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What a...........charming...tale...
And such a....a....unique take on Twilight's personality.
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Darling. Darling. Let us talk comedy and vulgarities. You see, darling, if you need to reach into the swear jar for dialog, you aren't writing comedy. Tis a simple matter of...
...
This....this is not a comedy.
...............
huh.
I....what IS this?
*Opens up story*
"It was the start of a new day in Equestria, and to Twilight Sparkle that meant a new day on the unending quest for knowledge."
*Stares at author's name*
*Stares at M rating*
*Closes story.*
*Decides I'm being too judgmental and decide to open up the story once more*
"Don.'t you ever fucking correct me in my classroom again. Do you understand, you moldy piece of shit fruit?"
*Closes the story and temporarily shuts down my home's internet.*
Even porn would kick this to the curb.
He's back bois!
I've been waiting for this...
... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... ... .. .. .. .. .. .. . . . . . . . . (Speechless)
Yet again, we have another train crash of bad grammar, nonsensical plotting, OOC moments and what the fudge content. (Though the fact I like Cozy Glow may bias me somewhat.)
How do you manage to write this badly?
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Only God knows for sure my friend...
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Yes.
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Gotta love the beach boys.
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You just gotta.
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Good vibrations?
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Maybe.
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Cozy certainly got those in this trainwreck.
This is beautiful.
is Sweetie Belle a dumb fuck?
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In the show, or the story?
The answer is yes.