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Silver Dragon Blade Wing


Just a guy who likes to write stories. The Changelings brought me here. :)

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After the failed Canterlot invasion the Changeling hives are in complete and utter disarray. With the already on-edge "alliance" between the Royals gone, the hives entered a civil war. Now two mouths the smoke has cleared, leaving the changelings with no hives or Royals. But a single young Prince, imprisoned for being against the invasion, must now create his own hive and work to rebuild to give his kind any hope of a future. A difficult road awaits, with the Ponies on alert and his own inexperience, rebuilding will not be easy.

My First Story, feedback is welcome.

Note: I Might change the Genre(s) depending on how the story unfolds

Edit: Added a Slice of Life Tag.

Chapters (9)
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Comments ( 5 )

Alright, an good start. Better then most first stories starts. I haven't seen an grammar mistakes, then again,I wasn't looking for them. If you feel your grammar is bad or just meh, look for an editor, someone well say yes.
Ok, for the numbers, one to one hundred, spelled it out, any larger than that, normal numbers. If an number starts the sentence, spell it out, no matter how long it is. Then again, that how I learn how to do. English is a weird language.
Now, that is all I have for this chapter, till next one.
-Captain Absolution

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Thanks, I've always had trouble starting stories but once I get going its no problem.

Good to know with the numbers, I'll keep that in mind and yea, English is a weird language.

The next chapter should be out either today or tomorrow if all goes well.

What Will Be The Next Move Of Prince Dragonfly And His Hive?
Let's see where this story goes.

Welp, that was a twist. An big twist of twist.

Whew, caught with this story, and I'll have to wait. Sad changeling is sad.

And I have to say, good job! I'll try to leave something more 'better' comment on later chapters.

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