Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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just waiting for trixie to explain how human sex is a pony power up to everyone
Update Im sleepy
Must...stay...awake listen to auroreading function
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Jesus... I laughed so hard... PRICELESS ♡
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Still have to figure that much out.
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It'll be here after you wake up.
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Fixed
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Poor Tealove. She never watched Dave Chappel. She would have known what the five fingers say to the face.
Now THIS was a fucking chapter!
First
• Thunder Glide vs Spitfire was excellent & definitely a humbling moment for such a cocky & arrogant fiery pegasus like Spit. I'm glad they're getting along & on a slow progression to friendship. Hope the Wonderbolts truly learn something from this.
• Cerb is a real one for training Thunder & honestly given that his teachings to Thunder in this battle paid off really well, who knows just how powerful the Lunar Guard will become under his guidance!
• I adored the trash talking between two
• To the back of the head tho?! Jesus Thunder! Brutal
Second
• Luna, Twilight, & Trixie deadass said "Fuck Responsibilities" & really sat their asses down to watch some ass whoopings lol.
• Twilight covers her ass ( as if it's not out in the open on the regular because...ya know...they don't wear clothes lol.)
*bonus note* Ponies wearing clothes & it somehow becoming lewd & or suggestive like with the whole socks fascination will always confuse me but it's whatever.
Third
• Pinkie Pie just freely cursing up a storm is just hilarious & I was able to hear it in her respective voice. Don't know if that's actually good or not lol.
• Interesting conversation between Star & Trixie with some light comedy by Prim.
• The discussion of Humans fucking Ponies being a power up will be very interesting when we cross that bridge
• The "fight" between Kelly & Tealove....nuff said 💀
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That's right Fleetfoot, you don't want that. 👋
• Good to see Kelly actually put her love for Big Mac on full display like she did with that kiss.
• Luna liked what she saw no doubt with how angry Kelly got. 😏
Fourth
• Sniff has balls of fucking steel standing up to someone like Cutter & when he mentioned the damn keys again?! Mans played the game & he damn well played it good!
• Cutter is one cold ass goon. She was itching to cut a bitch with the amount of times her hoof reached for her sword.
• What a damn speech from Sniff. Talked his talk & I love how he explained it through his experiences with mothers just like Cutter.
Finally?
• First & foremost what a damn kiss from Ovens to Sniff. Talk about showing off to her mother!
• Ovens vs Cutter in general was just one big emotional rollercoaster of a fight. Full of pent up frustration from both sides stemming from years of problems before the humans ever landed in Equestria.
• I love the comparison to Cerb vs Lumberman in regards to this fight but there's a lot more personal beef between Ovens & Cutter as they are family compared to future friends duking it out. Still loved it though.
• Each word hurled at the other was just really heavy...like damn you sympathize with both & still know that what is happening has to happen.
• I felt bad for Ovens after the fight when Sniff ran to her mother's side. I know I know, priorities to see if Cutter was okay but a victory kiss before checking would've been nice too. At least eventually she got it.
• This sitdown between Ovens, Cutter, & Sniff will be rough. Imagine Cutter if Twilight is mentioned? That's a conversation that'll surely be awkward. I hope he tells nothing but the truth.
Overall?
What an incredible chapter that deserves my rating of an 11/10.
The party's on it's way out & I'm anxious for the situations between our ponies & humans.
Maybe I'm in the mood to see what's transpired with Celestia & maybe even the guard who almost murdered poor Kelly.
And like I said 2 out of the 7 being Chris & Kelly have given our ponies some lovin
However....
You once said some human was gonna cross the line twice. I'm betting on Cerb because you know how hungry Diamond Thighs & Flutters are to get into his pants but hey who knows what you'll surprise us with.
(P.s. was Diamond Thighs a pre-existing nickname for Rarity or something you made up strictly for the story? If the latter that's awesome!)
One thing's for sure though, I'm already ready for more Lumberjack. Bound to have some truly adorable & wholesome interactions....maybe some erotica if you will because lord do these two flirt with each other HARD! 😂
Only gonna get better as we begin their situation as an official couple now.
The next chapter awaits!
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Part of me wanted to draw out their fight a bit more, but after considering Thunder's background and Spitfire's cockiness and easy dismissal of others (probably more of a low tolerance for drama than maliciousness), I couldn't see her not being her own downfall in this. Cerb's help was more of a strategy than anything else. The chokehold he wanted her to use didn't even happen since Thunder over estimated Spitfire's reaction time. Of course, this turnout likely means that both teams will be getting the training.
LOL! Yeah, Twil and LuLu did. They've been through enough and needed a break. Plus, with other issues popping up, the party wasn't a good setting for them to discuss things. Of course, that being another reason Twi had to cover her ass.
As for the clothes on ponies having that kind of effect, it's like Sniff said. It's all about drawing attention to the assets.
Ponies swearing in general throughout this is funny.
There will be more conversations between Starlight and Trixie, maybe even Prim or the others. That power-up, though? That's already looking like it's different than the other two examples Trixie has seen so far.
If you've read the comic behind that story (it's cannon), Treelove was borderline psycho for Big Mac.
Kelly ain't looing her stud to no mare. Luna... she gets a pass for obvious reasons.
Sniff just happens to know how people, and by extension, ponies work. Ponies are just a bit easier to read since they're usually terrible liers and wear their emotions on their sleeves.
