a female slut could have taken FIVE guys at once instead of just four. :ajsmug: A former associate of mine put the count at much higher, but she was counting orifices that no man could have used (ear holes, etc)

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