My friends and I have been living in the apocalyptic aftermath of a zombie outbreak. We joined up with a larger group and helped build a machine to create a portal to a new world. We were then sent through to see if it was a good location to try and start over. What we find is both horrifying and (for some) beyond our wildest dreams.
2K views! Buck yah, y'all are awesome!
Story contains language, internet references, and general bad jokes. Read with caution.
-Story updates...sometimes-
Art
Shawn Changeling
Flash Beats (Shawn Unicorn)
Atom Split (Camden)
Griffin (Matthew)
Nyjill Moon (Nyjill)
Blue(Cody)
Teacher
Camp
Paulo Fragmen Terra
Chloris
It's a little rough in the beginning I know, writing is a learning experience.
Chapters (39)
I wonder what would happen if the CMC came back cause they were like
"Oh wait, we left that cooler open!"
"Don't want them knowing we snooped around."
Then they find him asleep
Edit: oh damn, I'm the first comment?
This story is awesome btw, I love it so far :3
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Thanks bro(ny)! To be honest I was starting to loose motivation due to lack of likes and comments but this really helped.
Cheers!
I like the way you explained his use of magic, really interesting
Have you tried adding this story to a group?
More people could see it and hopefully comment on it as well. Is that how it works?
I'm not saying much cause I think you're doing really well and am having trouble finding anything to critique, keep it up
Hopefully Shawn will say something like this
"Oh man, I bet I'll turn into a unicorn, maybe an alicorn!"
(>")>ZAP<("<)
*become breezie*
"AWW DANGIT!!"
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Thanks dude. As far as adding the story to a group most I've seen have quotas that have to be met by the story (ie. likes or views) but I will defiantly look around.
As far as nothing to critique, that's a load off my mind (especially since you are so well read in the fimfictions). I'm not a writer but I'm doing it to relieve stress. Creation is a great stress relief and just feels great in general. And ponies make everything better!
Anyhow thanks again! You guys are the best.
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Hell yeah, Shawn the changeling!
Possible stealth shenanigans incoming
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Heck yah. Infiltrator extraordinaire. (Perhaps)
Magical focal points arranged like the pores in your skin? Interesting
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My idea exactly, but infinitely better expressed. Mana pores sounds much better than tiny focal points.
Hope Shawn comes to the same conclusion
This is so silly... I rather like it.
8135192 I humbly request more.
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Thanks! I'll be sure to continue. There's much more story to tell and contrary to popular belief I do have an itinerary. (Idk if people actually think that or not, just said it because it sounded fun)
Cheers!
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I'd recommend more groups, like a lot more groups. Groups for zombies and monsters; groups for Changelings and griffons; groups for HiE and badass humanity. Seriously, more groups.
Also, use words and not numbers. Ten, not 10.
Finally, let's see if I'll enjoy your self (and friends) insert.
Such a horrifying lack of spelling and grammar... ugh...
But on a serious note, only use acronyms in speech when someone says the letters and not the words. "S.T.F.U" or "shut the fuck up" not "stfu". An exception is when he wrote his message... ugh...
Mild enjoyment is all I'll get from this; and that's saying something.
My preferred HiE is more serious and badass and less internet trend lover turned walking pop reference machine. But still, a little silly is good now and then.
Acid at a concert? Pffft, try acid at an opera; now that's some crazy shit!
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The zombies only played into one chapter so I didn't want to put it into a group for something like that. However they will play a role later on so I can justify it.
For the most part I try to use words like ten but sometimes I just feel a number fits better.
Thanks for the read!
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I am the only spell and grammar checker so sorry about that. Maybe one day I'll have a proof reader of my very own...
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Even mild enjoyment is a success for me, so thanks for that!
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How about acid never haha.
Thanks for your input, I'll take it all in consideration while I continue the story. Cheers!
interesting to see this campy style story so far.
Wow duuuuude this is.......speechless
A 60ft wide stream isn't a stream anymore it's a fucking river.
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Can't tell if good or bad thing
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Well, I can tell you that Im completely fucked up right now due to my dad being in jail.....my god im need to get a life
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I'll split the difference, how about a creek? lol
I swear I proofread but looking over this chapter again a few days later...
Who made the art?
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That was me. Used online tools for most of them. Blue is a diamond dog that I used paint.net to turn blue and my avatar/Flash Beats was made in photoshop before my student trial expired.
No no no no no NO!!
That is completely wrong! It should be "Thestral"
That is the correct term to use and not "Theastrial"
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Thanks. I keep going back and forth n the spelling. Ugh
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your welcome
Quite a small piece of Earth indeed....
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1/1395300 to be exact.
Looky looky
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Kool....
Aid
yippee! New chapter....
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:D
Hmm, I really like what you got going on here. Can't wait to see more.
i just got the joke. there is Shawn and he is from a zombie infested world... Shawn of the dead. good joke there.
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Yah... totally intentional...
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Hilarious! XD
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O you.
LOL
Flash Beats reminds of an Xbox, which in turn reminds me of Genji, which in turn reminds that he needs healing, which in turn makes me hate life just a tad bit more.
Congratulations, you have done a meme. Hold your head high, you are now a scum of the earth, and you should be proud. Doing a meme is no easy feat.
Yes, btw, this is all meant to be said in a joking manner and should not offend you. However I also understand it is 2018 and you are allowed to be offended by whatever you wish. Also good meme.
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That was a wild ride, hope there's no red ring of death.
I hope Thorax, Pharynx and Ocelleus all exist in this AU as part of the changeling hive.
You're going to explain what they are, right?
So, I'm just gonna say the secret being spread is like the virus. Much worse than zombies!
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Wheres the fun in that? If you have to explain it, it looses all the magics!
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Far as I could tell that's a camera...what unknown significance am I missing?
Z for zombie...but the 115 is still perplexing XD
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But if you use too many, it can get distracting! Especially if the references are obscure!
Please tell me he's not infected.