Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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.....is the order magic.....killing fluttershy or what ever discord was talking about harming the ponies in anyway cause id hate this to end up like spiderman noir where peter parker's radioactive jizz slowly killed mary jane every time they did the deed and yes thats an actual comic think old man logan but with spidey
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I could see why you might think that, but all Discord was able to observe was the Order depleating Fluttershy of the magic she had been imbued with. He even could see that the way her body was adjusting to it, it hadn't been her first time. As far as he knows, as he told Trixie,
So, even acknowledging before that he assumed Fluttershy would be fine, he's not sure what the side effects would be and that only magic itself or constructs would be destoyed.
Also, there's still something about the anger that has a very different effect, or at least at the rate Order affects any magic it comes in contact with, as well as Chaos Magic being the most affected.
I can't give too much away, but it's going to be hard to tell what's really going on until they can find a pony that's capable of detecting or seeing magic like Discord can.
So Discord has returned & has officially fucked my head up with almost everything he has said in this chapter, specifically the section with Trixie & Twilight.
I'm gonna have to reread this chapter to really get what is occurring with him.
The meet up between him & Cerb was very appreciated. It was really tense at first but I'm glad Cerb proved his worth of being with Fluttershy.
Discord is the absolute homie for agreeing to help Fluttershy & Rarity with their foal situation. Points for ol Dizzy. It's just very unfortunate that he actually can't do so. I don't like that he lied but hey he wants to see his best friend happy.
Also pour one out for Discord. Just like Pinkie, ya done goofed. Although I'm not sure where his romantic interest in Shy came from. Guy just seems like someone who's whole thing is just utter chaos with occasional friendship. I simply don't see it unless you're just taking from the 'Ship-Tease' stuff that was in the show.
Speaking of Pinkíe? I don't think I need to guess just what she was doing up in that room for.......10 to 15 minutes?! DAMN girl!
Star & Prim. Just one word for that scene : Neat
Twilight just out here casually being sexy for Sniff is just straight funny to me. How has he not just decided to dive deep in her & Ovens?! Strong dude Empty, strong dude.
Twilight straight up just wanted to try anal off the bat....in the shower....where Sniff easily could've busted his ass on the slippery floor? Man what am I reading? 😅
There's a lot I wanna say but I'll come back to it upon my second or maybe third reread.
Good chapter & the next chapter's title sounds promising!
10 out of 10!
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Yeah... that was a lot to take in, but usually listening to anything he has to say is difficult to understand. Especially when he's explaining things from just his point of view.
No matter the location or setup, Discord would have confronted anyone that got too close to Fluttershy. Thinking about it, it's hard to say what would have happened if Cerb didn't pose a threat to him.
In my attempts to keep this world as cannon as possible, Discord by this point has developed strong feelings for Fluttershy's strong acceptance of him and willing the friendship she offers. Something as simple as someone understanding your greatest flaws and still wanting to be with you can be a powerful motivator, and even though he's lost the chance to have more than friendship, he hasn't lost any of his attachment for her.
Nope. I made that pretty obvious she was flicking the bean.
Yeah, I didn't spend too much time on that scene because we all knew just how addicted these two are.
I havne't put much detailing into it, but Twilight, much like so many others, has been captivated by all the wonderful feelings Sniff can provide for her. That, and there might even be another level of empowerment and confidence she's developing for the kind of positive influence she has with Sniff.
For Sniff though... we have yet to see what his future holds.
There's a reason some girls enjoy anal. At least Twi understands why now.
Also, probably one of the scariest feelings in the world is when your feet slip in the shower and you still got your girl impaled on you. If she goes one way, and you fall the other... That's just a bad day with added fall damage.
I'll be waiting for your comments.
Next chapter is going to be a fun one. Especially when a certain somepony wakes up with her super special somehuman lady lover.
It's my third reread & I have deduced that Discord knows way more than he's letting on in regards to his conversation with Trixie.
See now this would've been something you should've told everyone that was in these relationships already Discord but I guess it's more more fun to play hide the secret.
Order is something Justin & the gang brought with them to Equestria unintentionally & apparently they were
(keyword : WERE) going to be instrumental in the demise of Equestria but now they could potentially be it's salvation.
Perhaps this is Celestia's concerns too. She seems to be getting close to figuring out just what is happening.
Discord also debunked the humans making ponies stronger theory & it was in fact doing the complete opposite. Don't like the sound of that.
Discord, you better try with all your might to help fix this shit, if not for Equestria or even yourself, do it for her!
I personally think that Order refers to how heavily different Equestria has changed since the humans arrived. The biggest example being the bloody life threatening injuries that without the humans, probably wouldn't even be a thing as Equestria is based or at least loosely based on the cartoon back on Earth where at best an injury would be scratches on their faces & hilariously if you pause just right, attacks don't connect AT ALL.
I mean. The show is TV-Y after all. The humans changed the natural order of things for good & now given the info, possibly for worse.
Also Discord, you're a god & Justin is just a mortal, you have a lot to offer being the lord, god, whatever of chaos so stop bitching about losing Fluttershy to him & just be happy that she's happy. Still don't understand where he developed the romantic feelings towards Fluttershy from but oh well.
Pinkie got over losing Benny.....I think? I think those 10 to 15 minutes in that room was Pinkie going to party town likely thinking about Ben-oooh yeah probably not.
