Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Sweet mercyful Nightmare Moon a update
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Bonus publication.
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no one saw that coming, not even starlight
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I have to admit I also liked the part about twi freaking out I had a bit of a giggle
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No one saw the bonus release? I mentioned it in the notes with the last chapter.
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I had a lot of fun with it. Especially her figuring out so much about sex from reading fanfiction.
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no one reads those it like reading twilight check lists no one got time for that
Cerberus prepares the party? Also makes slowly head and tails of social norms in Equestria
Things get to the boiling point
First Equestria orgy incoming Hope they prepared water... They need to stay hydrated
Celestia influence over the mane 6 is getting lost. I wonder what she is planning.
I wonder how long Applejack will recover... a lot of blood was lost, her hooves will be unable to perform.
The farm needs helpers soon
Royal Treasurey might help out?
Applejack is to valueable not to support her.
Twilight get a nerd-gasm after her next line of 'tests' will start from getting all this 'data' from her friends and future herd mate
Bonbon and Lyra sure are a entertaining duo
I wonder how all the coming events will effect the timeline. There is a lot of material to get over
The military expertise will screw villains like Sombra over
Very good chapter!
Lovely humor and most trilling content
D A M N .
Everything I've read in this chapter has me wondering quite a whole lot that I can't really say a whole lot like usual & that's a first for me.
Chris my good man? I pray for you again as now you take on the challenge of 6 different mares pining for your d***.
Not even gonna lie but my eyes widened when Starlight closed the blinds & locked the door. Damn I'ma send a prayer for our boy once more.
I don't even know what to think of the situation with Fluttershy, Rarity, Ovens & Twilight. It's insanity.
Nice to get some info on Twilight's Brother & get to chill with Becky. Sucks that he & his wife are so lonely. Good on Becky for not being a home wrecker.
Don't got much to say on Cerb or the Bon Bon Lyra portions as they were small but good to what they're up to.
Again, your Lumberman & AJ scenes? Excellent! Also I completely forgot she was infact the first to mention the word "rut". Man this shit is getting complicated.
Overall? A good chapter. Can't wait for more.
Btw, I caught that "the princess bride" line. You thought you were clever huh? Lol
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But I leave such quality commentary and foreboding statements about what to expect in future chapters...
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Cerb has some reservations to make, that's all. But you might be right about some of the social norms being altered because of his presence.
Ha! You sure sound hopeful about that. Although, you do make a good point about staying hydrated. Gotta replenish those bodily fluids.
The power of the heart prevails!
I can't keep AJ down for too long. She's far to stuborn to stay down and she's got shit to do.
Twilight will always be the curious type. She'll have to attempt some type of study.
They're going to get more involved as time goes by.
The next episode is Rainbow Dash finally getting accepted into the Wonderbolts. We'll see how that goes.
Oh, I have no doubt with Cerb's help, the next villain to step up to the plate is going to get trounced and have their head bounce off the concrete.
I aim to please.
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Not sure if that's a good thing or a bad thing, but I'm guessing it has to do with some of the characters getting confused about why their experiences were so different and Twilight trying to bounce fanfiction off of her reality?
It... will... get... more... interesting.
Ha! Nice, and yeah. Had to give them some privacy.
That's kind of what I was going for.
I had to give some depth to that pair. There's more to them that what the show has allowed us to see, and that goes doubly for Cadance.
Some portions I put in, despite being short just because I need the setup to show that some things are in motion. I find it kind of annoying when there's a consistent pattern of "Oh, what's going on here? This is so sudden." Then to find out it's been a thing going on in the background, but it was never presented to the reader.
True, it can be done every so often because the reader wasn't supposed to know, but what's going on in my story right now with them is all being laid out so you can see where characters are and understand that there are reasons for them being there.
It's kind like one of those movies where you go back and rewatch it, then you see something you never noticed the first time... I tend to do that in here.
Stand by for Wednesday with the next release.
And yes! I had been waiting for the perfect opertunity to use that line. I'm so glad I had them watch The Princess Bride as one of their first human movies.
