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Sonic_Applejack2005
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Sonic_Applejack2005
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... No.
2 Paragraphs in I'm already gone.
LISTEN TO FEEDBACK
Your stories are horrible, I might as well hurl myself off a cliff.
Shit is all we get, do you even fucking read? You like the positive yet you get so much shit since you don't listen to feed back.
Your characters of the ponies don't work.
Rarity is a constant issue, fashion sense over fucking helping a friend. Ya know, Friendship is Magic/Rarity takes Manehatten/Even the fucking Rarity book.
Rainbow Dash the Element of Fuck you. Sorry, Loyalty.
You clearly haven't watched the show. Watch the show before you make stories, hell I watched Season 8 in preparation for the Fanfics about it.
It takes less then 2 Days. You spent a fucking week on it.
I haven't even read the whole thing so time to delve into the shitfest and voice my opinion afterwords.
Read it in less then a minute.
No character is true to their Element of Harmony.
Applejack is generally concerned about her family and friends, yet she celebrates the event of the rock. What a bullshit reason may I add to put Twilight in Hospital.
The description of Twilight's injuries would have killed her. And her horn would have broken due to the impact.
Fluttershy, the Element of Minor Nitpicks. Fucking help me.
FUCKING WATCH THE FIRST 5 SEASONS ON NETFLIX.
YOU CLEARLY HAVENT WATCHED THE SERIES.
9386882
I believe the author only reads stories from Evictus (or whatever their new name is), because I'm with you. And I only lasted a paragraph.
Alright so when you say you you, You need to put a comma between you and you. Like this
Fuck you, you dumb ass
Edit: also change rating to teen this far from mature
"The Sense Of Forgiveness...' But can we forgive these 'stories'?
9386882
Yeah if he’s gonna do that than ought add Alternate Universe to he tags
9386947
Careful. You might get his few bot fans to attack you and try to make you feel bad.
9386867
you do know its a running joke he's doing right? because if you don't than i'm sorry but if you do he probably is good just right shit fics just cause and well you can't get in trouble with that or you know he's a troll i say he's a troll
9387005
Like I care what they think. And no I don't care if they read this.
9387005
why you say bots just wondering you know you could ask a mod to see if some of these accounts are bots plus isn't it against a rule on this site just asking i mean i'm not supporting him god forbid karma gonna let me live peacefully if i do
9386867
i'm laughing my ass off your so triggered HAHAHAHAHAHA i just came here to see the triggered people
i'm giving this a dislike because i want a like from people
well I guess you would keep writing shitfics since its making you popular
no just no bro
9387032
Maybe because this guy doesn’t respond to feedback
9387026
Because you all respond and jump to his defense as fast as can be.
9387090
true but still funny
9387097
am i supporting him read my comment again specifically the last bit you know i don't support him i'm just saying why you say bots when you could idk go to a mod to double check and get him idk banned now don't you understand now? if not than idk what to tell you to understand maybe draw a picture or send you a book
I feel bad to this dude :[
I'm not going to get involved in the little shitstorm here in the comments, as it would be a waste of everyone's time. As a coherent, serious, passionate piece of storytelling, it fails on every level. But, that clearly wasn't the intention. As a shitpost or a parody of some sort, it somewhat works? The characters felt too drastically different and that distracted from the tone and really pulled me out of the story. The swearing is also gratuitous and clearly meant for some kind of comedic effect. I don't care if you use a lot of curse words and the like, so long as it feels natural and makes contextual sense. Here, though, it just felt tacky, overdone, and even a bit annoying after a while. Regardless, I found this story to be a weaker sort of humorous. This is not a good story for me to criticize your writing talents or to assess your potential in writing more serious works, so I won't. 7/10, it was pretty funny.
Finally a happy ending.