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YES UPDATE
trust rainbow dash to be only one to take the easy solution and just ask a human what sex is, sometimes the easiest solution is the best
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Sometimes the smartest thing you can do is to admit how dumb you are. Or in Rainbow's case... just comepletely clueless.
So *claps hands together* time to see what I've got today from this chapter.
• Pinkie really should start thinking before doing. Sucks what she unintentionally put Benny, Luna & the other dates through.
• Pinkie realizes she fucked up like Twilight pushing her human stallion into the arms of another mare but I did respect her for taking Benny's feelings into consideration with his double dates & letting things play out. Hopefully they have a heart to heart at the party.
• Benny is cool as hell & was mature about the mishaps Pinkie has caused & I have to give him my respect. Tavi & Vinyl are gonna love this guy.
• Luna, Kelly & Big Mac? T H R E E S O M E !
• Rainbow once again showing that loyalty! I loved her conversation with Becky. She's a true friend & I wish all the best for both her future & Becky's future if she is cured.
• Twilight needs to relax & just let things play out slowly. My hope is for her to not worry about Sniff so much. I really want them to work out & it was really sweet to know that she loved before she even knew she could do more with him.
• The Rarity, Cerb & Fluttershy scenario....man I wanna see them have something great come out it. No more worries for this trio.
• If only they knew just how FAR Starlight has actually gotten with Chris.
& now finally?
• Ponies watched a porno.
Ponies watched a porno!
PONIES WATCHED A GODDAMN PORNO!!!
"We'll cross that bridge"
Cross that TRIXIE bridge? I'm sorry 😂
Btw I'm waiting for more of ol country hat pony & her country "boyfriend". They're just so damn cute together.
Hella weird to hear these characters in their respective voices in my head calling out male genitalia nicknames....maybe not Twilight because her VA was in Drawn Together lol.
What an amazing chapter! The next chapter's title sounds very very saucy. That should be an interesting one.
See you next week! 10\10
One hell of a land mine this 'documentary' will kick off
I feel that with them watching a porno they will get some...unrealistic expectations. I loved the new chapter! I can’t wait for the next update!
Good laugher and quite the nice reaction to the documentary When our humans learn of it... PRICELESS Can't wait
When will Cerberus, Beckys, Raritys and Fluttershys move to the Crystal Empire? How long will the medication ingridients keep Becky activ? Pretty sure Kelly, Cerb , Lumberman, AJ , Big Red , Granny Smith are needed for the trial... Spearhead and his trigger happy underlings will need new jobs... If they don't get a all inclusive dungeon stay for a few years...
Besides that, who will take care of Fluttershy cottage and job plus Raritys sister Sweetybell? Or is Sweety Bell moving to Appelbloom? Scootaloo will have to endure RD`s absense... Poor thing
So many questions...
Great chapter It was very delightful
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Pinkie just needs to start thinking in general. Honestly, I feel the worst for Octavia, since she was by far the most smitten. Just gotta hope it all plays out well.Looks to be a good start, though.
In all likelihood, Pinkie was just thinking that the date was going to a fun thing for Benny and the others to do together. So, depending on how the rest of the date goes, that's probably going to dictate how the conversation goes. The same probably goes for how Pinkie is going to react will be based on how well or poorly the date goes.
Tavi and Vinyl were already a killer combo, and given how cool Vinyl was during the dance and how utterly cute Tavi can be, how could have not tried to be cool about everything? I'm sure he picked up a thing or two from how well Cerb played things off.
You're jumping ahead of the story, bro. Gotta wait to see how things will go with between Luna and Kelly... and even how Big Mac really feels about everything.
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Twilight calming down? Wow... if only. However, she's not against letting things play out slowly, she just knew that Pinkie would be the type to just straight to dialing things to 11, thus she jumped in. After all, she was originally going to stand back and let whatever happened between Oven Fresh and Sniff play out. She really does care for him to the point it could be considered love. This Post-War-Party Party is going to bring about a lot to magnify some of these relationships.
Those two mares have had the hardest time. They really could use a break. A real break... if only.
Ha! Hoo boy... if only these ponies could manage to keep their secrets secret for once.
They sure did. Oh, man, I was waiting so long to finally bring that movie out of Benny's room and back into the story. Just giving the commentary for the story itself was a trip. Really gotta love how terrible those porno plots can be.
I see what you did there.
Soon...
if only I could get the VA's to do a dramatic reading/dub of it.... talk about fucked up, but still so entertaining.
OMG... next chapter.... I just.... There is so much to look forward to. Because the next chapter will leave you aching for more.
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This "documentary" will likely end up playing some major influences in future events... and ooh boy I can't wait to get to that chapter.
