Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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well....at least tia is trying....also sunbutt got a good look im surprised her ears didnt snap.......yet
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Tia is trying. Though how much is here trying to make amends with the ponies she's slighted or how much she's just putting on a strong front to fool them is hard to say. She honestlymight just be at war with herself at this point, unsure of what she really feels.
Magnificent chapter I wonder if the different nations will be having observers in place in the trial of the attempted murder of a human. Its quite the event for the history books. I wonder... There is a lot of good and bad forces that might compete for the humans favor. How will they shape there view of Equestria. The humans do know of Celestias monopoly on changing think up by controlling all Elements of Harmony. I wonder... Ones the Elements of Harmony change to all species not just ponys... Will Celestia look on it as danger or as opportunity?
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To few exposure to free her mind of the Trees influence to think and geel for herself... Perhaps find love for ones not a Dimension away from her... I consider the stranded seven part of Equestria btw...
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To be fair... She probably is manipulated over centuries in most of her decisions by the Tree of Harmony.
Its funny really... Reminds me of Bioshock:
Cage Bird or free Bird
They are many things yet not what they seem. No matter the chose, there are positiv and negativ sides to the decisions. But i think the script is only written literally to the last season and to survive beyond... They need to chose to live there own life & to right there own end and re-write how they get there if need be.
They can make a change. Celestia needs to do so to. Perhaps more than anyone else:
This chapter was definitely worth the wait & it now has the honor of being THE chapter in this story that has left me a lot more very excited for the follow up chapter.
I mean it when I say that everything in this one made me happy for each of the characters...even Celestia.
I just know Cadance was internally screaming at Celestia doing a 180 with her kindness towards Becky but at least we got to see Tia not in a fit of rage towards the humans for once.
Shining Armour & Becky's situation is still adorable. I really hope Becky gets around to opening herself up so that she could maybe settle with Shining. Their dynamic is really cute with how Shining stumbles around her.
Poor Cadance though. She really has quite the intention to get her hooves on Cerb but she can't pursue him if Shining doesn't get more acquainted with Becky, never mind that she still has Rarity & Fluttershy to deal with & that's an even bigger obstacle.
Damn...didn't know Luna could burn like that! You go take that long walk Sniff. Ain't no coming back from that.
So that's what the bet was about! Well I would say Rainbow was right on the money with her bet then. Starlight threw down the gauntlet for that boy! It was not much of a surprise that Chris was gonna get him some first. Hell! He literally admitted that Twilight as a pony was more attractive than her 'human' counterpart when he first arrived.
Whatchu….whatchu tryna do Flash? Don't start nothing, won't be nothing. Twilight doesn't want ya & you better recognize that. This fool better tread carefully, Empty.
Bruh, Luna, Kelly, & Mac are something else. I'm surprised Luna even made it to the event. She's not flying for a week!
I would've loved it if you described Celestia's expression of seeing Kelly naked. I can just see her eye twitching every 2 seconds with a toothy grin.
Sniff is the only human that knows Cerb & Kelly's secret one night fling I believe. I trust he wouldn't spill the beans unless pushed far enough.
The scenario in which Luna could potentially slip up & reveal Kelly's secret as well as her hots for Cerb in front of Fluttershy & Rarity would be hilarious but it'd also cause one hell of a fight & it'd likely cause Cerb's girls to side eye Kelly & Luna which sadly would indirectly fuck with Cadance's intentions because maybe they'd then would NEVER allow anyone else in their trio. This shit is getting tense!
Hell yeah they are Twi!
So Celestia does in fact not like the idea of Sniff & Twilight being an item & Twilight desperately doesn't want Celestia to even know that it's true. Fuck & here I was complimenting Celestia minutes ago on not being such a bitch towards the humans for once but NO! She couldn't even put aside that bullshit for her student's love for Sniff. Why does she hold such a stupid grudge against someone who's doing right by someone she holds near & dear?!
MOTHER. FUCKER! Sniff get your ass over there!
This is the most serious I've ever heard Pinkie sound since I began this story. I really like it. Makes you really feel bad for her. I know the sex is a big reason but I genuinely believe that she's starting to fall for Benny & to know that she may have missed her shot permanently is just heartbreaking. Poor girl.
