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Sniff, Twilight, and Oven are all in on the plans to tour Canterlot? Twilight confessed to Oven Fresh that she has feeling for Sniff but thinks she missed her chance? AND Oven Fresh is scheming to let Twilight in on the "secret"?
Oh... it's gonna get lewd. REAL lewd.
Starlight seems already hooked on the act itself of real-deal sex and the side effect "magic boost" of human/pony lovin' (as hinted at in Trixie's dream journeys) and poor poor Chris lucky bastard has to see an addiction cycle be born right before his eyes. This pair's clop scenes are top notch.
Rarity and Fluttershy are getting more open minded about sharing their human and how to win him over... And more comfortable with EACHOTHER...
This trio's clop scenes are going to be priceless. I cannot find a word to describe the level of anticipation for this ship.
EmptyPlotFiller, you are one of the best world-building authors I have ever read. Contemporary fiction and bestseller authors included.
Maybe I have bias since PONIES, but I cannot put this story down.
oven fresh got rape face
Two words : MY GOD!
Twilight thinks she's lost her chance at getting some of ol Sniffy eh? Not if Oven Fresh has anything to say about it.
Also, now that Ovens is spilling the tea (likely about Sniff's sexual exploits) to a giant egghead like Twilight? It's gonna get saucy...very saucy 👀.
Sniffy is Cerb 2.0. except he's higher because he's got a royal pining for him even though he doesn't know it...yet. Can't wait for that confession to Sniff IF she chooses to do it but given what Ovens has to say to Twilight at the end there?
I smell a very erotic event about to take place in Canterlot between a human & his two special "someponies" (not official....yet) Good luck Twilight. Time for some "education" 😏
Hinting at a fight in the next chapter between the nerd & baker? Only fight they'll be fighting over is that d*** 🤣
"You owe me more now, you son of a bitch" Chris, for all that is good cover your d*** because this bitch is on the hunt & you're the prey. Starlight ain't giving up! You know how you can feel something when you read or watch something happen to a person's private parts?
Yeah that was me when Starlight wouldn't stop sucking Chris off after he climaxed. Let my man's little man breathe woman...mare...pony...whatever lol!
I don't know how to feel about Cerb, Rarity & Fluttershy this time around other than "wow Fluttershy & Rarity going lesbo mode? Neat" They've figured out that Cerb knows they want him & that's great but now it leads to another issue. I hope it all works out in the end for this trio.
Ya gotta stop fucking with big red some time soon my dawg. Let em have at Kelly lol.
Rainbow might be the only one who knows about sexual innuendo & jokes huh? That's cool. Stay in your lane miss skittle, Cerb is taken but at least you got Becky. Wonder how far their relationship will go tbh. They don't know it but they've already lost the bet lol.
Funny stuff between Pinkie & Benny. Don't think I didn't see that last comment on last weekend's chapter "dun dun dunnn" probably just a joke but.... 👀
Once again, Lumberman & Applejack still the show for most adorable pairing in this story. She wants so bad to say what she wants to but everytime she does, it's when she's loopy so ol Woody wouldn't take it seriously. Soon little farmer soon.
It's still fuck Celestia until I have a reason to like her again lol.
Lastly, that's a lustful looking Ovens on the art cover. That's quite the face to wake up too.
Amazing chapter. Despite my sadness about Flutters, Rarity & Cerb's situation, this was full of things for me to think about & speculate over until next week.
A 10/10 man! Keep doing your thing! 😁
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We'll see where this trading of secrets leads the two. However... clearly by now, you've noticed I'm not the kind of writer to make anything too easy or predictable.
Emph... yeah, she's got an addiction. Emphasis on the dick. But... top-notch? Wow. Thanks for saying so. Wasn't really sure how those scenes would be received. Appreciated, sure, but quality-wise, I'm glad to hear you say that.
Three's still a bit for this trio to get through, but that doesn't mean it won't be worth the wait.
Seriously, you flatter me too much. Please don't stop. There's a lot more to build up on. Also, more of a rhetorical question, but how interested are you in learning more about Oven Fresh's family?
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That's not a... goddamnit... Well, it's still adoroable.
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You can expect more sauce, obviously. Our lovable little ponies are beginning their first sexual journey because of these fine human specimens. What's not clear is how Twilight will react to what Ovens divulges to her potential royal partner in crime
He's finally might become the poacher his friends nick named him to be. Actually, there are two other princesses that are single. Wonder if Sniff will ever become the greedy monster he's trying nit to be.
