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Silver Dragon Blade Wing


Just a guy who likes to write stories. The Changelings brought me here. :)

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Made some edits do to some small changes

After an out of control storm from the Everfree Forest does serious damage to Ponyville, the townsfolk are given an all expenses paid cruise while the town is repaired. The cruise is attacked by pirates who by mistake unknowingly take the CMC with a small number of other foals, the student six and some School of Friendship students. The result is the Ponies going on an adventure in the famous Sea of Legends, an area known for great tales of riches, and of great dangers.

Takes place sometime after the School of Friendship was opened the second time.

Probably should have add this a long time ago but this has a side story called Lore of the Sea of Legends

Chapters (23)
Comments ( 210 )

did you take inspiration from Sea of Thieves, only more darker?

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I did take a bit from Sea of Thieves, as well as other pirate theme stories and such. As for more darker, I think this chapter is the darkest but we'll have to wait and see.

Thanks for the fav by the way.

Can't what for the next chapter. and please, have the crew sing "We Shall Sail Together" PLEASE.

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It's in the works now, and I'll definitely have them sing it at some point, there'll be some edits to it but they will sing it.

Liking this story. and i got some Blackbeard vibes off of the last scene and i love it a lot.

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Happy to know. :twilightsmile:

I'm very curious, what sort of Blackbeard vibes did you get off the last scene?

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the whole fear and scare tactics Archduke Razor Tail used.

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Yea he does love doing that to those who think they are high and mighty, Nobles in particular, which I'm sure many would find ironic as Razor is technically a Noble himself by blood.

To be far though, he isn't like what most would expect of a Noble and he ain't scared to get his hands dirty, as he will gladly pick a shovel up and dig with his crew. When asked, he puts it as; "And let them have all the fun in finding treasure? Yea right."

Funny thing, Razor does tie burning cannon fuses into his hair like Blackbeard and he also likes to mix black power with his rum, light it and then drink it while it's burning, said it adds flavor.

"And Chancellor Neighsay believes that other races threaten Ponies when one is building an empire of pirates and other sailors." She said to herself with a roll of her eyes.

That is my Favourite line as of now. It looks like Celestia is going to the Sea of Legends and i think Razor Tail is going to have a hard time with her. Also if i was given the chance to join these pirates, i would do so in a snap.

Edit: i also love that you put in a song from a pirate music band, that is awesome.

Of all the card games they could have been playing, you just HAD to pick Uno. I'm not complaining, I legitimately laughed when I read that, I'm just a little confused.

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It's going to be quite the face-off though it won't be for awhile yet, and Razor might have a hard time but he does have a few tricks up his armored sleeves. But we'll have to wait and see.

Glad you liked the song, I was originally going to use this tune but decided to save it for later.

And if you joined the Outcasts and at some point commanded a ship of your own, what would it be and how would you customise it?

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Uno is the card game I'm most familiar with, other games, and not just card games, will make an appearance in future chapters.

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A heavily armed and armoured galleon from Skull and Bones and full trained crew in both gunnery and combat to their fullest potency. and my flag would be the same flag used by the skeleton crew from Mega Bloks Pyrates sets and my ship's name will be "The Dawn of Piracy."

Ah, the line break button. Those of us who still can't find it are left to make our own personalized line breaks.

Now, into the teeth.

This story is soooo good, i want to give this story at least 50 likes on it.

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Very happy to hear that :pinkiehappy:, so what did you think of this chapter Regal?

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I chuckled at the similarity's of the cannibals and the bone cage from POTC Dead Men's Chest's.

And i can't wait for more of this story.

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When I was describing the cannibals I pictured them somehow in real life, complete with a flashlight going over a dead one, sounds like something out of a horror movie.

And more is on the way. :pinkiehappy:

After seeing this chapter, the hole ship battle, and reading how each Outcast captain, ship and crew works, it really (and i do mean really) makes want to join the Outcasts of the Abyss sooooooooooooooooooo badly. :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy:

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I think this video fits your comment. :twilightsmile:

I've actually been thinking about starting a group related to this story but I haven't decided on it yet.

As I'm taking a small break I'm not sure when the next chapter will be up as I'm not sure were to go at the moment, but I am leaning towards it focusing on Twilight's group.

In the meantime I'll be working on the side story so expect that some time in April. :pinkiehappy:

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You have great choice in pirate music.

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Possibly, though if that is the case, how would one have ended up in the Sea of Legends, and why is it only targeting Caribou ships?

Well that is what I'm aiming for. :pinkiehappy:

The next few mouths are going to be a bit busy as my house is needing some rework on it, so uploads might be less frequent but that is a maybe. I do have the basic outline for it and at the moment I'm not sure if its going to be a one or two-parter. Just have to wait and see.

There's also writers block to contend with, :ajbemused: here's hoping it wouldn't be a big problem this time.