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You're one smart cookie to recognize that. I'm sure it will all get worked out though. You'll find out more about how this is all going to go with the next chapter.
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Oh yeah. It's going to be quiet the conversation starter.
All good questions, most of which won't really be able to be addressed until after the party. So, not much I can give up on that front yet.
Again, good questions that will be addressed when the time comes. However, it was already hinted at with some good suggestions coming from Cerb's friends when discussing his new sleeping arrangements and accepting Cadance's help in the Crystal Empire.
There's still so much goodness to come.
"Well, just because they slept together and had a date doesn't mean they're having sex," Fluttershy calmly stated.
Yep totally Fluttershy...you are correct about that 100℅ being the case regarding Starlight & Chri-pffffffft 😂i.pinimg.com/originals/b9/1d/7f/b91d7f8f02d1eba2824a46c41cdfee3b.png
Two Questions.
Who is Soarin? Is he a new character specifically for the story?
Also how would you feel if someone made a comic and or dramatic reading out of this fic?
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Just going off of her own experiences I guess.
Soarin is one of the lead Wonderbolts. You might remember him as the only pony to buy a pie from Applejack at the Grand Galloping Gala. He's actually one that appears in many of the ads for them.
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I'd be stoked! Having voices for the dialog or illustrations for so many of the scenes would be something I'd happily welcome.
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Thanks for the info on Soarin although you'd be wrong about me remembering that character doing anything as I was never huge on MLP at all while it was airing episodes in it's hayday.
I really only started in it's final season with 5 episodes & each of them were the final 5 episodes.
I learned a bit about the characters from reading, not a lot but just a bit to understand the characters & what they were all about.
One show writer had advised me to watch the show from beginning to end to really get a feel for why so many people both young & old enjoyed it but I politely turned it down.
Show just isn't for me but I got hella respect for those who do good with the content they make regarding the show.
Thanks for the little bit of info anyway.
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Not a problem. I wasn't aware of your limted exposer to the show and it's characters. It's all good, though.
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Thanks for catching that. Got it fixed.
Holy shit I just realized that while Twilight & her friends were discussing Starlight & Chris, I completely forgot that Starlight is currently riding the fuck out of him as they speak.
That. Is. HILARIOUS.
Bless Derpy's innocent eyes having to see those two go at it in what I believe could only be described as the "cowgirl position" but if it's to get ready for the big moment, so be it.
Wait a minute... cowgirl position?...Appleja-
It's too perfect!
I await a confrontation with Starlight about Chris soon. That's gonna turn everypony but likely not every human's world upside down.
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I know, right?!
It does make you wonder how they're all going to react, doesn't it?
Oh, boy, you know it.
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I still love pretty much every scene with those two.
Re-reading atm. Didn't Futtershy neglected Discords tea partys? I just finished Chapter 32 and noticed Discord and Fluttershy basicly don't do anything for over one week...
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Discord has been busy repairing the space between diminsions, so they're still waiting for him to get back.
We know Starlight has gone all the way with Chris at this point & so will the others in his harem arc he's got going on.
Who would you say is the closest to going all the way with their human companion next?
Me? I believe it to be Rarity & Fluttershy. I mean Cerb is looking like he's willing to give them what they're comfortable with.
Also will that Soarin dude you were talking about be making an appearance or will it be like Sunset with just a mentioning of the name?
Of all the human characters? Becky, Benny & Lumberman make me feel bad for them. Sure Lumberman has ol Applejack with him but he seems to still harbour some sadness in his heart. Benny feels like he's essentially doomed all of his friends to a life & death in a world not of their own & is now wrestling with the fact that he might wanna start getting into the idea of seeing somepony.
Becky? Jesus. She needs some happiness. She's got her loyal number one flier by her side but damn does it feel like she gave up too easily. Maybe...just maybe she'll enjoy a full life in Equestria & possibly hookup with a stallion...or mare given that she slept with Kelly. I hope tragedy for her isn't just around the corner as it appears to be.
Also Rainbow being straight? Nice change of pace if that really is the case because she's a walking gay pride pony who's usually paired with the same sex to which I'm not surprised.
If she's bi herself? That would actually be even more interesting & she did say she was open to experimenting.
Lots of stuff in story got my minding working...
Next chapter "Colt crazy".
Not gonna lie. I'm afraid of what that could mean but also very interested.
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If I was a reader and not the writer, I'd say it's a toss-up between Cerb with either if not both of his two, or Sniff just getting overwhelmed by having pony poon thrown in his face and giving in.
It's a safe bet to say Soarin will show up eventually. The Wonderbolts airshow is still coming to town.
