This is a good update! I am liking oven fresh. Also the conversation between Cerb and Fluttershy was pure gold!

Very good chapter! Great humor, fantastic amounts of flirts and romances blooming.
Very deep topics. Quite the gem you created here loved how you captured how cruel earth can be but also show that there people working to make it a better place for fighting the ones than can't be saved from there own madness.
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Indeed. I still hope for herd for the humans. There not enough for everypony to go around

The depth of the story can give many there run for there money as the saying goes.
Beautiful addition to the story indeed.

There was the question laid out for her and her mind instantly went to all the wrong thoughts. "Lay down. Take off your uniform. Let me touch you. Hold me close to you. I want to show you what a Wonder Rush is. I think I love you. Rarity and I want to be with you and you're practically all we think about. There's no pony out here so we can kiss all we want and only we will know about all the wonderful things we can do with each other. Please tell me you love me," Was a shortlist of things she wanted to say.

Jackpot... Cerb won the lottery but don't know it yet

But if you girls can figure it out, three just might be an extra reward in it for ya."

, there

Sniff got a bad feeling of an overprotective parent lurking just behind him. "Sword? What is she, a night?"

Knight

[A few hours after the farewell that could have gone over smother.]

Not ' smoother ' ? Both seem right.

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Oven Fresh only gets better as the story goes on, I assure you. Same goes for Fluttershy and Cerb. They still have a long way to go in the forest.

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Oooooh... You have no idea how lucky that man is going to be.

And thanks for pointing out the errors. They have all been corrected.

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Sweet!

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Happy to help. Its 04:40 in the morning over here. Im surprised you still up. Than again why am i ?

Well... We in germany have forced vacation days nation wide in many industrys... How your end of the globe doing? Are the toilet paper out on your markets end to? Silly ' the world is ending ' Hamster shoppers...

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Things have slowed down a lot on my side of the world. I'm actually feeling a bit under the weather as it is right now. Not the new plague, but a fever and general lousy feeling going on. I'll be fine with some rest... If I can get it.

to me, it was Chris and Starlight discussing why the harem ending wouldn't work.

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Stupid anime logic trying to work its way into a western cartoon made real and being adressed by those that deal stricktly with reality. The fun never ends.

Very emotional chapter. I follow Cerbs view on taking someone elses life under extream situation. But i never was a soldier so it big talk only from my side i guess...

"[size=0.75em}Being alone... with you. "

Found an error

Its never easy, we have war to live in peace and often, we have to like in self-defense. It is always a difficult matter but soldier vs soldier, its kind of self-defense vs self-defense if you think about it

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Not really. Soldier vs soldier on real terms have one aggressor and one defender. Oil( ressources), Territory, pride are the main reasons why american leaders sent there soldiers to fight in another ones home turf.
Its always one or all of this reasons.
Sad that human lifes or dignity of victims is never more than empty words...
Example...
Have to find one
I know of many but this kind of information & videos got removed from youtube...

Before I even read the chapter, I gotta say Swift Sails in that picture looks absolutely friggin adorable, I love it.

Cerberus would Solo mission this mission like this:

Cerberus vs Everfree Forest:

How everyone expects for Cerberus to heal (MLP cartoons logic:

But lucky Cerberus has Fluttershy with him:

Apple Boom apologized as fast as she could. "Sorry, Granny."

Bloom

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Do you think the Mares trimmed their Chest-Fluff because of occupational health hazards or only the Stallions have it?

Cute chest fluff boners 👍
Would be actually funny lore

Not a month in, yet the thirsty humans can bearly resist restarting the game
Drowning in mares potentially a cause of death?...

Ever week has 7 days... Perhaps ever human get 7 ponies?
Kelly would never get thirsty to bed again or would she be drowned in bed?

Hm... Sniff might get the Ponyville fashion to all skirts.
Wonder what Kelly might inspire... Socks perhaps

"I got stuck with Pinkie, you asshole."

Owww... poor guy... But perhaps she be a good fit for the goofball of the stranded seven

"You stay safe out there. Okay? And make sure Cerb doesn't do anything stupid, like take on a whole pack of Timber Wolves or pick a fight with a Manticore."

Foreshadowing archived?

There was the question laid out for her, and her mind instantly went to all the wrong thoughts. "Lay down. Take off your uniform. Let me touch you. Hold me close to you. I want to show you what a Wonder Rush is. I think I love you. Rarity and I want to be with you, and you're practically all we think about. There's no pony out here, so we can kiss all we want, and only we will know about all the wonderful things we can do with each other. Please tell me you love me," Was a shortlist of things she wanted to say.

Isn't Fluttershy precious?

Smash! The sound of a drinking glass breaking on the floor alarmed them of what should have been expected.

Reminds me of a Rick and Morty episode where Rick builds indestructible dishes with the help of a alien Smith that owned him a favor
Maybe Luna or Celestia could come up with something like it?
In D&D dishes have even a armor value
Just food for thoughts for the sequel perhaps?

"Oh, indeed," Chris made flirty eyes back to Starlight. "That's actually an awesome idea. And if worse comes to worst and they all bail on me, we can just watch something together."

Hm... Maybe they turn porn into advanced biology study material after all ..

A harem is owning partners, what they go for is a herd, a loving family 👍

"Well, when I was growing up, I, of course, had to believe my dad. Daddy's little girl and all. But after my mother got yet another promotion and had to work longer hours, my dad decided to move. I ended up doing most of the packing. And while packing, I found an old box with a mostly burned student baker's apron that still smells like hot peppers. Under that was a court order to report as a witness to a burglary, signed by the one and only, Corporal Cirrostratus Cutter. I just her call her mom, though."

