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Teyeson Bee


"Something random a day keeps the boring away." - Teyeson Bee

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Moon Dancer is the resident genius of Crystal Prep High School. She also happens to be working on a formula that can rearrange DNA and remove all flaws from a person's body; something she believes can change the world. However, she's awkward and geeky to most, and dreams of being more popular and winning the heart of her crush.

After being embarrassed to death by the school's queen bee, Moon Dancer takes a drastic leap and tests her formula on herself. When it appears to have worked, she adopts a new persona to go with her new look, and things seem to go her way. But how far is she willing to go, and how much is she willing to lose to get everything she's always wanted?

Based on the film The Nutty Professor, a bit from both the Jerry Lewis AND Eddie Murphy version.

Artwork by Chibicmps

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 14 )

9424233
Um...is that a compliment?

9424245
Just my thoughts on the whole 'trimmer' thing.

You know, getting my goofy on :rainbowwild:

Interesting start. Lets see how this goes.

Seems quite interesting

Pretty good start, keep it up. If theres any feedback I can give you, is maybe get a few synonyms for brightest. Reading it four times in short time felt a bit awkward. Smartest, best, top - just a few that comes to my mind.
Otherwise pretty good.

I need more Moondancer stories in my life. Please continue.

9424851
I appreciate the input! :pinkiehappy:

This story definitely has my attention.

Hope this updates soon. Looks interesting.

Based on the film The Nutty Professor, a bit from both the Jerry Lewis AND Eddie Murphy version.

10375113
Oh yeah I saw that. Both films are so good!

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