Lumberman has a lot of issues, and if you've noticed, he's dropped some hints that some of his issues weren't just with his family. Although, the closer he ends up getting to AJ, you can expect him to open up and shed some light on that.
Benny kind of ended up in the same category as Becky of largely sheltering themselves. Sure, Becky did hospital work and was always with RD, but she was very work-centric, just like Benny. Also, Benny didn't have much time with Pinkie until working with Twilight at The Castle of the Two Sisters.
However, both Benny and Becky will soon have to face the issues they've been trying to avoid. Benny started with his double date and being chill with it, but he's got a way to go.
The show itself hints at an AppleDash shipping, but that's far in the future from where this story is at. Plus, with AJ head over horseshoes for Woody, pretty sure that's out. It also makes sense that RD would want to be with a Wonderbolt. But just making her lez for the sake of being lez wouldn't add much to the story, and probably would have done her character dirty.
You know these titles to my chapters are either going to be taken from a standout piece of dialog or cover some overarching themes or concepts covered. So, expect either some "colt crazy" accusations getting thrown around or examples of mares getting colt crazy... Or both? Who knows? I love keeping you guys all guessing.
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I did hear about the hints of AppleDash as you called it in the show. Seen it & all I can say is that it's unfortunately up for interpretation to the individual viewer.
I don't think I have much room to talk about shipping regarding this show due to not watching the whole series but from what I've seen via clips that are supposed to show you hints of shipping regarding it's more popular ships.
Yeah, I'm not seeing it at all. All up for interpretation.
It's slightly the same with Fluttershy & Discord as well. I know about that Freaky Friday scene but still. They originally were supposed to be a thing in the end but the writers dropped that for an ambiguous moment.
Appldash & Fluttercord (my brother told me about that one lol) shippers kinda got cucked in the end lol.
I'd just be glad that the writers at least acknowledged the shippings & not get mad at something not being what they wanted.
Pinkie & Weird All were hella forced to me the minute I found out he only appeared in 2 episodes with no hints to a romantic relationship at all.
Shipping is really weird. You could simply stand next to someone or have very little chemistry & BOOM! "They're in love!, I just know it!".
Congrats on the confirmed gay ships tho.
Go Lyra & Bon Bon.
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Some of the ships made sense while others seemed forced if not some fanservice that lacked content.
AppleDash seemed like one that could have been worked in with enough time, given their mutual strong competitive natures, but also seemed to go against any inclination of their interests towards each other. Then again, who knows how many years had past and all the great stories we missed that could have given any insight to what actually happened.
Pinkie & Weird Al (Cheese Sandwich) did seem to come out of the blue, but to me also made sense. Their two personalities really seemed to match up and they actually seemed to understand each other.
True, but also funny sometimes to see how passionate some people end up getting about them. More than just "I don't see it," or "That doesn't work at all with the cannon," but pure rage at anyone disagreeing with them.
I was actually kinda shocked they had the balls to put that in the show, even if only in two blink-and-you-miss-it shots. Although, speaking of Lyra and Bon Bon, expect to see more of them and their relationship evolve now that their timeline has been altered off course with the humans showing up.
Come to think of it... Chapter 49.5 Interlude: So, About the Humans the Other Night, Was a Godsend to me in a lot of ways. Since Mr Cold Ghost. made the request to see how the ponies reactions to the human's music at the welcome party. That really gave me a chance to show the kind of impact the humans were already having, as well as sneak in some foreshadowing and lay the groundwork for other major developments.
Damn... I can't even begin to imagine how much better this would be if it was in some kind of motion media.
"Me? No, but… I'm not sure how often you must hear this, but I love your accent."
Awww, even underneath all that heartache & trauma, Benny is such a sweetheart.
It's such a tragedy what he went through on Earth. I'm glad he's got 3 mares in his corner. If he is ever is up to it? I'm banking on him & Tavi. It just feels genuine but alas we'll need more buildup for those two if you so choose to do something with this whole situation Pinkie cooked up.
Octavia is such an adorable little thing. I've seen her character design & it's really cute. I played the violin in school & was pretty good at harmonies. I don't know what she plays tho.
Vinyl is....vinyl. Yeah I don't got much to say about her plus I don't like dubstep lol.
Pinkie thinking she lucked out on bagging Benny because she didn't know what a dick was is both ridiculous & really funny.
It's okay Pink one, patience is key.
Also while we were discussing Season 10 you said the humans were affecting the timeline correct? Interesting but as you said this story is far removed from that future but now with them being here & bringing unique things to the table, I can only ponder just how different future seasons beyond this story's timeline (2016) would play out.
Hell reality could get fucked itself.
