Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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I think somepony just exaggerated the chest fluff a bit too much. Honestly before that day I wrote my comment I'd actually not given any thought on what chest fluff of a Pony might look. The P is to differentiate an MLP Pony from a Terran pony. Tbh the only sentient creature I'd have thought may have fluff noticeable at a casual distance would be Griffins, but that because of the bird/feline dynamic.
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I guess we'll find out next chapter.
Just because Pinkie can break all the rules, even she has limits to how she can break them.
Spike is indeed getting his dues, though it's more like he implied that there was an adventure or conflict every month or so, not a world saveing event.
Don't get ahead of the story, the bud.
More days lay ahead of them.
Hmm... can't say. There's a lot of damage to fix.
DIscord really complicated things, didn't he?
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I can't remember if I answered that question for you or not. Could have sworn I did. The chest fluff was just the artist choice on style. Nothing beyond that.
Have I ever said that your story could make for a very interesting comic? Because each chapter becomes easier to picture with every word.
It'd be a dope comic....a very VERY explicit dope one though.
(Now onto the real story)
• Starlight continues to steal the show every time she's in a scene. I don't know why, I just find myself interested in every word she has to say, nevermind her being the first to start a relationship with one of the stranded 7.
• Starlight is just the best in terms of her being someone Trixie could find comfort in. Much respect to Glimmer for being the support system.
• Btw fuck Discord for making shit complicated for Trixie as well as me but damn is he not an entertaining bastard while doing so.
• Starlight vs Ember for Chris. We do remember how Starlight vs Rainbow went right? Rainbow got straight up BOXED! (that is a word I personally use to describe someone getting their ass whooped, don't ask why lol)
• Having your mom & teacher dating as well as having her possibly date other mares including a stallion who you see as a pontential father figure who could possibly end up only choosing one mare while also dealing with the possibility of having two sisters from different mares your potential father figure is also dating.
Four words : WHAT IS BUTTON'S LIFE?
• Smolder putting off the tough girl front when getting to know more about Spike is actually very adorable. An adorable interaction between two of arguably the most innocent (aside from the foals because they naturally are) characters in the story so far.
• It might be only me but I get the feeling that Celestia won't be so chipper with Lyra getting very....intimate with Sniff in the tub. It could fuck with her plans if her agent is fooling around on the job.
• Lyra's mental breakdown was just :(
(Just what did Bon Bon do to her?)
• Sniff my dude, I beg of you to do this one simple thing for Twilight & Ovens at this point. *clears throat*
F U C K. T H E M. A L R E A D Y.
I understand he's on his slow pace but man is it kinda making me a little miffed at him for the girls despite them being cool with the painful slowness. Patience. That I must be.
• The whole section of Luna & Kelly was quite....descriptive.... like damn I did not know Luna was gonna get down like THAT! They plan on bringing big red into this shit too?! It's gonna be crazy!
(Yo Suncheeks, come get yo sista!)
• Unfortunately no Cerb (only a mention) but I'm sure he's busy getting a good.....workout.
• Same with Lumberman but at least my brain is safe from the cuteness that would've overflowed it when it comes to him & Applejack.
• Didn't get much of the interesting trio of Tavi, Benny, & Vinyl but I'll take what I can get.
Overall? Great chapter & a deserved 10/10.
Heard you accidentally leaked a later chapter? Damn I was too late lol! Oh well, fingers crossed for a Saturday bonus!
Btw quite nice of ya to recommend actual episodes to get a feel of certain characters even though I had/have no intention to do. The sentiment is there & is much appreciated though.
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If not a comic, a dramatic reading. Either way, I agree. Though Some type of motion media would be fucking amazing.
Starlight was already the most complex character of the series to begin with, so it was pretty easy to give her more depth to make her more interesting. And of course Trixie is going to be there to support her favorite stage hoof/friend.
Like Chris said, he's kind of a dick, but at the same time, he was behind honest about what he saw and how he thought it works.
