Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Probably the darkest chapter yet.
Chapter well written.
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Some of the most traumatic events people go through are not even events where they are the ones being injured. Watching others suffer, and being helpless to do anything, especially if it involves children, haunt them until the last of their days. This even will get touched on a bit more as the story goes on, as it is his biggest demon that he has to overcome.
And I did have a bit of a hard time going forward with this part of the story. Because, yes, it is pretty damn dark. However, these are some of the realities our cruel world has to offer. So, I decided to go the route of people who have returned home from their time in the service, damaged from the atrocities committed against the innocent.
Damn... Luna has the most messed up Empathy after Changelings... Add a drunken state and this drama is only a matter of time. That was pretty harsh. They handel it pretty well non the less.
So since the humans are anti magical i guess they can just break shield by shoulder checking it?
Levitation is probably also something that don't work on them?
Its pretty messed up how mutch Twilight has to shoulder on her own. If i had suddenly to manage her place i would be equaly lost...
Kelly swings both ways...
Why not share Big Daddy?
Sharing is caring
You know... Double the fun
How effectiv can Luna visit and interact with human dreams? In theory Luna could link herself with Big Red and Kelly for some... Educational lessons
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Luna takes the dreams of others very seriously, so coming into contact with Cerb's dreams and her losing her shit is understandable. Not only that, hearing that he could freak out and hurt someone, only amplifies the reasons to be angry.
As for Twilight, that's how it's pretty much always been. "Hey, I can't do this, you go." True, it's usually a test, but Twilight often is sent into danger half-blind.
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And Kelly does swing both ways, but she only has eyes for Big Mac. Although... you might be onto something if she is still fighting her promiscuous ways. I suppose only time will tell how she might want to proceed. She struggles with the thought of being sexual with Mac, at least she does when she's not all horny and itching for an orgasm.
Only time will tell how she reacts to the prospect of fooling around with a mare.
Can't we have some Batponys making a apperance? There sooo cuuuteee
Do humans fear or love vampponys?
Can the humans borrow a book or two?
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Pinkie Pie is pretty tame or? Can somebody point out that if the world isn't a cartoon show that Pinkie Pie might be a chaos mage?
Can't explain why she can pull her stunts otherwise.
Perhaps chaotic magic don't need a horn like traditional magic?
Is fluttershy a normal pegasus or a batpony?
Strange what ideas/questions i get sometimes...
When do they meet Discord?
Will Cerberus sucker Punch him for apperantly coming out of nowhere like always?
Discord is magic and humans are antimagic... might hurt him?
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Bat ponies might make an appearance. Luna shows up after all, and she has bat ponies.
Pinkie Pie already knows that the humans lives aren't all sunshine and rainbows. She heard their horror stories. How she chooses to proceed will be revealed.
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Fluttershy is a pegasus. She's only a bat (type) pony when she's a vampire (Flutterbat) pony.
Meeting Discord? That's... No spoilers will be revealed as the story progresses.
And Discord is all magic. His body is a construct. What type of damage could be delivered by one who is anti-magic has yet to be seen.
Very dark chapter. It was good but dark. On another note I wonder if and when the humans sit down with the ponies and have “the talk”.
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It was dark, but there had to be a reason for Benny to suffer in silence like he has so far. Something so dark that would explain his reluctance to open up and relive what he went through. He almost did with Twilight and passed over Pinkie's offer as well. There was also Cadance and Shining's offer, and he turned them down before even asking what kind of help would be available for him.
As for the humans having "the talk," with them, only Kelly has been shown to have that conversation. As far as we know, everyone else is still treating them like cartoon characters that need to be sheltered from their perversions and sexual lifestyles.
'Becky' was the sick one...
I just noticed a problem. Basicly fuel start to break down after 2-3 months. How do they keep up there energy supply? If they dont use it up its going to break down into something that cant be used at some point...
I guess Twilight or royal research need to take the fuel and a car or generator to study it to replicate it or find viable alternativ energy/fuel sources.
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Hygienic items like soup etc. need to be replaced as well. They natural protectiv fat layer of human skin is different from Pony coat cleaning one or?
Damn... If one thinks about basics needs out of human Civilizations its get rough pretty fast...
How to keep shaved? If i dont cut it at least ones a week i look quite different. So im told.
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Again... I keep swapping the names of those two. I really need my editor back. @__@
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They know that fuel will be an issue for them and it will be addressed. I've already written far enough ahead where it's being looked into.
Hygiene items won't be an issue. Also, you ever washed your hair with Mane 'n Tail? That stuff is amazing!
As for shaving. Benny has a few razors left over. Otherwise, sheers and straight razors can be picked up out in town.
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Your going quite well! <)
For the rest you have your fans =3
Ones i repaired my bloody pc i can help a bit
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Thanks for adressing that issues. Love the details in your story.
This Chapter let us look on Celestia like a 'i keep the nation running' type and leave everything dangerous/ time consuming to others... To be fair, she was alone a millenia
PDST is never easy to process. IN a matter of fact, one of my stories focused on that and in 2 planned ideas, I had a scene idea similar to what you used here
Bloody hell 2 years my pc coolant is broken. To see me complaining so long ago Really should get that fixed soon
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Actually Becky got bruised once, after Cerb thought she was a civilian casualties in the ambush when he had one of his episodes.
So he never attacked one of the girls, but definitely layed hands on one of them to save them.
The dark sides of the world we pretend not to know...
People like us can count themself so lucky not ending up like these woman.
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I don't think I ever mentioned Cerb ever bruising Kelly or any female. He had bad reactions around them, but never hurt them. At times he may have grabbed them to move them around, but to say he harmed them... Maybe I'm having a stroke moment and you have to point that out to me.
Well Twilight, if all of that aside from sending Sniff and his pals back to Earth is bothering you, why not tell Celestia about it along with asking her why she screwed you over like that? If I were you, I'd be pissed that someone I trusted simply threw me into the ocean not caring if I sink or swim regardless if they were aware of it or not, and call them out for how they did it. And after that, I would decide by then if I want to start a new relationship with them or simply cut them out of my life.
Howdy, I've been enjoying this story so far. As you said in previous chapters, the Stranded Seven has been giving the ponies a major "Pleasantville" education, leaving them to wonder why certain topics such as sex and giving birth seem alien to them. Probably has something to do with this new evil force that the mysterious entity is contacting Trixie about. No spoilers now. I'm taking in this story ten chapters plus extra in between at a time.
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That would be the grownup and logical thing to do, but these are ponies, so our normal logic kind of goes out the window for them. For Twilight, she's still stuck in that phase of idolizing Celestia and putting her on a pedestal. That, and following the events of the series, this has been the trend for these two, and things generally end up working out for Twilight in the end, so she's never really had a reason to try and change things. It's only now becoming a problem for her in a way she doesn't know how to handle.
Otherwise, you're right to make that callout.
No spoilers from me. This story doesn't hand out easy answers, but if you pay attention whats happening, not only what's being said, the character's observations, but the actions taken and the reactions, you can avoid some of the Red Herrings.
Otherwise... get ready for a lot more excitement/shenanigans.