Imagine if Chris goes back to earth, & is watching an episode on TV & Starlight just breaks the forth wall....literally for some fun time lol.
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I'd be lying if I said I didn't have a soft spot for Octavia. Not sure what it is about her specific design, although the accident certainly does help. I gotta show that girl some love, thus Benny delivers on my behalf.
Benny has yet to tackle all of his problems, but like you said, he's got 3 mares in his corner. Well, the rest of the main cast will certainly have his back as well. You'll see. As for this current two mares... it's still gonna be a long day to get through.
Oh, yeah. Our adorable Tavi plays the cello, but I wouldn't be surprised if she turned out to be rather versed in other string instruments. OH SHIT! The bow she wears with her collar! That's what ties it all together for her.
*Side note: I'm a little jelly of anyone that can play the violin. Such a beautiful melody it can create.
I think Vinyl gets oversimplified of being limited to dubstep or techno. She jams to just about anything with a good melody or beat. Even her first introduction in the series had her headbobbing to what sounded more like RNB/Funk tunes.
LOL! Nah, bro. She didn't luck out. She fucked herself over. I think you meant to say she was "out of luck," because right now it's Tavi and Vinyl that appear to have lucked out with Benny. Although looking back, it must have been a real kick to the gut when Benny realized he was the last guy of the bunch that any of the girls tried to call dibs on. Then only to find out that out of all the girls he actually knew, the one he was set up with openly admitted she wasn't into him and offered to leave him on the back burner if neither of their current prospects panned out.
The show only carried through 9 seasons, but technically season 10 is continuing in comic format. Anyway, that was in reference to the very last episode showing the AppleDash shipping. I said it was far removed because its reveal is given likely decades after Twilight takes the throne. So at the very least, it would be a minimal of 4 years (if each season is to be considered the passing of a full year in their world like I assume), then that's 4 years of Lumberman stealing the heart of AJ and Becky influencing RD to set her eyes on Soarin. Whatever the original course those two were on has been grossly altered because of the human's influence.
... but this is fanfiction based on cannon with huge gaps in time where we don't see all the interactions that could have led up to what we can only assume was them hooking up.
Yeah... not much to go off of to say the humans being brought to Equestria didn't do a swap with something else or somehow link the two worlds in a way that hasn't been noticed yet.
Even better:
Chris goes back to earth and is watching another episode, but since he went to Equestria, it creates a paradox where the episodes are from there on out what he and his friends went through and the whole world gets to see him bang it out with Starlight and get roped into a harem of mares.
Although, any of them breaking the fourth wall to call them back because they're horny would be hilarious.
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"Even better:
Chris goes back to earth and is watching another episode, but since he went to Equestria, it creates a paradox where the episodes are from there on out what he and his friends went through and the whole world gets to see him bang it out with Starlight and get roped into a harem of mares."
My heart goes out to those innocent children on a Saturday Morning then.
Hasbro would have lawsuits up the ass in this scenario.
Would someone please think of the children?! 🤣
NOT YOU Chris! You think with your d***
Oh, man... those poor kids. Traumatized for life, and the rest of the brony fandom losing their shit because it wasn't them or they didn't see their specific fetish. But yes... the lawsuits would be immaculate... as well as the ratings if they put it on HBO or something.
Thinking with his dick would have him ignoring the kids. Although, he might have three foals of his own if this harem works out the way he wants it to.
Cream Heart with Button Mash, Derpy with Dinky, and Prim Posy with Cotton Cloudy. Could have been four if Berry Punch hadn't bailed, although technically Berry Punch and Pina Colada are sisters, but no parents around, so... parent figure.
*Laughing evilly*
Anyway... Twilight at the end is priceless checking RD intension on her do to the Fan Fic
Yeah. The girl never has the money for the pizza.
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Thank you! You legit had me laughing out loud over that comment. However, you're right. When a girl orders the meat lovers with extra sausage, you know she wasn't in the mood for pizza.
A dog, she probably hear about it.
Little... boss music is probably playing when a mare comes to close to Cerberus for some flirting or dare they dream of snuggeling:
Themares would be like:
WHY DO I HEAR BOSS MUSIC?!
Meanwhile Celestia is enjoying her only true love in everyday life:
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Wonder if Spike is going for the Kirin race to find a mate to love, half pony, half dragon.
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Who is a hotter equine lover than a Kirin mare after all
Would follow Spike pony preferences as well.
Meanwhile Discord is entertaining himself while fixing the holes in reality:
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They're still learning. Give them time.
Getting too close to Cerb while in front of Fluttershy and Rarity? This is a silly and a danger.
I'm sure Celestia likes other things as well.
I'm sure Spike doesn't know what he wants anymore.
That dude needs a vacation.