Thanks for the update! In real life harems wives would form factions against rivals to compete for their husbands affection and resources for their kids over a rivals offspring. Divorce (when allowed) is much higher in these types of relationships. I say this because Chris realistically speaking will probably run into these types of problems seeing as a lot of the ladies he’s dating are single moms or find that he is not giving them as much time or affection as they would like.
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Chris ain't no spring chicken. He's aware how of bad shit can get (having read his fair share of shipfics and clopfics). When the time comes, issues will be dealt with... how well they work out has yet to be seen.
Otherwise, these kinds of relationships are unpredictable... unlike next Wednesday, which is when you can depend on the release of the next chapter.
Okay, so after spending quite a lot of time thinking about the insanity that was the Twilight, Ovens, Rarity, & Fluttershy portion of this chapter, I finally have something to say about it.
I don't think much good will come from them reading that smut. The clopfic could warp the ponie's way of thinking & for someone like Twilight, possibly in a bad way. I really don't wanna consider the possibility of any of these four trying to bring what's on the paper to reality in their current relationships with their humans.
Be yourselves girls, that's what you got you far with your humans.
Porn you ain't the real you. I know that sounds absolutely ridiculous but it's true for these girls & I hope they get that.
You get what I'm trying to say here.
Not sure what Pinkie could learn from smut but it'd probably make for some funny high jinks.
Rainbow being the one who has said the most innuendos out of any other pony & seems to know what a sexual joke is, could be intrigued.
As for Applejack? She's doing just fine with her man. No worries.
Starlight. Do I need to say anything lol.
Finally got that off my chest.
Also I'm surprised money is going into this story as you said. You paying editors & artists? That's cool & I can totally understand why chapters take til next week despite you wanting to do bonus chapters on Saturday.
Greatness takes time man. Keep it up.
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Porn doesn't really depict how real life works... not as a standard at least. Not saying I haven't a few "WTF" moments where I might have been playing out a porn scene, but regardless. These ponies will learn.
LOL! It's funny because I know already.
Or disappointed. Who knows?
True.
LOL! Nope... she's got Chris to give her all the information to use against him already.
I still have issues with dropping in the wrong words every once in a while, bad punctuation or miss how portions of sentences. My editor helps to correct these, as well as add some additional enhancers to make the writing pop more and give it some more clarification.
As for the art Paranoid Siren has been doing art for me for a while and her work has only gotten better with time.
Lumberman has a full on Stallion crew. . .
Since they working relationship will keep them close to him they might become more lose and perhaps start spreading some love
Who knows... If eatch stallion get 2-3 mares and they perhaps join the crew... Lumberman might have a huge crew around to do bussness in record quality and speed. If eatch stallion branches out eventually...
Equestrias Infrastructure and that of surrounding nation might improve massivly.
Princess bride reference biiiitch!
Harmony will not be pleased about her tightly mind controlled Equestria get free thinking.
As Harmony Trixie and Luna Rose said, this Harmony messed up royaly by waiting for Human arrival so late on...
I don't think that is physically possible
4 mare at the same time would be the biggest number he could entertain rather well, unless mouth, left and right hand as well his groin are occupied at the same time.
Perhaps one of the problems of the past Harmony is that the population wasn't big enough, I could imagen having insufficient stallion could be a reason why there are so many singles mothers in Equestria.
The stallion running a rotation and a strictly planned breeding roaster to prevent inbreeding.
I wonder if Harmony isn't feeding carnivores or omnivores with dead or dying ponies. I actually have addressed it in one of my stories.
Instead of letting the meat rotting away, they get donated for carnivores and omnivores in need.
Saves space for Graveyards that get overfilled in time and force the nation individually to face a simple truth.
The dead outnumbered the living, so preservation of the massiv amounts of bodies following is not possible for long.
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Probably not, but it sounded good and helped set the tone. In reality, it wasn't meant to be taken literally.
That would be optimal and one hell of an experience.
There would be problems with inbreeding and passing on defective genes as well. Selective breeding can only account for so much control.
My thoughts exactly.
That's a tale for Harmony to tell.