Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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nice job!
im curious as to what this harmony looks like. does she look like twilight or does she look like fausticorn?
other than that as for celestial misgivings i think its understandable. i mean if a bunch of aliens showed up on our front door , you can bet a few people not to mention those people in a position of power would most likely feel uneasy.
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Thanks. I try.
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You're welcome!
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As of right now, I invasion Harmony as the double of Twilight, the same that Trixie saw.
Yay update
Lunas ears might be as long or longer than her horn
Humans contact with different species with different locations on the planet... Perhaps free will will spread faster now. One one hoof its nice free will spread over the strings harmony binds em, on the other claw this might end all forced piece and everyone must make a decent effort to keep piece and prosperety.
Cage or freedome. Both have benefits and a price.
I wonder what Becky and Rd will be doing ones they go to the Crystal Empire.
Shining Armor is a well wipped Husband
Rainbowdash dreams of getting double fun by getting mirror pool clones spitroast her Becky... The inventor of sex toys... That women is about to the filthy rich... The pony will be envyes from her living his name
Rainbowdash & Becky cuddels
Cerberus training routine will be quite effectiv with all the mares clinging to his body
By the way... How long instory until the trial? Spearhats new destiny will be interessting...
Pinkie Pies hooves will have run so many miles over her own marehood after tonight
Hm... Pinkie x Flash Sentry? Meh...
I can dig it i guess
Twilight was totaly wiped. Yet that night was quite a snuggly night
Love your puns
Humans... The glue that binds all races
Clever Celestia! So Blueblood is a asshat after all?
Or is she giving Blue to less credit to be able being civil?
Luna and Kelly. The females of lust and sensuality.
Huh... Didnt had it on the radar that Lyra was kinda dragging her offical job behind...
The young generation developing before there time?
That Batpony mare is going to give Gallus dreams of draining his coconuts
Huh... Perhaps the anti social dragon behavior is to keep the Dragons devided?
I have faith that Spike and Ember can help dragonkind become civil
Gilda would make a good Ambassador
Batponys have it bad... Humans fixing it would indeed make them invaluable
Dawww... Now i feel really bad for not a singel Batpony to have a human to nibbel on
Hm... Perhaps the singel Becky might find a Batpony guard with big Mangos to fill her needs
Being the lovable goof that he's been around Becky lately, I'm sure it'll go very smoothly. I really like these two so far.
Now if only Cadance could get roped in with Justin.
They're the best of friends who understand each other more than their own friends do.
The only way I'd feel a certain way about them sharing a bed would be if Rainbow & Becky did a complete 180 about not liking the same sex.
Also sharing a bed is not only for adult activity, so I'm glad that that someone used it as just something to sleep in.
I mean....yeah. Ain't nothing getting in the way of Twilight & her man. When she said she was gonna spoil him, she wasn't playing.
Always welcome to see more of my favorite pairing in the story. Also everything you said about their relationship in this chapter makes a lot of sense. While I'm eager for them to just say "Fuck it" & get down, the natural progression & realistic approach that they've taken & how much they care about each other as a couple is what really makes them shine. I love that they're willing to wait for their first time.
Only will make it much more tense & probably funny as hell for when they inevitably do the deed. Imagine the playful banter during sex. I'd probably just be chuckling through it all like I do their usual flirting.
Yes. Yes she is. I know Twilight would've slept through her bullshit & so would I to be honest.
I appreciated everything to do with the youngins in this chapter, it dealt with some serious shit that while I felt bad got exposed to them, it needed some doing. The discussion that was had is a great example of the good that the 'Stranded 7' have brought to Equestria.
Everything about Harmony spells Trixie's nightmare versions of the 6 & 7 plus their dead friends. This event might be an example of the bad that the humans have brought to Equestria. In other words, Celestia will have her justification even if it pisses me off to no end.
Would've loved to have seen the pompous little shit even try fucking with Rarity. It would've been some pony on pony crime if Shy stepped in. Don't even get me started on what Justin would do.
Don't got much to say about Foot & Fire but the best advice I could offer for those two is to tread carefully.