After all that build up and anticipation, and Twilight ended up doubling down on trying to be the best Princess of Friendship she could after all. Good on her. Let's just hope the conversation that was cut away from goes well. We'd hate to see our little adorkable purple butt Sparkle turn deceptive like other iterations.
Yeah... she was mad for giving her best, only getting one taste, then having her fun interrupted so abruptly. She was Reeeeealy looking forward to getting Licked out.
Silly pony, why she gotta go and try to change the name like that?
I think far to often writers are so anxious to get to the actuon that they overlook the chance to show some real character and abandon too much logic for laughs and lust.
So, while Rarity may have love and the desire to dot on Cerb to win him over, Fluttershy can't stop but look beyond what they can bith clearly see and keep Cerb's mental and emotional state her focus. Given her naturing background, she would have to caught on that Cerb’s change in behavior was too fast, and too good, to be true.
Gotta love that mare.
As for her propositioning Rarity to be an item, kinda funny how all their close, personal, supportive, and living physical touching landed them in the same boat that Cerb fell into.
They needed each other to help them through their troubling times and that tryst and admiration for each other just so happened to blossom into something they never would have expected.
Awe, come on, bro. Kelly may be Drip for all the rught reasons, but she's not heartless to the point she'd force herself on Big Red, or Little Big Red, just to feed her fix.
Give it time. All Big Mac needs is too know his little sis is doing okay and then the sex can be guilt free.
Yep. I'm sure you've caught on that Rainbow Dash has been the only one to ever stress the importance of respecting the humans personal boundaries, as well as use dirty jokes and innuendos. Becky has been chatting it up with her rainbiw friend. kinda makes you wonder with this medschool dropout has been teaching her.
As for having eyes for Cerb, kinda strange that Becky would bith point it out and then almost immediately play it down. But, Cerb has impressed Rainbow Dash. Can't change the way a mare thinks or feels. That might lead to a confrontation if she's not careful. Then again, look how protective Starlight got.
*dramatic recurve music plays*
Having to purge the system myself, that shit isn't fun, but it certainly does help. Also... whiskey shits are fucking horrible. And... what comment from last week's chapter might you be referring to?
It's still so fun to write these two, but I wondered if showingbjust how committed Lumberman was to AJ might have turned some heads. But, that's real dedication right there. Not just that, kinda odd that I would bring attention to the toilet paper like that... hmm... odd.
Regardless, so long as she gets the all clear, homebound she will be.
I'm keeping that mystery alive. Muh-ha-ha-ha!
Nervous, embarrassed, bashful, excited, and horny... what do ya expect?
Well, needless to say, this day for them is going to be crazy hectic with so much going on. Two mares now know the full secrets of sex. Both want to expand their pool of mares to help keep up with their human stallion's needs, but only one knows that they don't have to keep it a secret. Then, when youvlook at all the growing sexual tension growing, conversations that need to be had, potential conflicts that may get stored up, and all the other crazy shit that always eems to pop up (looking at you Pinkie), there's a reason the next chapter starts off a Five-Parter.
Did I mention the next part is going to be a Five-Parter? Oops, I guess you know now.
Seriously, though. Exoect a lot of shit get wild and tense at times. After all, think of all the secrets everyone is holding onto.
That a lot of fun for the humans to come
Heavy topics all over... This will continue even if they stop pilling up Dont think Celestia will make it any easyer...
Any plans for flathead? His cell cant be that comfortable
How about Celestias plans on her Spys? Lyra and Bonbon cant do more than observ without getting against a Royal decree...
Applejack will need Zecoras potion to get her body fixed. If she can heal teeth a hoof or three should be so hard to do. Basicly the same. More or less
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It was chapter 63 when you replied to my comment about the only platonic relationship being between Benny & Pinkie. I still wouldn't object to them becoming an item only if you could build up to it.
Personally, Pinkie doesn't seem like a romantic & this is the same one had a whole ass child with Weird Al Yankovic. By the way when I found out that his character only appeared in like 2 episodes & neither gave off a shipping vibe, the only word that came to mind upon seeing the finale was : FORCED!
I still stand by that. I hate forced romatic relationships.
What a ya gonna do? It's a TV-Y show lol. The finale was alright. If I'd been a fan of the show, maybe it would've hit harder...maybe. It had a good 9 years which is still impressive to me. Y'all really loved that show. Respect to keeping it alive even as a new generations comes through.
I salute you bronies motherfuckers lol You may be strange at times but hey man fuck it if it makes you happy.
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Things aren't always going to be easy for our pones and humans. As for Celestia, she's going to have her hooves full for a while.