Ember getting fresh with a mare's man? Oof... I wonder how far that is before it happens if it does. No spoilers, but expect the unexpected.
You're inside to what should have been obvious is ever so keen. Let's see how it all plays out.
... and yes. What is Button's life, now? Heh... such a goofball, though.
Smolder isn't all she likes to play herself up to be. Deep down inside she has a more rational and affectionate side, like many who put on a strong front do. We'll get to see more of her interactions with others.
That it could be a problem... or the best undercover (no pun intended) operation ever. Then again, Celestia's priorities seem to be all over the place with Twilight, Luna, her kingdom, Sombra apparently with Sunset Shimmer... and something else that's still lurking in the background or still being left unsaid.
Celestia has a plan.
... there's always a plan.
Lyra and Bon Bon have been the very best of friends for ages now. Both of them even apparently holding back on the idea that maybe one day they would end up staying together. Then the whole secret agent thing came back to bite Bon Bon in the ass for letting Lyra in on her previous life as a spy and monster hunter. Bon Bon pushing Lyra in close with the humans, namely Sniff, let her see that the humans are not monsters after all. The more time she was able to spend with Sniff, the more she came to admire him... which may or may not end up revealing how much farther than admiration she may feel about him, given how every other mare does... and how she is now allowed to be, she's forced to face an even greater divide between a friend who could have been her lover and a new friend who she wants save and be closer with so they can be lovers.
She feels trapped because she can't rightfully betray either of them and isolated because now she can't be totally honest and open with either of them without losing both.
None of it was intentional, and they both have their reasons for why and how they choose to go about carrying out their mission. Only now, they desire different outcomes.
Sniff is walking a tightrope in his own mind. Sure, he's past the point of looking at the ponies as anything other than talking animals and found the humanity within in. Even allowing himself to be sexually active with them and romantically involved, he did so originally with the mindset of treating Ovens like any other woman he would have before.
Treat her nice, build her up, help her out, bang it out, then send her on her way, with both of them knowing that they were only a temporary thing that never was meant to last or strictly casual sex. Now though? Now he's dealing with females of a culture who have no established standards for dating or casual sex. Even worse, he realized too late that the ratio of mares to stallions did nothing to alleviate the issue of mares still not really getting a shot at finding a relationship because the stallions or passively and romantically disinterested for some reason.
Even more, with Ovens, he compliments his mentality in how she was able to play him, as well as relating to his family issues, which he since solved and has become attached to. Then, adding in Twilight, what started as a battle of wits ended up another bond with him relating to how she holds so much responsibility (albeit hers is substantially greater), that it's changed her whole life where she isn't and can no longer be who she really is except around those she already trusts.
... and then she totally seduced him and offered him anal the first night together. Top tier waifu material. 10 outta 10. 5 stars. Would recommend.
But getting real again, Twilight still has an edge over Ovens because of her willingness to accept his slow approach and encouraging him to do what he is comfortable with and thinks is right.
One mare heavily addresses his physical needs, while find more to feed his urges, while the other tends to his mental and emotional needs.
Damn... another tangent. Regardless, both of these girls give him everything he wants in his women (besides his dick), including the fact that not holding onto any restrictions of a forever relationship so he can have free reign to do as he pleases, despite wanting to keep him to themselves in a real relationship. He's falling for them and is afraid of hurting them but can't find it in himself to back out or go all in. Not physically or emotionally because of what he's afraid of becoming, that he might be the monster like his abuser taught him to be.
Luna is by far the most love-starved, and the falling out with her sister has done nothing to improve that. Kelly, as far as our humans go, might be the most love-starved of the Stranded Seven. Certainly the most sex-starved, even beating out Sniff... possibly. They do both tend to go back and forth with how much their libido influences what they will or won't do."
Cerb is practically a fuck toy with limited functions other than "Dick up" and "Dick later" from his restricted mobility. He's living that good life right now.
AJ and Woody will be having some quality time together.