I too pray that Pinkie rushed into a room that didn't have anyone in it. I'd run if I were that stallion or mare
Man....fuck Flash, I know it's his duty to report back to the Princess but fuck him anyway. After the way he side eyed Sniff, that's more reason to say this...for me at least.
I enjoyed this chapter & it was worth the wait. A solid 10/10.
First & foremost, I'm really glad you're doing okay & took a load off to deal with some personal issues in your life. Glad you took some time to heal before coming back.
Speaking of coming back....PEACHEZ IS BACK BABY!
She also makes the characters look more human & lively.
Kelly looks stunning & Luna just as elegant as ever. Honestly with the way they look, it is slightly off putting to see them doing any of the shit they do in their private time.
Harmony losing control of future villains bring me dread...
- Sombras return
- Tirek return
- Chrysalis return
- Storm King , that guy has the most potencial for getting MLP race population decimated...
- Cozy Glow ,That pine sized potencial genocide via magic environmental destruction...
- Shadow Pony out of limbo... I really dont think the Pillars are worth the risk... Sorry Stygian
- MLP Comic challanges ? Like Nightmares return. Rarity is one hot piece of villain
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To be fair ... No one like gold diggers. Rarity was digging so hard for gold she never seem to know anything about Blueblood than 'hes a prince, rich and is related to Celestia'. That why i partaly always liked Blueblood. Makes more sence hes behavior is more of a act to shoo of gold digging mares.
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Always
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Cozy Glow
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And successful pulling it off with every chapter
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Agreed!
Ominous as fuck... I LOVE IT ♡
Snuggels for RD
One huge multi royal breakfast. The castle personal sure have there hooves full.
Perhaps Gallus let batponys drain is Coconuts this morning
I guessed they sleep in this morning? Or didnt they stay up all night long to chat with his friends?
Edit: Should checked the Authors note sooner
Werwolf party? I have to google that one.
Never hear of it before.
All i can imagen at the moment:
By the way the game 'Deceit' is free on steam. Cosmetics hold the game financed.
I recommend we play one day.
Or perhaps 'Among Us'.
O my Nightsky Twilight having regular lore time on humans... I totaly forget about that... Amazing you didnt
Feels like a lifetime ago they had there last and had there fun with Twilight
Seriously Apple Acers are the prime source for Canterlot Apple supply nearby... Can somebody point out that its in everyones interesst that they get more personal to Big Mac dont work himself to burnout... After all tending to
Kelly and Lunathe Farm is hard work.Harmony is panic. I pity it and kinda enjoy it struggeling. Its a hero and anti-hero at thecsame time.
Its funny that Trixies spell did more damage than Starlight Glimmers literally jumping timelines/ paralel universes.
Harmony of destiny bonding
vs
Trixie rose freedome
Who will win? Is there a winner? Tune in the next time and you might learn more
I can link a few story with well made or started of batpony lore. Or i could make a quick list of what i remember of em on the top of my head from other Authors
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Love this chapter! Shining really is blind, huh?
Oh, and thanks for the shout out!
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To be fair... Harmony basicly keeps them forced into a retarded state... Censor memorys when ever it fits the goal it seems...
Imagen somone take a human mind apart that way...
Suddenly you have a well educated and mature human returned to pre teen state
'Era of Harmony' it started nice but it was inconsistent and full of logic errors that made absolutly no sence... Chapter 10 and i was done.
Why this story would get any recommendations is beyond me...
Anyway looking forward to the next update
Other storys you can recommend?
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That's more of Peachez style and the perspective.
Very true about there being benefits to both options. However, weighing freedom vs total annihilation, not everyone will agree on what's best when considering the lives of others.
The plan is fo Becky to do research and help with medial training while RD starts her Wonderbolt training.
Wipped, and likely enjoys it. Or, perhaps, he's just going with the flow.
That was only one dream.
If not her, Kelly. Either way, they would dominate the market.
Can't blame the lonely-hearted for acting lonely.
I'm sure rolling on the mats for some hand-to-hand/hoof training will be dangerous when the time comes.
If Swift Hoof wakes from his coma, soon.
