Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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wonder if they do the i dont really sound like that bit when they re-watch the video
"Rarity!"
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Priceless jabs Fluttershy has on Rarity
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Crouchboob job?
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react team
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off
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Cool !"
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with Fluttershy
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Raritys Sword? Since when did she own it or picked it up?
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while Benny
allowing Rainbow
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god damned
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Immediately Rarity
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Damn! Most epic and longest Evertree fight i ever read! Mindblowing X2
HO
LEE
SHIT
Any pony flying above the Everfree is going to see smoke and craters on point with Dragon Ball Z.
What does burning Timberwolf smell like?
Roundhouse slicer
Roundhouse striker
Roundhouse punisher?
Can't think of something better as a attack name
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Wow that a lot of Ammo used... If Starlight Glimmer cant copy-paste it they will be down to Equestria grade offensiv weapons
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This might just be the best day Luna had after her return from the moon... Maybe worth a holyday?
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Spike was really kicking ass like a champ! Amazing 'blazing inferno' attack
That guy finaly a full flashed out warrior now ♡
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Holy Sssshit... C4 !!! SHIT - GOT - REAL!!!
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Pancakes? ... ... ...
Shit im hungry now...
Holy hell Empty, even when faced with certain death, these ponies & their 100% focus on the humans is astounding. Twilight & Oven have got it BAD for Sniff & Oven's just fueling Twilight's want of being Sniff's one & only pony. Sniff's in a big jam of a situation when this whole scenario is done.
Starlight being super focused on Chris as usual? Their relationship is really fun to look at.
Boy oh boy, Fluttershy & Rarity really cranked up the agression with Cerb. Cerb "wants to do more" now?
It's gonna be something when they get home, at least I can only hope so.
Pinkie, Rainbow, Luna, & Benny coming in clutch! Ya love to see it & also a Pinkie Pie that combines military explosives with her already crazy shit? Disaster waiting to happen. The fun kind I guess.
Applejack & Big Mac's conversation was certainly interesting. "Raising suspicion" eh? Also Applejack has quite the nerve to be glaring at Mac that way considering how touchy she likes to get with Lumberman. They're both raising suspicion if you ask me.
This was quite the INTENSE chapter & 63 is gonna be even more so. I can't wait! This story's so good that I could visualize the scenes & hear the voices I'd imagine the humans would have & as for the ponies? I can hear them as the original VAs funny enough & when I hear the lines you wrote for them in their respective voices? It's even more fun.
Amazing work & now I'm amped for the next one. ❤
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I over injected the sugar for Derpy and Dinky, and I wanted to stress the desperation so many of these lonely mares are dealing with. So... mission accomplished.
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The replay value will be priceless when it gets back to that video.
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That was my thought on the approach.
There's going to be some hurdles just getting there. Stay tuned for that.
As far as depth, I haven't seen one that has as much as I've crammed into mine. Although, I still would argue Your Human and You, or even most of the official stories from The Gentlemen for Mares universe are going to have a wider appeal and far more well-received.
She's the character I appreciate the most because of the fact she's so well-grounded as a character. Story-wise, I love how the dynamics between her and Lumberman have evolved. Much like Cerb, she was the strong and brave powerhouse of the group (in my opinion). Then to have her confidence shattered and having to deal with her whole perception of being able to pull off a victory, despite the odds, evaporates with Kelly's near-death experience. That sense of powerlessness that made her question herself, only to find the strength she needed with Lumberman and realize she wanted more of him in her life. Both emotionally and physically, giving her a new kind of fulfillment and a desire for a relationship was so interesting to write. Adding in her attempts to mimic the humans style of humor just to get closer to him and allowing herself to grow and change is something the show never really did.
Yeah, that was confusion switch to make. Her first interest was the sheer physicality and erotic pleasure she got from it, which was largely why she wanted to have more contact with him. Then, the more he was there for her, there was a switch where it became more of a comfort and reassuring sense of safety that she became more attached to... not sure if I properly conveyed that clearly. Not overtly at least.
That's been the benefit of knowing her bags of tricks and at least understanding the crazy logic she uses, or lack there of. Such as having her distracted by simply saying there was a distraction... genius Benny. Pure genius.
I sure hope so.
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Yeah... I can over-analyze things sometimes.
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Fixed
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Fixed
Except for the sword. It's still Thunder Glides, Rarity just commandeered it.
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It would have been a sight to see, so long as they weren't caught in the fallout.
As for what burning Timberwolves smell like?
... victory.
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Something with a bit more flair and... come on. This is Rarity we're talking about. The Spinning attack she did with the elbow drop is actually a wrestling move she did while she was a pro-wrestler. That's not widely known since it's canon to the comics.
They did use a lot of ammo, but I kept count, they still got some spare rounds left. As for replicating them with magic... it might be too complicated of a composition to not explode like the gas did. I had to look it up, and modern gas is actually extremely complex given all the additives mixed in.
Oh, she had a blast. Much like when the black vines threatened Equestria, she was more than happy to jump into the frey and get her hooves dirty.
Spike never got enough credit in the show, and with trying to impress Cerb and make Sniff proud, on top of hopefully winning over Rarity (RIP to that dream), he finally had the motivation he needed to step up... and he might have had a little extra help to finally actualize this after being saved by Cerb.
Only Pinkie could pull something like that off.
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No quick extract for the humans, since they can't be teleported out and are way too heavy to fly out, they had to fight. And Oven Fresh and Twilight, they both have their motivations, and each one is only compelling the other to dig in deeper for their claims on him.
There is so much more to look forward to with them. Believe me.