Alright, given the situation with Twilight & Sniff about Celestia earlier who is at the party as we speak, I feel that shit is about to get real. This could go bad or good really quick.
My theory is that when she closed her eyes, she saw something, preferably something to do with her & Sniff & it caused her lust to come out full force. It's a stretch but hey what do I know?
I do know that Twi said she was gonna spoil Sniff to the core & to do with Celestia watching would be the ultimate middle finger.
Chapter 93 : Delegating & Dancing
*This title is very promising. We saw all the fun things that happened at the last dance & given this chapter's ending, I'm ready for shit to get wild!)
A crazy 15/10! Like this was a VERY ENTERTAINING read man. I'll be anticipating next week.
I didn't even have a problem with no art this week. I enjoyed it all the same.*
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Unlikely, since no other nation would allow for such a spectical.
I wonder... There is a lot of good and bad forces that might compete for the humans favor.
Betweens the yaks, griffons, and a lot of ponies, that already seems to be the case.
How will they shape there view of Equestria.
Some changes are already noticeable I would think.
They may know of her control over them, but she's always been the shot caller for the most part, so it's not like they're going to question it. As for the Elements of Harmony choosing new host... that has yet to be seen.
Harmony has shown to have a lot of influence over Celestia, that's for sure. Although, there was a moment where Celestia had overcome it... even if it did end in her dreams being crushed.
I never played any of the games, though you might be onto something about just how much control Harmony has managed to pull with her tactics of such a long period of time.
That does seem like the proper thing to do.
Celestia really wanted a change, she wasn't able to have it. Seems like Harmony doesn't want any more change to happen either.
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I hope I don't disappoint.
Really? Well, the night is still young. Plenty more to let happen.
Ohhhhhhh, Cadance was all sorts of unhappy to even have Celestia around. While not overt about it, certainly she did not want Tia's company, let alone her charity for Becky when her and Shining were already on top of things.
I'm doing my best to keep it all cute, but Becky might need a minute to look at Shining for anything other than friendship.
Rarity and Fluttershy would certainly be more of an obstacle than Shinings progress. They already agreed that they would see things would go. So, if Shining finds some physical lovings or only Cadance, they both said they were okay with it.
Ever make a joke at someone's expense that you didn't really get, you just said it hoping you got the punchline right? That's what Luna did, and we love her for it.
It was always going to be a toss-up between Chris and Sniff to be the first guy to bag himself a mare. Either Chris, because he was a brony with a fetish for fantasy, or Sniff because of his dependency on physical and emotional affection. From the outside looking in, Becky didn't know if Chris's insecurities and ZERO game with women would hold him back, or Sniff's perceived high standards for women.
If not for Chris's willful ignorance and infatuation/desperation... Sniff's dependence might have had him crack first. Instead, Sniff's morality and ethics held him off.
Bah. Let the guy brag a little. He's proud of his new position. He should be allowed to flash his title at least a little bit.
Yeah. I didn't feel the need to go into detail about that event on the farm, but it essentially happened rather fast.
I mostly didn't because at this point, she has no interest, and there was so little to see due to the bubbles. That, and being overly pissed off at Luna probably had her distracted.
So... maybe further in the future?
Sniff might have suspected at one point, but that was one secret both Kelly and Cerb never shared with the rest. Much like how Becky has only told Rainbow of her time with Kelly.
Humans and their secrets. Am I right?
It would be quite the event, given how even Rainbow was on edge about Rarity and Flutters knowing she had the hots for him. Pinkie certainly seems to know better than to tred down that path. However, with Luna? Not sure how those two would react... Or I just can't say.
Humans just seem to have that effect.
Celestia never wanted them even getting close to each other, let alone get romantically involved. Thankfully, Lyra's report was given before she knew about Twilight's romantic involvement with Sniff, so as of right now, Celestia doesn't know.
There's always a reason.
Yeah, another secret being kept is Octavia and Vinyl both don't know just how much Pinkie is into Benny.
