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SpikeCrosstie4077

SpikeCrosstie4077 #1 · Feb 6th, 2019 · 4 · ·

I don’t usually give a crap about homophobia but I mean this maybe a bit far with the whole thing about the Princess Of Friendship getting homophobic cause it sounds out of character

uigsyvigvusy

uigsyvigvusy #2 · Feb 6th, 2019 · 2 · 3 ·

absolutely incredible

Caddy Finz

Caddy Finz #3 · Feb 7th, 2019 · 6 · ·

Kid, ever consider finishing middle school first? Or at least consult your English teacher for some advice. I'm sure he/she would be happy to share it with you.

Jamin P Rose

Jamin P Rose #4 · Feb 7th, 2019 · 12 · ·

You know, last time I was polite. Suggesting that you shouldn't be writing, this time I'm just going to say it. You. Should. Not. Be l. Writing.

Every story has the same problems; you rush to publish it, you don't check your grammer or sentence structure, and your content is always the same. So ENOUGH with the homophobic robo-stories. Enough with characters suddenly yelling at each other.

Either get serious about writing, read some good literature (some classic fiction stories) and really look at how they write, or STOP writing all together, because the interent has enough of the stuff you're pumping out.

Tycoon

Tycoon #5 · Feb 7th, 2019 · 2 · ·

This is the 10th level of Hell. I'm convinced.

Rainbowsparkle20

Rainbowsparkle20 #6 · Feb 7th, 2019 · 2 · 1 ·

sigh how do stuff like this get approved like come on man im not trying to be mean but this is just bad please stop

SpikeCrosstie4077

SpikeCrosstie4077 #7 · Feb 7th, 2019 · · ·

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Or get grammarly

0202hsabdren

0202hsabdren #8 · Feb 7th, 2019 · 1 · ·

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Dude, look at his name and profile pic. Why are you taking him seriously?

AstralMouse

AstralMouse #9 · Feb 7th, 2019 · 2 · ·

The story wasn't bad. But the fucking author's note was brilliant. I am dying.

Discord The Narrator

Discord The Narrator #10 · Feb 7th, 2019 · · ·

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Because the author auto-published it, so it has been approved by itself.

Lodger

Lodger #11 · Feb 9th, 2019 · 2 · ·

I came

The Blue EM2

The Blue EM2 #12 · Feb 10th, 2019 · 3 · ·

hi everypony!!! um you may have noticed my story from yesterday is not up anymore meester sent me a message and to be honest i bet they just wanted the story to themselves and didnt want to share with anypony else!!! but i have a special surprise for you all which is the story right here! i hope u all enjoy and have a beautiful day

I knew this guy was a bad writer, but now I think he (or she) is simply deluded.

I recall reading a quote from George R.R. Martin stating that fanfiction authors know the characters of fictional worlds a lot less than their original creators.

The Yak tilted her head questioningly. "I have two dads, but one of them has a vagina. I thought only females had vaginas?"
Twilight's eyes instantly darkened. "The fuck is wrong with you? Don't ever say that shit inside my classroom again!" she screamed so loudly that Equestria itself shook slightly.
"What was wrong about what I said?" asked Yona, cowering in her seat.
"Don't play dumb with me, you fat piece of shit!" growled Twilight. "The only thing I hate more than gays is creatures who can't make up their mind about who they are. In fact..." Twilight clapped her hooves to get the attention of everypony in the room. "LISTEN UP, YOU STUPID FUCKERS. We are starting today's lesson, and we are going to cover a variety of topics, so listen well." She pointed to Yona, who was sulking at her table after being screamed at. "Yona has something she would like to share with you all today!"

I think he may have had a point.

Clopian26