Ha! I'm sure she'll have run a one-pony marathon on herself.
She would have taken that pony for the ride of his life, that's for sure.
Poor Twi did wear herself out. Too bad, she missed out on some more intense playtime with Swifty because of it. Maybe next time?
When they work, they work well. I got to keep the humor in this story somehow.
Seems to be that way. So long as they don't cause a war on accident. Cerb almost caused one with the dragons because of Ember, even the Yak's pride could be a problem, if not the Griffon's greed.
Blueblood lacks a filter and is still full of himself. Another run-in with Rarity would have likely lead to an exchange of words that would have likely lead to Cerb stepping in, though Fluttershy would have probably been the first to start a fight if Blueblood made the wrong comment about two mares being together.
Luna just needs someone to love, and Kelly needs to feel loved. The fact that Kelly is trying to make their trio into something stable is what makes them work so well together.
To be fair, she was getting heavily distracted. Hands, bro... It's them hands. Which was something I didn't want her character running into the story with. Thus, her first impression of the humans was confusion, fear, and maybe even a little bit being grossed out by them.
Seems like Harmony had a different plan for them.
LOL! Oh, boy. It's a good thing she didn't eat a banana in front of him. That could lead to some totally different dreams down the road.
Well, Spike is making a good impression on Smolder, that's a good start.
All in due time.
Batponys never got the attention they deserved, so being shielded from the public so much, but welcomed by the humans has clearly left an impact. The humans may have a stronger allied force than they know.
I'm sure at this point they're happy with just having friends.
If not for the fact that Becky didn't want to lead any pony on or hurt their feelings with an "Oh, I only asked you out because of a bet," explanation after, she probably would have asked Midnight.
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I've had a good time working them together. How it ends up, or even how this date goes, only time will tell.
For as hard as she's been working, girl deserves at least a smooch or two. Not that Rarity and Fluttershy would likely approve. Not unless... hmmm...
They do seem to have a pretty good understanding of each other. As for Becky doing a 180 about liking the same sex, she's only ever been sexually active with Kelly, and doesn't seem to regret it other than expecting more opportunities.
It's really Rainbow that doesn't have any interest in mares, human or pony.
It's more of just the idea or perception from others. They got nothing sexual going on with each other, other than Rainbow being willing in sharing a stallion of she can't make things work with Soarin'.
She'll make good on her word, and skipping out on the chance to help with the other delegates was just a part of it.
Mostly, I just wanted to show them making conscious and considerate decisions about their relationship. when they get down to going to pound town, it should mean something.
Celestia is boring due to her occupation. It's sadly not even really her fault.
Them youngsters have a lot to deal with, or at least a lot to help each other with. If I had the time, I'd do a story just bout these guys together.
Nothing solid yet. Plus, Sniff might have dampened her resolve.
I think Shy would have embarrassed the hell out of him, if not thrown him through a wall. Cerb, however, would have known better than to cause a scene on a member of Royalty... or a duke... in the presence of Celestia at least.
Oh, for sure they need to be careful, but they have a role to play still.
I'm sure she'd make it enjoyable if it were to happen.
Egh. Don't be too hard on the guy. He's just doing his job and acting in accordance with what he knows. He's not actually been a dick to anyone, yet.
Glad you enjoyed it.
I'm still trying to catch up and keep the good pace going, but we'll see.
Peachez loves the comments you all give about her art. As for seeing them in their private time... I'd watch.
Sure would make writing about it easier.
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Ominous, indeed.
Becky snuggles and cuddles.
I put a lot more emphasis on food than I should.
Insert banana joke.
Ha! Yer good, bud.
Never heard of that game before, but it's kinda like that... I guess. I've played Werewolf a few times, and it was fun. Think of it as "Among Us" but with roles and special abilities, some characters have.
Things got complicated and Twilight's schedule got messed up, then more danger and so much else has happened. So, yeah, it's easy to forget.
The Apples aren't too big on letting anyone but Apples take care of their apples... sadly.
Meh. I'm not bothered by it. Let her squirm over it for a while.
Is that so?