Yeah, there was only so much I could do with them this time around. However, that's what future chapters are for. (Fingers crossed for the Saturday release to make up for the viewers who got the early read without my editor fixing all my fuck ups.)
Thanks for the high vote, and yes, as I mentioned just above this comment, I fucked up and released the pre-edited version of chapter 85.
Expect some big plays from out of left field and... and... Jesus... it's really hard to know what to expect, even when expecting the unexpected when the unexpected is still kind of the norm.
I try.
Just saw this part of your response. You are one cheeky bastard ya know that?
For real though, it was pretty bold of Twilight to just outright want Peter to pound her ass (in that case, literally).
Don't you worry your encyclopedia noggin Twilight, the teasing will stop eventually & I bet it'll be something out of this world.
Also my head just saw the scenario in which post-sex, Twilight furiously sends letter after letter describing EVERY SINGLE THING Peter did in BIG DETAIL to Princess Sunny up there & the reaction I saw from Celestia is funny AF!
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Hey, come on, man. Gotta have a good sense of humor in all this craziness.
Bold? Maybe... But from her perspective, she was just offering him the chance to do something with her that she knew was an option and he was enjoying himself at the moment.
Oh, I'm sure when the day comes he stops holding back that other ponies he's not fucking are going to be exhausted.
Dear Princess Celestia,
It's been three days since I passed out from Anal-induced Orgasm Exhaustion, and I'm about to have another go of it with a friend.
Or something to that effect, prompting:
Dear Princess Twilight Sparkle,
Pics or it didn't happen.
Then it's up to Twilight to figure out how to attach an MP4 file format to a magic scroll.
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I almost woke up my brother who is sleeping rn. That scenario almost did me in!
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Almost did you in? That was Twilight's problem. She was so close.
Great chapter. Comment section is very interessting to read and answering some of my questions
Hot damn... I can see Luna trolling Celestia with sex related puns that Sunbutt isn't quite getting yet.
Maybe a little cruel to brag with her having a sex life yet a great way to give Celestia a open mind trying it for herself... Damn...
Would it be Kelly making Moon and Sun sing together or rather Sniff making Twilight and Celestia a teacher-Student sandwich?
Or perhaps a Celestia- Twilight & Luna event so we have a full day event
How is the Crystal Castle of Friendship not shacking from Lunas royal orgasming voice?
How is Celestia not sending in the Royal Army because she hear Luna yelling from Ponyville to Canterlot
》Into the future《
Celestia: "Is that a Earthquake?"
Twilight: "Nah, it's Kelly working Luna trough."
Celestia: "Lucky Mare... Guess we have to rise up the challenge!"
*Proceeds to have a orgy with Twilight that has them howling in pleasure*
[Somewhere in the Crystal Empire]
Cadance: "Challenge accepted!"
*Shining Armor shakes in fear and anticipation*
The reader would be like: 👍
(Maybe as gag chapter?)
That's a definite mom response there
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That's the response of a mom not wanting to give up her night out.
Peter is building up his mare roster, at least his bed will never be empty as things go.
Luna could gloat towards Celestia that's he has the best lover ever, perhaps that is what Celestia needs to become happy once more.
Nothing more invigorating than a lover making love to someone, especially if they are lasting ♡
Celestia has no lovers, Luna has two. I think Celestia would like to take 1000 years on the moonfor that kind of company and entertainment
What is Harmony doing with over a week of humans being transported into Equestrias realm? Is she blind to everything? More importantly, what has she done to fix her issues in case the darkness was responsible for it?
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Peter isn't even trying. Also, Chris wasn't either... Funny how that worked out.
Foreshadowing intensifies.
Such is the beauty of love.
Poor Celestia almost had a lover once. However, fate can be a cruel mistress.
What she's always done. Watching, whispering, plotting, and doing all she can to ensure her plans work out.
Not everything thing. She has her limits.
She brought the humans to Equestria. What else can she do?