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Dr Sharaz Jek


Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!

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Speaking of dragons, may haps a dragon might be interested in becoming apart of this?

9451246
Probably won't happen, but not impossible!

Another great addition to this series for sure.

“I must confess, I do not understand it myself. Is this simply a dream? A gift from Luna? I do hope she's not spying on us now.” She stopped before him, casting a long shadow. “Although I must confess, an audience wouldn't be so terrible.”

Luna is most likely behind this; and she is watching either way...

“So...” All three of them spoke at once. “Which one is the hottest?”

Okay, that is just evil.

“Fuck yeah,” he grunted spilling small globs of hot splooge into their mouths.

Nothing more to say!

“You know the drill, Rarity!” Twi beamed at her. “Exactly as planned!” She winked.

:moustache:: "I certainly like this plan!"


Good story!
I really should look into the other stories of this series.

9451649
Thank you!
9451848
Glad you enjoyed! Hope you like the others too if you check them out! :raritystarry:

Nice, but I would like him to fuck Applejack and Twilight as well. What made your story great was that they were all different. Rarity loves to be dominated, Twilight prefers a gentle and loving approach and Applejack wants a challenge and to engage in a struggle for dominance.

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Thank you, you definitely got the contrast I was going for with the herd which was why I chose those three. I decided to leave AJ and Twi out of full-on sex in this one to show each of the herd members get nights to themselves, plus since Spike got some action with them in other installments I feared it might get to redundant. They did get to act as fluffers of sorts, at least! Plus it was a chance to implement some more creative sex in a dream sequence, with three versions of Rarity, Spike's ultimate fantasy! :raritywink:

I do wish I'd fleshed this installment out a bit more, admittedly; I was definitely on a time crunch while writing this one and probably should've given it another run-through, but I think the next part (Dragon's Lance) was fleshed out way better at least.

9495754
I do doing 4 with Rarity is what makes it a little redundant. Right now it feels like he is mostly with Rarity and Applejack and Twilight are side members. You should not focus on just Rarity if it's supposed to be a herd. Maybe even put it in with Spike denying Rarity to make sure all his females get an even amount of attention.

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Understandable. I did intend for Rarity to be the sort of unofficial 'leader' of the herd, but I also want them to feel like equals. Plus she gets the most action because she's a borderline nympho, unlike the other two. :duck: I figure Twi spends a lot of time with Spike off-screen, while AJ is often busy with other stuff like her farm work.

9495788
Okay but if that's the case you should make that more clear. Mention it multiple times that Applejack is busy or that he just went on a walk with Twilight.

9495793
Sounds like a good idea, I'll try to do that in the next installment!

9495804
Maybe also have him do things he doesn't like but their sake. Like having a long study with Twilight.

9495807
That's a great idea; I could see lots of potential comedy in that!

9495829
Oh, I didn't mean it in a comedic way. More to show that he will put effort into his herd.

Thankfully he managed to control himself; he didn't want to end the fun there. Not that he didn't have stamina to burn, but he wanted to draw out his release as much as possible. He pushed them down more roughly, knowing his love would give the usual signal of slapping her hoof on his thigh if it proved too much, but they happily allowed him to force their heads all the way down repeatedly. Tears filled their eyes, making their mascara run in attractive streaks. He'd often worried he was hurting her whenever she started to weep like this, yet she'd told him she liked this rough sort of treatment from the drake she adored.

Me: Again with the rape!
Author: How many time must I tell you that it is CONSENSUAL rape?!

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One of my ideas was that dragons don't really have the same bounds around consent that ponies do, shown more in Dragon's Lance; it's just that Spike was raised by ponies and so he's adopted a lot of their culture and isn't comfortable with that dominant side of his nature, which his herd have helped him work through into something pleasant for them all.

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