Oh shit just realized she wants to talk to Benny. 👀
I missed this but Spike was getting looks from Smolder?
*Eric Cartman voice* "Oh my god sooo cuute"
Also Pinkie being Chaos is not lost on me at all lol.
He's such a d***! That's AWESOME!
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He certainly does. Not even Twilight new about the Magic Strings until Discord showed them to her.
Hmm... it's hard to say how much, if anything at all, he would have know about that before Fluttershy gave him the rundown of what he missed:
After explaining the physical process of reproduction and how exhausting it was had essentially been an admission of guilt, considering how tired she still was.
The human's entire being is that of order. It makes up litterally everything they are. As for being the instruments of the ponies destruction, that's the only theory they have to go off of.
Perhaps... but I'm not one to say at this point in time.
I don't like the sound of that either. It really throws off the imporatance of Starlight accidentally blowing up an entier section of the Everfree Forest on accent with an attack that was bigger than either Twilight's or Luna's.
... strange.
Have faith, bro.
Despite the real biological forms all the ponies have, they all do seem to function and operation like their cartoon counterparts. Especially Pinkie with her pulling things out of her pockets that dones exist, trick. Hell, even just the way they and moven and manipulate their limbs seems to defy how their limbs should be able function.
The show does a poor job of actually showing how or why Discord develops his feelings for Fluttershy, if the same season the humans showed up in has Discord acting like this (click for Youtube link), it's a safe bet that this might be him showing his feelings are more than than of a friend he has tea with.
Pinkie is just all over the place, as per the norm. Clearly she has an attachment to Benny... but after being denied and told not to interfer with his new relationship with Octavia and Vinyl, what's a horny mare to do but scope out the human studs most likely to be shared?
Get ready for some more cuteness in the next chapter then.
It was the only logical path.
To be fair, Trixie does suck at virutually everything she does.
Geeze... makes you wonder ihow useful it was to Discord to begin with if her writing was so bad.
Given what I've seen, Discord seems to be a good friend but in my eyes, he can be borderline possessive of anyone new who even stands within an inch of Fluttershy's vicinity.
Fluttershy has got to be a better individual than me because I wouldn't be friends with someone who'd have a problem with me having other friends.
Sorry about that. Discord just gives off that toxic vibe but he gets a slight pass because he's wacky & unique. His behavior & actions even if with nothing but the best intentions is what stops me from actually liking him 100℅.
He's such here or there character.
Too bad he's another character who gives off toxicity. Regular Show (if you seen it) has Rigby who like Discord, even while having character development through the seasons, also did things that again, even with the best intentions were just borderline bad or terrible.
Toxicity is something that just angers me. Always leaves you miffed at a lot of things.
Weird that I have this much to say about a character from a show I didn't care about for 9 whole years until it's final season but hey I like to do character studies & Discord is quite the character.
Discord is very possessive and protective of Fluttershy, and at one point nearly sent a new friend Fluttershy made to another demension out of fear of being replaced by the new friend.
It took a long time for Discord to come around and finally be the supporting character that was much easier to relate with and enjoy on screen.
I know the show, but never had the chance to properly follow it. I loved every episode that I watched though. Damn good show.
I've seen a few toxic relationships, and heard of many more. It makes me more sad than anything else. Otherwise, yeah. Discord was an interesting character.
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Oh, they are going to get very familiar with alhohol.
O my... Ember is on potencial mate hunt? Or simply wish to a extension of her social group?
Poor Pinkie needs a cooler or something to get the edge off rather sooner than later. Since she can pull stuff out of nowere i wonder if someone else need to ask of it before she can make it apper? Otherwise im wondering why she don't pull a toy for herself out of her 4th wall item summoning.
Finaly Spike get his attention worth. He worked hard for it.
Odd how Spike explains how the mane six save Equestria on a monthly base and they don't have vip escorts and or them trained in a military fashion...
Nymphomanics might need adult toys unless the humans rail them every second day to keep them content
Cerb get a nice morning... Rarity has yet to enjoy one sweet morning after that
Than again mister husk is about to make it up to her
Discord is a great friend. I wonder how long until he returns?
Trixie is as clueless as i am...
You know shit is completely fucked when even Discord, Master of Chaos himself, gets completely serious about things.......
Great chapter and nice re-reading with auto read function
Pinkie Pie should totally as Becky or Kelly for ideas how to manage her new returning urge that she has to endure.
Fun Dungeons adventures incoming
As i see it we can observe Human order break down Harmony influences to keep the Ponys simpel minded and their body not fully developed or suppressed.
Perhaps the Order reformed the magic inside them to get resistance from Harmony magic influences.
Losing benefits and gaining freedom of mind and body.
Perhaps Alicorn Stallions could become a thing
Having no physical body sure has it draw backs, though Discord is not limited by it either.
Great chapter, poor Discord lost his chance with Fluttershy
I wonder if Applejack is only the first to grow a pair of tits, while the stallions of Ponyville grow other things soon
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Discord is not restricted to a physical body, but he can also have as many as he wants.
That's what happens when the timeline gets messed with.
She is the first, might not be the last.
Also, stallions growing... uh... boners... that could be a thing. Ask Big Mac. He'll tell ya.