Flathead is going to be waiting for a while. While it hasn't been addressed yet, the investigation regarding the Apple Family Farm inccident has not yet been completed. Might take a few days in story.
Bon Bon and Lyra are still busy doing their spy stuff. Unfortunately, being a good spy doesn't mean doing super sneaky stuff all the time. Plus, they couldn't really do a whole lot while Celestia was there, and Bon Bon certainly can't be caught doing S.M.I.L.E. agent stuff by Luna. So, it's all kinda lowkey at the moment.
Sadly, since AJ suffered a blood-related injury (their term, not mine, even if it is), it's a bit outside of her familiarity for treatments. Maybe something to help deal with the pain, but Nurse Redheart already got her the pills she needed for that.
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Ah, that. Well, Pinkie is an oddball amongst oddballs. She was however the first one to openly admit that dating a human could be fun. Knowing that, you can expect Pinkie to do something double, double stupid.
i didn't like the hard finality of the last episode, since there was still so much story to tell and unresolved and unexplored events and concepts.
Although, the shipping put on full display, and others that were either hinted at or flashed by on the screen was interesting to see. For Pinkie and Grilled Cheese/Weird Al hooking up and having their little Cheese Cake, I thought that was fitting for her. While not as crazy as her, his character would have been just random and goofy enough to put up with her insanity.
Also, a word to the wise. Never put your dick in crazy.
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is starlight adorable too?
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Odd... Hoofs Injury should be within Zecoras area. Otherwise Zecoras potion kinda lose there point.
Plus Kelly and Becky already fall out of action. With AJ it would seem you lose month worth of recovery to use them in any capacity to use. Big Red and Lumberman as well since they take care of them...
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But of course, she is... just don't make her angry.
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I'd say it's more that Zecora deals with magic-related illnesses and simple injuries. And AJ is one tough cookie. She'll be fine before you know it.
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she not angry just horny that far far worse
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Actually, she left both angry and horny... that is thee worst.
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there only one answer allowed
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A wise man would know better than to say no.
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but seriously now just wondering is sunburst going to enter the mix with starlight in the future?
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He'll come around sooner or later... probably sooner than later.
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how interested are you in learning more about Oven Fresh's family?
Very highly, the potential first impressions that Sniff and the Princess of Friendship would have on Oven Fresh's mom and dad.... The hotshot soldier mom in particular could have some highly entertaining or perhaps even suspicious reactions.
I'm really anticipating the "Sniff charms the entire capitol city completely on accident I swear" arc. So many possibilities! This whole story rocks.
In chewing through every chapter, all eight hundred thousand words, there is only one part that frustrates me. Waiting 7 days for the next bite!
In a good way of course...
Your story is Quality...
Presented to the high rollers lounging in luxurious surroundings and delivered in an imposing suede lined briefcase, opened with panache as eager faces and hungry eyes are hit by the light streaming out. The fabled and coveted Good $#!%
Are we gonna flashback to the conversation between Ovens & Twilight? I would love to visual the look on that egghead's face as Ovens recounts her secrets about Sniff.
He's gonna be in for a great time.
It's also really mature how Twilight was able to accept that she had lost her chance with Sniff thanks to that witch (yes I'm still pissed about her thank you very much lol).
Good on Ovens to imply a little something something for her so that they both could get their man in the end.
I get the feeling as Twilight was recounting everything, that cup was overflowing with bourbon but she didn't give a fuck. She just had to get everything off her chest. Correct?
I could just see inside of her mind after Ovens asked if she was mad that she was dating Sniff. I just know she wanted to throw her through a fucking wall lol.
Rarity, Fluttershy, & Cerb have now moved to second place.
I adore this arc with Sniff, Twilight & Ovens. It's really good.
Onward to Canterlot!
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Weeeeeeeeeeell, we might get some face time with Oven's maker.
He'll get there... eventually.
With any luck, I'll be able to put out two chapters in a week at least once a month.
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There will be some referencing back to their conversation, though there will be more important things to focus on.
He's there for a fun time, not a long time.
It's what only what a Princess should be expected to do.
Oven Fresh = Good Pony
LOL! Maybe?
Nah... Celestia, maybe.
Every relationship is going to be different. We're all going to have our favorites.
Twilight gave Sniff an endearing look.
If only Sniff caught that look she was giving him. Oh that would've been a damn scene right there. I had to visualize her giving him that look and it's so fucking adorable.
