When you're alone and you need a friend, someone to help you forget your problems... look elsewhere.
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This was great! XD
Okay this story wasn't bad, the first part was pretty good. Then it got a little awkward, and the ending was a bit of a letdown. It made me feel: "Oh...guess that's it then." And not in an "I want to see more way." Your style's pretty good, and you have some funny moments. Here's hoping your next work has a more satisfying ending.
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Hm, I suppose I see what you mean. I may have gotten too deep into the logic and lost the parody tone somewhere along the way.
Thanks for the feedback.
I have a personal vendetta against humans in clopfics so good fic I think so good job yes thank you
Are you going to make more stories like this?
Umm... should I be worried about the outcome of previous versions of the spell?
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Probably not. Just a bit of a Valentine's Day one-off and felt like trying my hand with second-person style.
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No need to be worried, it was excellent data!
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No problem.
I feel like she was looking through a yellow page phone book.
She's using the yellow pages? Actually, maybe the yellow pages would sell if they named them the anthronomicon.
Damn, Twilight and her human fetishes!
Keking
Well that was disappointing. I expected some actual action...
I can feel for Flurry Heart. She's young and she has it bad. But Flurry, this is not appropriate. You're acting like a creep!
Still, it's hard to blame her:
Flurry's a young woman. Sounds like her parents refuse to help her find a good young man. In other words: They won't give Flurry a safe healthy outlet, for her romantic/sexual drives. They shouldn't be surprised when she finds an unsafe unhealthy outlet.
Perhaps she'll be successful on her next venture...
Would.