Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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Needed my editor to go over it for me. Just got it finished and posted.
Great chapter! The whole kelly situation really is really bringing out the best in some of the stranded seven.
As for becky...I hope that doesn't become a soap opera love triangle situation (that would make for great drams in the story though, so no complaints if ya do.)
The wait for the chapter was definitely worth it!
Very nice, worth the wait! That with the oath, I can connect to. That Marine I told you about once, he questions that in his story briefly.
And, given the current plot, if you need a doctor pony or nurse, I might have 2 OCs for you that could help here. JUst a friendly offer
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Hard times make for good friends.
Becky is no home recker, but even if was a half-joke, Cadance's offer for a few kisses didn't turn Becky off. So, maybe Shining's slow approach is helping Becky find the acceptance she needs to move on with wanting a pony of her own?
Glad you enjoyed it!
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Truth be told, I've actually had to act as Ballif while escorting a service member to their court-martial. I won't go into detail, but the service member was also well-liked in the command he was stationed in, but still committed a crime while under the influence. It was a clear cut and dry case against him, and he pled guilty, but still, we have to hold everyone accountable for their actions.
I appreciate the offer, but I'm set on the medical ponies. Thankfully, there are more than a few from the show and other cannon that I can pull from.
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Indeed.
Okay, just thought for this, a doctor with high experience might be needed
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Can't remember I ever mentioned Sweetie belle in my comments.
And sure, but a specialist/experienced doctor can always be helpful
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Whoops wrong guy
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You accidentally put sweetie belle at one point in the chapter instead of sugar belle
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no harm done
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Whoops. I did it at least three times. Good catch, though.
Well shit. I'n kinda speechless. This is the only chapter where I really won't have A LOT to say. Your explanations at the end pretty much shut down whatever I had on my mind. Not that it's a bad thing. It helped.
I will say that the Sugar Belle situation is yet another example of the humans fucking with the timeline. Then again, this is 2016 & nobody could see the events happening in 3 years time (2017 - 2019).
By that time, who knows if the S7 (gonna start calling them that btw) will still be in Equestria. They'd all be in their early 30s & a lot could happen in that time.
It was really adorable & that's all that matters to me. Chris being late to the meetup because of Star was funny too. That mare definitely gets what she wants.
THAT. IS. THE. DUMBEST. SHIT. I'VE. EVER. HEARD. Good name Glimmer.
😅
- Cutter is one dope ass mom.
- Rainbow is the MVP of friends & I do wonder what made her bolt out.
- Love Zecora despite her short appearance. Good friend.
- LUMBERJACK CONSTRUCTION! I fucking love these two! That's too damn cute!
- Twilight's horny as fuck & I'm 100℅ sure she is going to be the first to actually go all the way with Sniff. Mark my words Empty, she's gonna stop the teasing from Sniff eventually.
I'm still miffed about Tia, so excuse me if I'm still untrustworthy of her despite her good intentions to get Kelly justice.
I'm proud of everyone's belief in Becky doing her best to bring that scumbag back to the land of the living despite the possible outrage if the surgery ends in disaster. Like Luna said, make em wish he never woke up!
The info that Cerb & Benny found on the 3 guards doesn't sound good. Their good reputation could be used as a defense & they could possibly get off. Here's hoping there's a counter to these findings.
You said everything in this chapter happened in a single day?! That's crazy! Wonder how the night's gonna play out, especially with this game Chris & Star conconcted. See ya next week! 10/10!
Humans pulling a Admiral Thrawn. Now in politics and later in conflict.
Best video for any tactical mastermind.
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I kinda left this one pretty cut and dry. Not in a boring way, but there wasn't a need to leave much out to ponder on.
Sugar Belle hadn't come into play officially in the series at this point, so none of the others would have known about her. However, it was mentioned much earlier that he had thought about visiting a mare in another town and was getting close to feeling like he could date again.
Starlight isn't always about getting her cheeks clapped, and I wanted some more time for them to just relax and be natural with each other. I really want them to find more in each other than just Chris's dong.
The town, sadly, was named that before Starlight showed up, and the name still remains.
The dopest. Cute, sassy, loving, devoted, and packs a punch.
Same thing that made her bolt out last time she flew off from Becky while at Twilight's castle, and I don't mean Tank.
Had to rope her back in, as any good friend would want to check up on another friend.
I try. ^__^
I'm sure she'd love to be #1, but time will tell.
Valid. She still needs to get with the program about humans.
It's a serious game of politics that will be played when it comes to affairs like this. Something Cerb knows all to well after serving in the middle east.
Any good attorney would certainly use that in the trial.
I'm getting all of that ironed out right now. I've play Werewolf Party before, and it was fun, but it's better with more people.
I also forgot most of the rules, so the game is being changed up in the story because of it. Also, it makes for better storytelling, given how things will play out.