Got a feeling she'll be giving him that look a lot more after what Ovens has told her. ;)
What if and hear me out on this, she becomes sex addicted to Sniff ala Starlight & Chris except there is genuine love in her heart for Sniff? It's not that I don't think Starlight isn't in love with Chris, it's just that lately it's been more about them fucking at any chance they get & as you said before, Chris didn't even have a date with Starlight before losing his & taking her virginity.
Maybe they'll actually slow down & go on a real date but that's for you to decide. As you said of Sniff, he's here for a good time, not a long time & I feel that sentence rings true for the rest of the stranded...even Chris despite him living his best wet dream lol.
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Had he caught it, or at least made it clear that he did, that could have ended up changing a lot of things.
Sucks I can't post more often than my current schedule.
That was one of the problems with Chris and Starlight. They really did ending up getting together too fast. They were friends for all of two or three days, despite Chris actually having a big impact on her for how accepting of her as he was. Plus... him just being a big old sweetheart, mixed with her guilt and how amazing his touch seems to be didn't really allow them a reason to slow down.
So, it's not like there isn't anything legitimate between the two, they're just really caught up at the moment with enjoying the highlights of sex. I mean, I remember my (technically third time) first time with someone I was serious with who actually cared enough to make sex enjoyable. We got carried away, and I was the one saying "Oh, we're doing this? Awesome!" I do tend to draw a lot of real-life experiences for this story and its characters.
When it comes to Sniff, he's going to fair better by making a meaningful relationship exists before pursuing sex. As for Twi getting hooked on sex, or any of the others when they get the chance, that has yet to be seen.
As I said, though, no two are going to be exactly the same.
I've been reading this story for a long while & only now am I just realizing that Starlight is the only one to have legit gotten the d*** from one of the stranded 7.
Honestly? Given that we know Sniff is godlike at sex, the moment Ovens & Twilight actually get to experience what a d*** can do will be one for the history books & will probably be the funniest thing I've ever read.
Not gonna lie, that threat from Starlight kinda sent shivers down my spine. I don't think it was smart of Chris to ignore that because now when they get another chance, Star is gonna wreak havoc on his manhood & despite his hopes of her showing restraint when he asks her not to got too hard? We saw how thirsty and MAD she was before left. She's gonna make him her mare & there isn't a damn thing that's gonna stop her & that might actually out these two in the end lol.
Who knows what'll transpire? Wait you do lol.
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She's the only one to actually have any sex at all since the humans showed up. There's been a handful of some that have pleasured themselves, two who did so as a show for each other, two others who have been helping each other, so while Sniff did give Oven's the night of her life, it's only been Chris to actually go all the way.
And yes, that was intentional for all characters.
Oven's is already craving that D. She's just going to have to convince Sniff to go through with it... if she can.
Well, come on. What was Chris supposed to do? Not answer the door and risk Becky walking in on him? That wouldn't have gone over well. Both him and Starlight didn't want to risk it, but since Chris couldn't think of an excuse to keep her there, she irrationally blamed him for not returning the favor. Neither really had a choice, because even if Starlight had stuck around, even she knew both how it would have looked and was too horny to not fuck up somehow.
Regardless, Starlight is too clever not to get what she wants. Don't you worry about her... although, me saying that doesn't indicate you shouldn't worry about Chris.
LOL. Damn straight I do.
The Dance three parter was the most exciting chapter in this story so far. It was a moment away from the chaos from prior chapters & it let the characters just hang & get to know one another & it was the start of something new for some of the story's biggest & my personal favorite pairings like
Twilight & Sniff & now Ovens
Applejack & Lumberman which you knock it out of the park with the adorableness btw.
So much more too.
Do you think we'll have another parter like this sometime?
This new chapter is going to be split into parts but I don't believe it'll be as fun like 'The Dance'. There's been too much sadness for everything to be just peachy right now.
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"Compensating" will be a 6 parter, and after that, there will be additional mulit-parters after that. This story is approaching a major turn in momentum and potential.
Hmm... well... the setup and unknowns are very different from The Dance chapters. However, there will be a similar theme of things going on in the background that will help bring these characters together, as well as hint at some future dangers that will want you to see them come together even more.
This next parter is going to have a lot of heart and hilarity.
Gotta ask.
What is your favorite or one of your favorite things in the making of this story in regards to characters, events, etc?
I know you love the adorableness of Apples & Woody as do I but is there is anything else that you like doing with this story?
Btw while I was reading 'The Dance' I took a listen to the song Lumberman danced with Applejack to. The most adorable shit I've ever heard. Smooth Woody, very smooth.