How did our heroines follow Razer as he flew through a canyon, then up a cliff? Half of them can't fly and Rarity and Applejack don't seem like the kind of ponies who would be any good at rock climbing, or climbing in general.

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Rainbow, Fluttershy and Twilight followed Razor at a distance with Dash carrying Pinkie and Twilight carrying Rarity and AJ with her magic after Razor left the canyon, as for the cliff I don't quite get what you mean by the following him up it. If you mean the one Razor climbed to get to the Explorer, the Mane Six didn't actually climb it, they saw Razor's tail go over the edge and went back into the cave to try and ambush him as he traveled back, which might have worked if they didn't leave hoofprints for Razor to see.

I made some edits to hopefully clear that up, sorry for the confusion. :twilightsheepish:

Nice to see the Outcasts do a bit of land fighting and a fort raid.

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Might do more of that in future chapters, and the Outcasts will at some point face off with a Skeleton fleet.

Read this chapter on how big the Outcasts are, making me wonder how big is ArchDuke Razor Tail' bounty is. Being a Pirate, I imagine it is at least over 300,000,000 or even 1 billion.

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I... never thought of that actually. :rainbowhuh:

Considering his achievements, those numbers don't sound too far off. From what we know at this time he's (with help from his, Iron Horn's and Blood Fang's factions) taken down seven Royals and been a gigantic pain in the tail for the four empires, the Caribou, and a currently unnamed faction, I'd definitely say you could be very close Regal.

Especially since the unnamed faction want his head real bad. Though they wouldn't be in this story, they're for the sequel.

Your point on the bounty does make me wonder; what would the bounty be for Razor's head Officers as well as Iron Horn and Blood Fang. (Not counting Blackmane as he's more or less retired) Not to mention the various pirates who work for the Outcasts.

Just rereading the edits you just released and I love them and the songs you put at the end of this one. as soon as saw them, I began to sing both of them.

Yo Ho Yo Ho, A Pirate's life of me.

Question: are you going to edit the chapters that are out or just the first two?

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Yo Ho Yo Ho, and a bottle of Rum.

In regards to the other chapters at the moment, I think only the first two will have major edits while the others are minor things like fixing spelling errors and maybe adding a few sentences here and there. At least that's as far as I can tell for now.

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Thanks for letting me know mate. :) :)

Uh, an entire section of water off limits to everyone, filled with the still sailing corpses of ships, that Atlas deemed as unnatural.

I'm getting a flashback to the Reavers from Firefly. That or Man of Medan.

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Definitely a creepy place, and I understand the flashback to Man of Medan but how so with the Reavers from Firefly? I know who and what the Reavers are but I haven't seen Firefly in a long time so my memory is a bit rusty.

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It's mostly because of that scene from the movie when the heroes enter Reaver space and it's littered with half cannibalized ships and dead husks.

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That makes sense, I hadn't thought of that when I made the Steel Yard. Although, that does give me an idea for the future.

J'espère voir Thunderlane péter des gueules pour retrouver Rumble

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I don't speak French so I had to translate that :pinkiesmile:, I am going to add a scene where he is freaking out in some up coming edits to this story in the near future.

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Sorry for bad english but i don't want to see him panic (that's the word i have in french) i want to see him badass.
I don't have RD in a relationship but it's my best shipping (stupid Soarin), so make him strong and brave please :scootangel:

Nice work, mate, nice to see you return to writing this story. Nice to know that Snowy’s family is still alive and in the Sea of Legends. Keep up the good work, mate, and hoist the colours, our colours black.

Glad to continue it after taking a break, I'm not entirely sure when the next chapter will be up some there might be a delay like there was for this one but that will depend on a few things. For the time being though I'm going to be doing those overdue edits like fixing spelling and grammar mistakes, and maybe add some new scenes here and there.

So Regis, can you guess what the projects that the Outcast R&D has for Razor to look at are?

Shiver my timbers,
Shiver in cold,
(Yo-ho He-ho)
There are ponies who's hearts
Are as bright as gold
(Yo-ho He-ho)
As they sail their ships
All their foes turn blue
A razor tailed captain
And a cutlassed crew
It's as strange a tale
As was ever told
Of a hunt for treasure
And a love that's gold

I'm glad this exists, really brings the pirate spirit back.

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Glad you enjoyed it, love the verse of the song and I would really like to see the full thing. :pinkiehappy:

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Hey Regis, for some reason my first response to your comment wasn't linked, no idea how that happened. :facehoof:

So here it is;

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I love info dump chapters so much thanks to One Piece Chapter 957. So this one is a nice read-through, mate.

Also, thanks for continuing this story, mate. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

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Happy to finally do so, though with what's going on soon I don't know how frequent new chapters will be, hopefully it wouldn't be as long a delay as this was.

Also thanks for the idea of Razor's bounty. :pinkiehappy:

So Regis, what did you think of this chapter?

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