First, they need to get home and have him patched up. Then they can explore what "doing more" is. So long as there are no further interruptions.
Everything with Pinkie has to be over the top. That's just how she operates. Rainbow? She's always battle-ready and looking for a fight. Luna = Pent up rage and boredom. Then, Benny? Dude has the training he never really got to use. This was his time to shine... Also, stay tuned for the next chapter.
I had a lot of fun having them work together so seamlessly that they could carry on a conversation while tag-teaming a hoard. And as for raising suspicion, Big Mac doesn't know that the others are still trying to figure out sex, while he's already planing on having it. He is very concerned about not raising suspicion because he wants to get all up in that V.
I try hard to make sure what they say will sound natural for their characters, even taking into consideration how they're adapting they're ways of thinking and their verbage to with what they're learning from their human counterparts.
And yes, the next chapter will be intense, in a lot of different ways. Just be ready.
I'm glad to hear your enthusiasm, but to be amped for this next one is the reason I wanted to make sure my readers didn't have to wait a full week between these chapters.
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Thank you for the response. Might I say that Spike's realization of winning over Rarity who is infatuated with Cerb being completely dead in the water is sad. I've heard it basically didn't even work out in the show itself so that's double sad.
First Derpy, now Spike both in story & canonically. I truly want Derpy to be happy because when I read that scene of her holding in her tears so her daughter wouldn't see her mother in pain, I visualized that scenario & hearing her say all the wishes & wants in her respective voice cut super deep. I only know what her voice sounds like thanks again to my brother & it's so innocent sounding that the dialogue you wrote for her in that scene was hauntingly beautiful.
You got one of hell of a story.
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It had to happen, and if not for Cerb saving his life, and the pep-talk from Sniff, things could have turned bitter and maybe even violent from Spike. I do have plans for him, but it will take a while to get there. At least, he has a lot of room to grow.
Derpy's story had to hit home for how much she is over worked in the show and the lack of love she was given for so long. As for her story in here... not sure how to describe it for what's to develop. However, I do love her character.
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Now this is unrelated to this chapter but a previous trilogy chapter, specifically "The Dance" segment. I was wondering about the behaviors of Shining Armor & Cadence with each of the humans they danced with, especially Cadence with Cerb who Flurry Heart took a liking to I believe.
Do you think something affair like is blossoming between them & the humans? It's a little concerning given that they got a whole kid together. The dirty dancing each did with their human was a little too much, not that I have a major problem with it. Even Fluttershy & Rarity seemed to pick up something from Cadence's behavior with Cerb.
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You're right to pick up on my intention for the readers to look into. How will it play out will be interesting. Not many things play out as simply as most people would like to assume. However, it is clear there was an attraction.
Keep in mind, they didn't really fully understand all the implications of their actions. At least not to the human standards.
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Oh okay. Btw correct me if I'm wrong but I was looking at the cover art for this story & was trying to see which human was which
From Left to Right
Lumberman, Kelly, Chris, Sniff(Peter), Benny, Becky & Cerb(Justin)
Is that close?
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From left to right;
Benny
Becky
Lumberman
Sniff
Chris
Kelly
Cerb
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Thank you. Do you plan on having images within the story ayain. I enjoyed seeing the characters in color or has that become too difficult? If so? No problem & very understandable.
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Working on it.
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Damnit... you know, I swear that's probably the third time I had to go in and change that.
Thanks, though.
i admit, the length of the story so far, makes it kinda hard to keep up/in mind why they dot this military operationn again
Harmony only saving grace is the damage reduction, plotarmor & overall non lethal approach...
Damn that made me laugh
Chapter 62
He didnt just Dragonfire mailed all the Timberwolfs to Celestia or?
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Surprise Dragon fire express delivery
Edit: My suggestion for the attack is:
' Razor Hurricane '
Spike becomes a man... Ones hes eye open to female goods hes the perfect high to enjoy that ASSsss
Raritys combat hair? Fabulous
I can totally picture an emotional call back to the recording, especially if the whole thing with the darkness is anything to go by.
EDIT: This was a phenomenal chapter, and there was a lot to take away from this. Like, Spike? With the EXPLOSIVE fire? That shit was insane!
And just like that I'm terrified lmao Never doubt The Pink One hahaha
That entire fight scene though, hot damn the ponies, and dragon, really let their inner badass show, and I LOVE IT!!
Funny since many Earth politicians have Shit for Brains
After this encounter they should pull a emphasis on creating medical kits and how to use them.
Cerberus is kicking ass and taking names.
Chris is kicking norms and taking ass
That was epic, one for the mlp history books
Badass action and probably half the Everfree Forest worth in Timberwolve population.
The aftermath will not be so simple with Cerbs deep cut wounds, I hope Spike take no serious damage from overcharge of his fire-lungs?
Spikes mentality it unleashed?
Wonder I he might be main character material after that day.
What would the ideal combat soundtrack for this major fight?
Instrumental version to not interfere with the reading.
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One of the hardest parts, aside from keeping track of everyone in the fight, was counting all the shots fired.
I'm sure he'll heal up just fine. Dragons and fire go together like fish and water.
Nah. Spike knows that the humans are taking center stage. That's why he looks up to them.
Maybe some Five Finger Death Punch or just the Doom Slayer soundtrack. Then again, maybe go something more original and orchestral, like Mortal Coil, by Fox Amoore, which you can listen to here. He also did another song Called Operation: War, which you can listen to, or freely download.
Not a bad example, but maybe a bit too techno-industrial for my taste in terms of theatrical battle music.