What if this episode had a little more romance to it? What if Applejack had actually really hurt herself when that rock crushed her hoof? What if Spike was just a little bit older when this happened? Read this alternate version of "Spike at Your Service," to find out!
This story takes place in season 4! (Basically I picked up the episode and moved it forward since the events being moved doesn't really change the timeline all that much.) Also, let's pretend that Spike is now big enough to carry Applejack okay? This is MY universe! DON'T JUDGE ME! :3 That's why there is an "Alternate Universe" tag!
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Aw, that's adorable! :3 Also, how can anypony be mad with what you wrote? You gave them warnings, if they didn't want to read, they can just read something else.
I demand a sequel. Nuff said.
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Thanks, lol. Glad you enjoyed it!
8934229
Well, maybe you can help me with it. What would you like to see in a sequel?
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Maybe Spike working aroung the farm while AJ recovers from her injuries or maybe their 1st date. Up to you if you do want to make a sequel.
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I like it. Yeah, I think there will be a sequel.
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Yay!
A minor point of critique: the spacing between several words seems to have disappeared.
I've found that this often happens when copy-pasting from a Word document into the story field here on Fimfiction. You can avoid this by first copy-pasting the story from Word into a blank text (.txt) document, and then copying it again in the body of the text document and pasting it into the story field here. This preserves the formatting and eliminates spacing errors.
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Thanks for the tip! I will definitely keep that in mind. I had originally written this on Wattpad and copy/pasted it over, so is probably where the spacing issue occurred.
i really love this fanfiction! all fanfictions that make me blush like this one deserve a gold star and like! good job! :))
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Thank you so much!
Love-Love-Love-Love-Love it! I love it! This is something I wish could have happen in the episode! Thank you so much for writing this and I hope you'll keep on writing more AppleSpike stories!
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Of course, I will! #ApplSpikeisLife
Awesome story. Always happy to see more Applespike in the fandom. Would love to see sequels about how other Spike or Applejack centered episodes would go with them dating (like maybe her going to Spike for advice in "Bats" or Spike joining her on the family road trip in "Pinkie Apple Pie")
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Agreed! I love this ship so much!
Edit: I just may do that :)
That’s from daughter of discord
926119
Sure is
Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!
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What kind of sequel could I even do? XD
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A sequel where applejack and spike date, get married, and have foals. At least one being a pony dragon hybrid.