"Oh Woody" Don't ya just wanna see them kiss but for real this time? Ain't no way these two ain't got something brewing between them. Only time will tell when AJ decides to confess without the loopy pills.
Also that's the one time & only time I'll ever listen to a country song lol.
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For me, it's been a mix of the fight scenes (RD vs Starlight and the Timberwovles battles stand out strongly in my memory), but also the internal conflicts both sides go with. People dealing with their past, ponies trying to find a way out of their loneliness and longing for companionship, or one of the big ones of Twilight finally breaking under all the weight of responsibilities she had coming to a head.
Giving these characters personality and depth in what could easily be a shallow and "Fill in the blanks with your own headcanon" has been rewarding to me. Some of that plays in with the self-discovery some of the ponies go through, but also the humans dealing with their flaws and trying to work through their trauma since so much of it relates to shit I've dealt with.
I grew up on country music but listen to everything. However, Andy Giggs song "You won't ever be lonely" is a song that I still listen to and sing. it's a beautiful song with a powerful delivery (even if a little corny), but fit the setting for those two so damn well that I couldn't help but put it in. It was almost an abuse of power to put a song that so perfectly matched what Lumberman was offering and what AJ needed, but I used it anyway.
Also, you can expect another song by Andy Giggs to pop up with those two down the road. Sadly, it will take a while, but it will be well worth it.
Heh, they got some things to work through before they'll really have the chance. Like I said, this last chapter is the start to a lot, and it's going to be a very long day for all these ponies.
Yeah, country isn't for everyone. But, it is what it is. Glad you could at least enjoy that one.
You can expect more music to play a role in the storytelling as time goes on.
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"ponies trying to find a way out of their loneliness" This hurts given Derpy's situation. She's only been in the back of head after Starlight kept soliciting Chris for the other mares in town & besides Star herself, my god does Derpy deserve something happiness & if not for her then for her daughter.
BTW you made me love how adorable the baby characters are & especially with how they interact with our stranded 7 via Chris with foals & Dinky & Cerb with Flurry Heart. Nice stuff.
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Derpy does deserve a little love in her life.
Dinky is by far the cutest thing I've written so far. Flurry Heart is right on up there, too.
Will bacon head be making an appearance? As you said this story is around 2016 & that human version of MLP was already around during this time period.
If so? That'd be interesting to see how she would react to humans that are not like her "humans".
If no? Oh well. Still an amazing story overall.
I wish she had better stories on here that didn't just use her for shipping purposes & actually had her as an integral part of the story.
She's used well in the on going "It's Complicated" fic...
as a supporting character but no biggie.
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Sunset Shimmer cannot be avoided, story-wise, since her absence from this timeline does not sit well with how they understand this pony world to work. One way or another, she'll be brought into the story.
If they meet up, it will be interesting.
Can't say I've read much with her in the stories. I had a few ideas about stories with her, though.
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This story is definitivly one of the finer pieces of art.
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Its not rape if they both want it
But definitiv her succubuss want some sugar...
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S rank entertainment. Ones finished this will be one of the top storys of Fimfiction
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Indeed
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Zecora is still the best source since magic is a general no go ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Dawww Starlight Terminator impression is to... Die for
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She is dangerous... She might suck all humans dry...
Dun DUN DUUUNNN
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Indeed Chris can hopefully get enough water and food in him to not end as the Mummys of Ägypten.
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Also Twilight might notice how stange it is that noone knows it yet they didnt run extinct (yet...)
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There definitivly one adorable couple
That picture of Ovens..... perfection.
Also Apple-pone loopy on pain meds is priceless lmao
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Or
Just
I am unsure...
Got ones out of a OP room and my visitors told me I was two hours totally out of mind saying shit not making sense or telling things i would never told other on my right mind.
Poor AJ
I wonder how long AJ and Kelly need to recover from all this?
Something I love about your story that I need to implement in all my stories is the aftermath and recovery. In the chapters I wrote and currently editing when a find a hour for it, the aftermath is lacking and the recovery is lacking. It needs to be added, re-reading yourself give me literally a checklist I included to add for my following chapters.
Damn fine writing and inspiration for future works of art in text form.
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Showing the aftermath and recovery doesn't always have to be done. I choose to do it because it allowed to me to show a lot more depth, vulnerability, and growth for certain characters. Part of the story is how some of the stronger characters had to accept their weaknesses, and others were learning completely new sides of themselves.
Overall, it does provide the benefit of showing how human a character can be. That they do get hurt, they can't be their pinnacle self at all times... or that they have cravings that make them wake up before the sun rises and hilarity ensues.