Trixe Rose vs Harmony Tree? That could be fun to watch. Especially if Luna Ring joined the fight.
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I was looking for more of the official lore or backstory to them. Doesn't seem to be much of anything I could have used.
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Sadly, yes he is... Kinda like Cerb.
And no problem bud. I owed ya, and I'm still following along.
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The story is obviously very different from mine, and I noticed errors here and there, but for his first story, I'm over looking what others might not be able to and just take in the story as it is. I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy it, but at least you gave it a try.
Things will get moving a bit faster in Canterlot. You'll see.
Not at the moment.
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Sadly yes. Batpony lore is the possible less developed lore in MLP it seems...
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yes, sadly it is
So it's been a long while since I started this story back in the summer of 2020. From the arrival of 'The Stranded 7' in Equestria to the expanding relationships the group of humans have formed with the characters from My Little Pony : Friendship is Magic of all things. Shit got crazy pretty fast if you ask me.
If you had told me such a story with such characters would have me hooked, anticipating the release of a new chapter, & being excited for each one, I'd call you crazy.
I've already explained my favorite pairings & how I love their dynamics. I do love how there could be similarities yet they're all so different from one another.
The most interesting piece of the story is the fact that real life comes into play via Chris & Becky's knowledge of the show in our world plus the music.
Never would I have imagined a HASBRO character doing the 'Wobble' & yet that image is now in my head. Then again Twilight does have that... dance she does with Cadance & in all honesty given how grown up they are, you'd think it'd be wildly inappropriate to do it in public but I guess...fuck you we're royalty.
I really would like to see a potential return to Earth for our humans but I gotta be honest, I don't know how I'd be able to return to the life I had before Equestria like nothing ever happened. Perhaps a temporary return is in order?
Benny, Sniff, & Cerb are situations where I'm more conflicted. It's like my mind says "Yes, I know that they've done so much in so little time but I truly feel if given the chance to return home, there'd be some hesitance but they'd still go & plus I'm sure the bonds formed would continue well off after they were gone anyway".
Benny is a lot easier to see staying though because of what he lost on Earth so maybe a new clean slate with Vinyl & Octavia is what he needs.
Lumberman? He has everything that he wanted in Equestria (aside from being able to actually bear a child). He's got the Apples as a secondary family, he's doing wonders with his new occupation & most importantly, a love like no other with Applejack that in terms of just raw connection, beats out all the pairings in the story as far as I'm concerned. Him leaving would be huge for me.
Already said before but AJ was LITERALLY WILLING TO LEAVE EQUESTRIA for him if he chose to go.
If that's not love then what is?
Truly James has got it made.
This man Lumberman has no chill & I'm here for that shit! Have fun AJ!
You got all this & now a character named Harmony likely coming in to fix the timeline is cause for some straight fuckery to occur.
And you know what? I can't wait!
Also more Discord & Justin scenes would be dope. I feel their little squabble wasn't enough given how Justin is currently blowing the love of his life's back out daily. I would love to see Discord's reaction to hearing about THAT! Shit would be priceless & salt inducing.
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Every pairing is different in lots of ways. I know we've both gone on about this. AJ and Woody, such a good couple together and on equal footing. The others all seem to have moments of switching who really seems to be controlling the relationship. Although, sometimes it's kinda funny watching Starlight seduce Chris into submission.
I like the aspect of the human having insider information, knowing about them, but didn't want to go the route of having any of them try to play the system or a "Oh, no. I can't change the way the story is supposed to go" approach. Making it happen in line with the current episode being released fixed that, but at the same time, neither Chris nor Becky nor even Benny to some extent, try to exploit their knowledge for personal gain.
Lifestyles of the rich and the famous, I guess. And yeah, the Wobble dance just seemed to fit like a fun dance that any of them could get into and have fun with.
Well, all of them are slowly making their beds, one way or another. Some certainly want to stay, others at least appear to want to head back at least one more time.
We'll have to wait and see if this is just the honeymoon phase. Things do seem to change rather quickly here for our Stranded Seven.