As for Cutter, she is ruthless. You'll find out more about her extremes, just wait. Same goes for what I intentionally left to the imagination about what Sniff did to make his findings.
That was done with the purpose of pissing Cutter off.
A lot of work went into hammering out that dialog and the fight choreography. If you took the time to listen to the songs, they are even timed out to match. Same goes for their intro songs. I highly recommend listening to Cutter's intro song to see why it pissed her off so much. It will make things a lot more clear with the next chapter.
When those passions and tempers get high... what ya gonna do?
They both had their reasons to be angry at each other, which only made things worse. Kind of the reason Sniff ran to Cutter first, he might just happen to know a secret or two.
Expect drama... and maybe some heartstrings getting tugged on.
I'm glad this chpater left an impact with you.
It's coming up.
3 of them. Chris, Kelly, and Sniff.
Well, Chris, Kelly, and Sniff have all been with at least one pony. So the potential for any of them to cross that line a second time still exist. Although, like the way you think about Cerb would cross the line two times in one night. Pretty ambitious for a guy that still has a bum leg.
I want to say it was a combination of "Diamonds," a song about Rarity I was listening to while running through nicknames had had Butter-Thighs for Flutters. I doubt I'm the first to think of it, so I could have come across it somewhere else before I started writing this.
Those two do have her injuries to worry about still, but I'm sure you can imagine how thirsty she's getting now that he's all but put a ring on it.
Wednesday, bro.
Comment section is great. Story is mindblowing. Tension is so thick you can taste it. Niceee♡
Re-autoread this chapter and damn what a ride.
Hate Cutter is Spearhead x3 . I mean he mainly ignored others and things escalate.
Cutter is provokant without need/use, literally is a worse incident asking to happen and overshadow Spearhead & she is arrogant beyond believe...
Cutter reminds me of cops that think they can do what they want when the want if they dont unless she is incapable of doing so like in this situation.
Impressive how Sniffs seed of lust and knownlage blossom into a strong mare. If a unicorn get to earthpony level than Applehat will collect teeth next time she hit hard.
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Kinda strange that I have almost as many comments as I do views.
Cutter has her problems, though she also got results. We'll get to see a bit more about why she is this way on Wednesday.
Much like Fluttershy and Rarity, get a mare mad enough and all hell breaks loose... or maybe it's super jizz. She got one busted on her.
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Fixed. That's the last one, I promise.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/327551/changeling-space-program
Its a amazing reading experience. I recommend it if your in need of a story to entertain yourself
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I'm still busy writing at the moment, but I'll keep it on my watch list.
You : "3 of them. Chris, Kelly, and Sniff"
Wait Sniff finally rutted Ovens or is he still doing finger stuff. I said 2 when referring to those who've actually fucked unless just like Kelly, it was off scene.
Was this implying that?
I know that bookworm is still on that slow progression to getting intimate with Sniff which in due time will change.
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He's been all kissing and hands stuff, though he took things farther when Twilight observed and she "assisted" which popped him in for all off about 2 inches or a little more. So, while not a full rut, pretty damn close. Enough that it wasn't a struggle to pull out... Physically, at least.
If she's lucky, and Sniff has even less restraint after getting worked up from so many skirts, she might get more than even what he hinted at.
What are the ethnicities of the human characters?
Sniff being referred to as dark skinned brought this on.
I know Lumberman is definitely a black man who's maybe from the south side with how he speaks to the others & Applejack?
I'm not sure about about
Sniff
Cerb
Becky
Chris
Kelly
I asked this because I'd like to visualize what they'd look like.
The cover art with the humans (while great looking) is not much help for me.
Speaking of art? Will we be seeing more chapter art? I loved the lustful looking Oven Fresh down at a half awake Sniff. Maybe the artist behind that could make art of the humans too?
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I got ya. It can be a little hard to tell sometimes, but we got:
I had planned to have the Ovens VS Cutter fight illustrated, but my artist has gone AWOL. I'm currently looking for other artists to fill in until the artist I've been using has things stable again.
I've been meaning to actually get the cover art completely colored, but the people I've reached out who said they would help me out, have all... failed to follow up with me or reply. The other downside is controlling the cost.
Even though this is a passion project for me, I'm already putting a lot of money into this and can't get carried away.
O come on! Don't destroy Human tech that can't be replaced
Seriouse american trigger happy vibes... hope she can put it to use were its actualy needed
At least they have a spare...
Hey... Is it just me or did anyone else noticed something off about Oven during her fight with Cutter? Oven kept saying that Cutter was holding back, but I get the feeling that she wasn’t.
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Indeed, my friend. Methinks ponies be getting a bit of a power boost from the humans.......
Bloody fine humor and many turn of events ♡
I'm actually from Halestorm's hometown, so seeing this made me happy
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I'm a bit of a fan of Halestorm and was lucky enough to be able to ee them perform live at a smaller venue. Otherwise, this chapter took me a while to write out. Not only for the choreography in the fights but also for deciding on the intro music for each character... although, Spitfire was the first and easiest one. It was a bit too easy. At the same time, I did feel bad having her fight end the way it did.
Regardless, I'm happy to see my small efforts still are paying off.
Besides the Timberwolves this fight night with Oven Fresh kicking flank is simply magnificent.
Ssssspppppoooooiiiiillllleeeeerrrrr
Only one big fight better than both coming after that.
I could see Kelly or Becky bitch slapping someone like Sombra out of his Shadow Form 👍
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The only thing better would be to have it animated.
If only. Ha!