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Sounds a lot like The Art of War.
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Exactly it.
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Reading through again, I take it?
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just didn't saw her, i like the cmc equally
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Pardon?
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okay...
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okay
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Truth.
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This one is more of a cultural difference I think. When she says she's perfectly fine, it's a common way of saying "I know things look really bad and you're concerned, but I'm actually not as bad as you think and you don't need to be so worried. However... [insert actual problems]"
Kind of one of those things people do so others don't worry so much about them.
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Man, those two are so easy to mix up. Thanks for catching that.
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Mhm
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I never got into FOE, but the fan animation have always been fun to watch.
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So juicy they're practically gushing.
So will we be getting the chapter next Friday or will it be at random today? You didn't really specify anything other than the fact you had a delay like the last chapter.
I will say that I'm hella intrigued at the game idea. Sounds interesting & it's a nice break away from the plot unless we end up checking on the others.
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That's my bad. Right now it's looking like it will be about next Friday. I hate having to do that but I want this chapter to come out right.
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A sad oversight that may get revisted.
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Agreed
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You really wanna know?
10766329 41. Reevaluation of Relationships.
There are other vids out there of horses eating birds of different types. So, while not unheard of, not very common. Also, how was Lumberman to know what the kid would do? He's still pretty new to the whole place.
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There's a limit of what all she can pull into existence, and there are rules as to when and why. Such an example would be the C4. While it is dangerous, it's something one might expect her character to have.
Or in other words: If it can make it past the censors, it can make it into her mane.
10766440 43. To Prove One's Worth
There is a lot Harmony can do, and seems to have meddled in many affairs, but as we've seen, there are limits to what she can do. Even her ability to give influence by whispering silent suggestions can fail.
10766580 44. The Flawless Plan
Celestia's life has been 1,000 years of ruling over her kingdom alone. So the only problem with getting proficient with her job is how much it's been eating away at her. So when things are peaceful, the monotony of the dealing with the inner workings to let the society function just becomes draining. Even Luna had to find out the hard way how exhausting doing Celestia's job can be.
Agent Sweetie Drops VS Daring Do... The battle of two secret identities. Now there is something I'd love to see.
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Not saying that was an inspiration, but something along that line perhaps. Just the idea of two giants meeting each other and being like "Oh? You're into what I'm into. You must be pretty cool."
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Don't forget at times that soldiers are forced or manipulated into wars. When it's fight them or be killed on your knees, or kill them so your family isn't murdered by the same people that told you to fight, it's not so easily black and white. Not to mention, the soldiers and masses that are simply lied to so they believe they're doing the right thing.
Not saying there aren't those out there who fight just because of hate and greed. It's just not the most common factor... Or at least that's my view about it.
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i hear ya. I just mean, technically, they fight both in self-defense of themselves
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Mhm
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For some characters, the show doesn't offer a lot in regards to the back story or how to best portray that character. For Bon Bon, in particular, I had to the official novel, Lyra and Bon Bon and the Mares from S.M.I.L.E., to understand what her role actually was.
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A quick review of what the novel reveals is that Lyra's cover was blown, the agency was never actually shut down, and mind-wiping civilians were a common practice for the agency; very much a Men In Black organization. It was known that Lyra was aware of Bon Bon's past, and the protocol was for those memories and those of Bon Bon were to be removed. Instead, much like Celestia did, the offer to work again, taking Lyra in as a new agent was the trade-off for letting the memories stay.
Later, Bon Bon admits that part of the job is blending in with the locals, finding the intel, and either removing the threat or calling in for another team to handle it. However, their existence was never to be known by the general public, and any major events were to be either erased or in most cases, handled by Twilight and the other Elements, or F.R.O.W.N. as they were code-named (Friendship Ranger Organization of Worldwide Neighgotiations). Quite the opposite of S.M.I.L.E. (SECRET MONSTER INTELLIGENCE LEAGUE OF EQUESTRIA).
While not stated yet, the little pocket/hoof mirror is called a Reflector Deflector. It's purpose is to release a spell that wipes away certain memories. It's used when, as stated by Agent Furlong, “But if somepony does learn something they shouldn’t know, you know what to do.”
But also for your question about making her an actual spy, she pretty much was while in the agency. However, having close bonds wasn't part of their practices. That's why even when she was embedded in with Twilight in the Castle of the Two Sisters, she worked nights, did most things by herself, and kept her distance from as many others as she could.
Then Lyra, newer to the agency, was allowed to act differently given her more outgoing nature. Also, in the novel, she actually reads the training material and manuals, taking what she learns and becoming very proficient, outperforming Bon Bon in areas neither of them expected.
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Very much of the calm before the storm, and their exchange between the three of them with Shining will only get more intense as their reasons to resent each other grow.
As for the calendar system, this was the best way to make sense of it all. Mostly because the calendar system we use, Celestia actually discovered while exploring other worlds through failed/less interesting mirror worlds.