Starlight certainly knows how to behave while with company, but since even just wanting to be friends with Chris, she's always sincerely cared about him. She also has some impulse control problems that usually leads her towards focusing on instant gratification. If not hers, another's... but usually ends with hers anyway.
Those three are a great trio. They need to do more together. Probably should also have some more Luna and Mac time together. Of course... next chapter might reveal a new bump in the road.
I think of those three, Benny has the least to hold him back from returning. Now, that's not me saying what he has going on with Octavia and Vinyl isn't something he's not enjoying. Clearly, he is. It's just that Sniff went hard on the paint, despite not going all the way, he's in it deep and knows he can't exactly get his old life back even if he could return.
With Cerb, he seems just as drawn to the idea of getting back into the fight as he does having the comforts to soothe his misery with Flutters and Diamond Thighs.
... dude likes to fight.
If anything could hold him back in Equestria, it likely would be those two.
Lumberman is a man of commitment. That certainly seems true enough.
One might get the impression that not only is AJ seeing another side of life she never took into consideration before, but maybe wants a family of her own just as badly as Lumberman does. At least the coupling part.
Oh, it's love.
That's him saying he's gonna go ham on her clam when she's ready.
Kinda funny that with all the other iterations of Harmony, this is the only one to make it into another Equestria.
I think at this point Discord danced with the idea of being romantic with Fluttershy but is more than happy with still being her bestie. So, if anything, I could see Discord going secret agent mode to make sure nothing happened to Cerb and eventually figure out a way for Flutters to take all the baby batter and turn it into a real bun in the oven.
Chapter 95 has gotta be a loooong ass chapter
with how long it's taking to update.
I'm just playing. 😂
If there's some personal stuff you gotta take care of, go handle that shit dude. I'll gladly wait.
Ideally a marriage has proper communication, such as 'hard no' topics, 'soft no' topics, and the 'yes' topics. And it isn't necessarily limited to just sexual ideas and fetishes. It can be about anything, from taking out trash, doing laundry, or cooking meals; to abortion, interracial/interspecie relationships and intermingling and the death penalty.
I think Cutter should communicate with Baked and find out his stance on interspecie relationships, both in general and as applied to Oven. Maybe find out his feeling about non-pony species in general. Is it a hard no for him? A soft no? Then find out if a win-win solution can be achieved or if Baked would at least settle for a compromise.
Unfortunately sometimes some things are just no-win, and it will be up to Baked and Cutter on what they will do if they are having a no-win situation regarding this matter of interspecie relationships. Or Cutter wanting another foal.
Harmony is like a Author of a great story. Just knowing all her roles are real individuals living it...
Trueman show flashbacks!
Ouch. Don't let Shining hear that.
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Oof. No. You must have forgotten already, but Flash only recently took over for the previous Captain Spearhead, not Shining Armor.
Wasn't the dogs name 'Winona'?
Abyssinians - at least Google say it's how one type it.
Great to see a puppeteer struggle, it is well deserved.
Unfortunately is all good coming from that one as well, so not all is bad.
Great to see the sequel updated, great addition to the story happy celebrating the coming days and I hoe you get better soon
Chapter 94... Harmony is catching on, with so few chapters remaining, is a villainous individual to be smited still
I am actually surprised that Harmony wasn't helping Discord fixing the hole in reality, but I guess her crashing network keep her to busy trying to hot fix her windows into he world.
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Fixed
Also fixed.
I like to mix things up.
I wanted it to come out sooner or closer to Christmas, but I ended up putting it out when I did due to time constraints with me taking a vacation.
All Harmony knows is that something isn't right and she can't monitor things like she's supposed to.
Harmony and Discord work in different ways, even if they end up wanting the same thing. In most cases, Harmony would end up working behind the veil using ponies or through creatures by essentially working through them. On the flip side, Discord would be alongside them, not always helping them directly, but not so subtly motivating and guiding them. His influence would be direct, even if unwarranted, whereas Harmony would have to be inspired and hard-earned.
In this case, Harmony doesn't have any motivation or a means to fix the damage done, or perhaps, since Discord is there, she's using him and chooses not to intervene since she's already busy with other matters that she deems more important.