Broken sentence structure

"Yep. Spells need a unicorn to channel their magic to create the desired effect. But, by some fluke, we make this work only after we stop the flow of magic. Well, actually, I have to focus my flow of magic to pull away from the fire. Otherwise—" She grinned sheepishly. "—Fireball."

Are we sure she hasn't a dragon or three in her family line? Perhaps not just Spike enjoying a pony crush in the past?

"Too sweet is an understatement. I think I'm getting a sugar high just tasting it. How can you eat it?"

Perhaps a natural energy drink/snack of the Everfree Forest?

"You..." It took her a second, but she finally got the joke and snickered at the thought of her being some brutal tyrant. "Well, now that my secret is out, I guess there's no need to keep up my shy act. Back to burning villages and..."

Fluttershy is just weaponised cuteness ♡

It didn't take long for Cerb to break down the gun and show all the inner workings of the pistol and explain how the whole thing functioned. He even convinced her to sit in front of him and showed her how it would be used. After the quick run down, he reloaded it and tucked it away in the back of his pants.

Foreshadowing of Fluttershy pulling a Rambo at some point?

Love the deep conversations of the story 👍

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Cute chest fluff boners 👍
Would be actually funny lore

I think there is a niche/fetish for that.

Not a month in, yet the thirsty humans can bearly resist restarting the game
Drowning in mares potentially a cause of death?...

To be fair, they would be rather difficult to resist. However to drown in them... Maybe. Some of them might get that wet.

Ever week has 7 days... Perhaps ever human get 7 ponies?

Oh, to live that dream. Might get kinda messy after a while... The first time. Every time.

Kelly would never get thirsty to bed again or would she be drowned in bed?

There'd never be a day with a little thirst. That's why she's the drip.

Hm... Sniff might get the Ponyville fashion to all skirts.

Working on it, that's for sure.

Wonder what Kelly might inspire... Socks perhaps

Panties.

"I got stuck with Pinkie, you asshole."

Owww... poor guy... But perhaps she be a good fit for the goofball of the stranded seven

If she can't learn to adapt to him, he can learn to adapt to her.

"You stay safe out there. Okay? And make sure Cerb doesn't do anything stupid, like take on a whole pack of Timber Wolves or pick a fight with a Manticore."

Foreshadowing archived?

That, or misdirection.

There was the question laid out for her, and her mind instantly went to all the wrong thoughts. "Lay down. Take off your uniform. Let me touch you. Hold me close to you. I want to show you what a Wonder Rush is. I think I love you. Rarity and I want to be with you, and you're practically all we think about. There's no pony out here, so we can kiss all we want, and only we will know about all the wonderful things we can do with each other. Please tell me you love me," Was a shortlist of things she wanted to say.

Isn't Fluttershy precious?

Utterly and completely.

Smash! The sound of a drinking glass breaking on the floor alarmed them of what should have been expected.

Reminds me of a Rick and Morty episode where Rick builds indestructible dishes with the help of a alien Smith that owned him a favor
Maybe Luna or Celestia could come up with something like it?
In D&D dishes have even a armor value
Just food for thoughts for the sequel perhaps?

That's a whole other level of goofy. Probably not gonna happen. Still funny, though.

"Oh, indeed," Chris made flirty eyes back to Starlight. "That's actually an awesome idea. And if worse comes to worst and they all bail on me, we can just watch something together."

Hm... Maybe they turn porn into advanced biology study material after all ..

A harem is owning partners, what they go for is a herd, a loving family 👍

I'm not sure what to do if the porn comes around again. I don't know if any of the humans would survive.

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"Well, when I was growing up, I, of course, had to believe my dad. Daddy's little girl and all. But after my mother got yet another promotion and had to work longer hours, my dad decided to move. I ended up doing most of the packing. And while packing, I found an old box with a mostly burned student baker's apron that still smells like hot peppers. Under that was a court order to report as a witness to a burglary, signed by the one and only, Corporal Cirrostratus Cutter. I just her call her mom, though."

Broken sentence structure

It's a bit different for dialog. To say a sentence like that in English wouldn't be uncommon.

"Yep. Spells need a unicorn to channel their magic to create the desired effect. But, by some fluke, we make this work only after we stop the flow of magic. Well, actually, I have to focus my flow of magic to pull away from the fire. Otherwise—" She grinned sheepishly. "—Fireball."

Are we sure she hasn't a dragon or three in her family line? Perhaps not just Spike enjoying a pony crush in the past?

Not everything goes to plan in the evolutionary chain, it would seem.

"Too sweet is an understatement. I think I'm getting a sugar high just tasting it. How can you eat it?"

Perhaps a natural energy drink/snack of the Everfree Forest?

Nah. It's just super sweet. Hyper concentrated suger.

"You..." It took her a second, but she finally got the joke and snickered at the thought of her being some brutal tyrant. "Well, now that my secret is out, I guess there's no need to keep up my shy act. Back to burning villages and..."

Fluttershy is just weaponised cuteness ♡

Military-grade Element of adorableness.

It didn't take long for Cerb to break down the gun and show all the inner workings of the pistol and explain how the whole thing functioned. He even convinced her to sit in front of him and showed her how it would be used. After the quick run down, he reloaded it and tucked it away in the back of his pants.

Foreshadowing of Fluttershy pulling a Rambo at some point?

It would have to be used at some point.

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Love the deep conversations of the story 👍

It's what I do.