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This was pretty good for sure. I like the build up to the clop for sure. I can't wait to see how you get more comfortable with clop scenes and they start to improve in length and detail. I think now we will get to see the two of them fall deeper for each other but also deeper into their lust for one another.You have a very interesting story here and I really hope you keep it going
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Thank you for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed it; I've been a little anxious about this one being my first clopfic and all. I'm glad to see at least a few people have enjoyed it so far, and I hope I can keep it up.
Love this so far!!!
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Then I'll try and keep it up
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Ok
Why do you want to change the title? It looks good to me.
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It does? I suppose I'll keep it. I'm just always dissatisfied with my titles; I can never seem to find one that makes me happy.
Another great chapter I have to say. These two are so sweet together I am going to rot my teeth reading them and I don't mind one bit lol.
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I'm glad to hear it, lol. This was actually my favorite OTP for awhile, but I could never produce a good Applespike fic until this one. I'm glad people are liking it
FUCKING GREAT!!!! I so love that you put some conflict into the story. It makes it so more more than blind sex or just all sweet. It has made me love this story all that much more
Napalm Smoodge
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This comment made my day. Please keep it up XD
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I'm glad you're enjoying it. I honestly hope I can keep up with it through to completion.
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This is, funnily enough, the plot I have lined up for an unrelated fic in another fandom, lol.
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Man this was great. I will be honest..... I would LOVE to see you do a Spike x Smolder story one day soon like this. I mean really as much as I love this pairing I just see the Spike x Smolder pair being SO much more fun. Not to mention the interesting of dragon mating and relationship just overall their personalities would fit so well. This Spike gives off the feel of a man in his late middle age sometime. But if we was with Smolder I get the feeling we would feel young like his real age Someone who is at MOST is in his teens really. I just see that couple written by you being so much fun. ... And honestly I see Smolder being cool bringing in her changling best friend into the relationship lol. But anyway it was a great chapter and nice to see the issues haven't fully wrapped up all nice and neat but it made me get a flash of what could have been and honestly.... I am really interested in that lol.
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Maybe one day. Glad you're enjoying this fic, though. I've gotta stick to it and finish a bunch of projects first.
When are u going to update?
I like it!
A hug, and a shoulder to cry on would have worked better.
Good chapter.
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Thank you :D
Nice.
The hymen is an arch not a wall
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Huh. Noted. I learn something new everyday.
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Update love it by the way <3
I liked this chapter. Good job!
Love the chapter xx
Im so happy to see this story ain't dead. These two are so adorable
*purrs with content*
Do the next chapter about Twinkie. That would be a fun change of pace. ^^
Well Spike has unlocked the harem route on today's episode so both girls getting him could be fun to see. I'm half joking but it was an intersting update and I can't wait to see what happens next.
As long as Zephyr grew up, mentally and emotionally, it's not the worst pairing. At least hes's persistent and, actually has some character. 3 out of 5, of the forced shippings is still a win!
All in all, I really like this chapter! Hope the next one is even better!
Rainbow & Zephyr interactions are great. . .
Who'd a thunk
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Lol, I'm tempted but I don't think I'll be doing a 'Spike gets all the mares' fic today. I think I'll joke about it though :P
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I admit, I was tempted to do a harem fic, but I don't think I will for this fic. Gets a little stale, I've noticed from past experience lol
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I'm glad you liked it; I hope the next one is good too :P
When are u going to update? ❤️
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When I can. I have a fulltime job and a long commute. I apologize for the delays, of course, but it can't be helped.
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OK can’t wait for you to update xx
Update! Great job. Fun and emotional. Hoping for more soon!
Great chapter!
I just found this story and read up to this chapter. It's been a really nice read! I very much like how you portray their loneliness issues realistically, as well as introduce new conflict points seamlessly into the story. It really does feel like a story about the pains of trying to reconnect with a friend group that has scattered for a while now.
I wasn't sure how to feel about each chapter having a sex scene at first. However, you do show both Spike and Applejack having some good chemistry with each other, and their sexual escapades do drive the story forward sometimes too (ex: the question of dragon pregnancy, not wanting to see Applejack on fire, etc). Plus, they are good sex scenes in general. :p
PS: don't worry too much about the ending, whether it's chapter endings or the story's ending. IMO stories often are about the journey more than the destination, and all an ending really needs to do is to summarize the results and give some small hints about how life might be once the story closes. Think of it like this: a story is like a jet flight. The prologue is making sure it gets off the runway at a good speed to keep momentum and not explode trying to do so. The story itself is the flight itself and the real meat of it. The ending is throttling down and ensuring a smooth touchdown on the runway. That's all an ending needs to do really.
Granted I know very little about jets so that may not be entirely accurate, but I hope that makes some sense!
I doubt that either of those two would be this fluent in their conversation unless the sex was really bad
Please! For all that is holy! Continue the story! We want to know what happens next!
This is really good! Can’t wait to see what happens next~
Your new friend, Rexy :)
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Yeah! Make moooooore! Please?
How am I supposed to feel about this? I love the story, this is my second read through. But my reaction to it is always that Winnie The Pooh picture you have as your pfp XD