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And how would that look like to you?
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No need to know we erase is all together MIB style
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I love this little comment section chats
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War as they say is a dirty bussness
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On one hand your right. On the over hoof your forget Author might confirm, redcon or add there lore.
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I really need to get hold of the comics
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Huh... Neat piece of lore.
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Harpys, faun, Sphinx with human features, catgirls. Depends on the race you mix the humans with...
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Fluff to cuddle
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okay. Me, I did such thing in a private work once, but kept it very simple.
And for that with the MIB, let's just say, be careful around unicorns
10768500 55. Dealing with the Exposure of Secrets
Just doing what I can.
10768548 56. Predators
Sounds like a job for the Stranded Seven and associates.
With Cerb's help... She'll be unstoppable.
10768728 57. Protection, Lust, and Trust
She got bigger, but really, what else changed?
10769311 58. The Learning Curve of Opportunities & Reservations.
Probably just those hands giving the kinda head pats only humans can.
It's not over until the objective was completed and everyone made it home. In your case, your objective was completed. Good on ya.
10769531 59. The Power of Touch: How Will They Really Feel? ·
I love getting comments.
All of them and more.
I more or less assumed that some of them were rich but chose not to flash their fortunes around or live a lavish lifestyle.
10769713 60. The Fear of What Follows AfterBronycommander
To give the easy answer, wiki describes Bread Pudding as:
Bread pudding is a bread-based dessert popular in many countries' cuisines, made with stale bread and milk or cream, generally containing eggs, a form of fat such as oil, butter or suet, and depending on whether the pudding is sweet or savory, a variety of other ingredients. Sweet bread puddings may use sugar, syrup, honey, dried fruit, nuts, as well as spices such as cinnamon, nutmeg, mace, or vanilla. The bread is soaked in the liquids, mixed with the other ingredients, and baked.
Savory puddings may be served as main courses, while sweet puddings are typically eaten as desserts.
If you want to try it out, there are a few recipes you can try out HERE.
That's a good way of looking at it.
Sniff is stretching himself pretty thin. Not sure how well that would pan out anyway. Unless I am mistaken, I'm pretty sure Harmony is, by definition of her makeup, a construct.
In the end, it's all about what the writer wants.
10770546 62. Broken Arrow
For harmony, that does seem like a great advantage. At the same time... is it worth everything those affected by it never had the option to give up?
Also, humor can be a great coping skill.
I'd say he surprise Dragon fired them all to hell. Also, cool name, but I'm holding off on anyone else naming their attacks at the moment. All of Rainbow's and even Rarity's wrestling move are cannon.
Spike will legally be a man soon. Although, he might start to recognize certain assets sooner than expected.
Always.
10771322 95. Survive the Day, Escape the Garden.
As do I. I'm glad to have any level of interaction with my readers.
War is a game for the rich to play with, and the poor to die in.
That one is actually a very short novel, though there are some pretty good comics. I certainly recommend the multiparter of Celestia and the Good King Sombra.
I get a few things right here and there.
10772674 66. Everyone's Wake Up Call.
It's certainly not rape, but that face is borderline "Gimme that dick before I take it." XD
I still love how that one turned out.
Her potions will have to catch up to Becky's needs.
If left to her own means, at least if exhaustion wasn't a drawback for her, Chris would need and IV and a sippy cup to keep up with all the fluids she would drain from him.
10772879 67. Compensating: Part 1.
The really good bad boys.
That would be pretty hard to pull off. Maybe if the Stranded Seven found a way home but only six left, leaving only the Stranded Chris... Yeah, that would probably do it.
That noble got off easy. Too easy, the second time (Spoiler).
Trixie has yet to perform any magic other than simple telekenisis. When she does, we don't know what to expect.
Yeah, trying to keep it as canon as possible meant they used some terms that didn't exactly fit. However, as time went by and they got more comfortable correcting each other, that term slowly started to get phased out.
Can't lie, the wait for this game you're gonna have everyone play is becoming all the more worth it. Sounds like it'll be one hell of a chapter.
Also I may have missed this but did you say we'll finally get to see Chris art?! That's awesome if true! Given how close they are, Star's gotta be in it too but if not, it's cool to finally see what Chris looks like in detail.
I await to see what Cerb looks like. We already got Lumberman,Benny,Sniff, Kelly, & Becky.
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Currently, I'm waiting on the artist to send me what she has... Not sure what the hold-up is.
You don't have to have the art for the chapter if there's a huge issue going on with the artist at the moment right?
That is unless it's finished & it's an absolute must that it goes with said chapter.
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I'm not sure if I should be sad or pissed that the art wasn't delivered as agreed upon. Now the chapter is late, and the art still isn't here. So, it's going up in a bit. The art will have to come later... I guess.