Pinkie was a difficult one to write into this. It was easy to have her fall into the typical role of "Oh, yeah! Let's date! Let's kiss! Let's do more!" and then get laid.
However, Pinkie only thought that dating would be fun, but cared more about helping Benny than helping herself. Plus, after the events at the Castle of the Two Sisters, she didn't feel like she deserved something like that with him, nor did she know what it could lead to.
So... she kinda screwed herself out of getting with Benny before she even know it was going to be something she might have wanted for more than just something fun to try.
Two very good theories.
That is an interesting theory. Guess we'll find out next week.
That it certainly would, and how she spoils him could make a big difference as well.
Everyday is an adventure with the Stranded Seven, so I'm sure it will be eventful.
I'm very glad you enjoyed it so much. I'm sure you'll enjoy next week as well.
That was my bad. The link/code didn't save when I published the chapter. There is art, and you can see it in my last blog.
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That's still a lot of reading, and Chapter 23 was a lot of fu to write. It really started to put a lot of momentum to the story and what I was going for. Largely the shift with Sniff's character.
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of course and I enjoy it so far. Though I admit, the length of 10.000 words made it hard at times to keep track of everything.
And again, got no notification, thus the late reply
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Yeah... some chapters tend to get long.
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I got that all worked out.
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At least she's trying. She came off a lot harder on Chris then what was needed, so she's probably gonna have to put a lot more effort into making up for things now.
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Kelly and Big Mac have some great chemistry, and she's taking her time with him as much as she can. You'll see some great events with these two.
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okay.
of course. if you really wanna know, Imagine this: two OCs drink together, actually not fit together and one of them gets drunk, attempting to pick up/seduce the other, not recognizing the other due to being drunk.
Oh, for sure
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So drunk they don't even realize they're hitting on someone they know, but are treating them like a stranger. That's impressive.
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yeah, can happen, can't it?
Just seen the art for Chapter 92 &, aint that just so fucking cute?! Luna's wing protecting her like "Do my cry my love, for you have me" is so damn adorable.
It'd probably stay that way if my mind didn't remind me that these 2 just got playing a game of 'up da butt' with Mac.
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Seems he had been grossly underinformed.
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Protecting her lovely companion, trying to comfort her while thinking "Tia! Get the fuck out of here already!"
Well, really it was only Luna that played that game. Kelly just kissed her boo-boo better when they were done.
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fair point
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Dinky certainly is one to steal the scene.
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indeed!
I just wanna say that I continue to be impressed with how far this story has progressed. I will say that it's pacing at the start was a little slow but looking back at it, I'd say it was the perfect way to get to know 'The Stranded 7' & it only got better as we read through more of their past, most notably Peter's.
Pinkie seems like she's...maturing? Didn't really think she'd take potentially losing Benny like this. At first, I considered her just wanting what all her friends managed to get & that it was for comedic purposes only but now? I've already explained how I believe she's genuinely falling for him.
Benny is oblivious to Pinkie's feelings for him, correct? Sometimes I get the feeling that he notices that something is bothering her & that he may know that it's about him. I could be just imagining it.
On the topic of the Stranded 7 potentially going home, We know that this would have a profound affect on those that grew very close with them, with the most affected being Applejack as she stuck to the standard of one man & one woman with Lumberman. AJ loves him to the point that she asked to go with him despite the backlash our world would give a relationship like their's. Do you think she would really do that? Leave everything behind to be with the one she loves? Her mother did it but would she have the heart to do it & would those closest to her even be okay with that?
This Equestria is loosely based around the show with some fun twists via the OC Cream Heart & we've established that we are in a timeline of the show being 2016 as Glimmer & Shimmer are here. Now given this information, the show in our world has to be drastically different right? Like, just imagine being someone watching the show on a Saturday morning & you noticed the immediate changes in the character's behaviours? You'd have no idea that it's because of the shit that's happened here.
Hell! Imagine Chris being home & watching a scene with Starlight in it, knowing good & damn well that he's been clapping her cheeks for days & She breaks the forth wall with a wink towards him. Nobody but him would know why she'd did it. I just know he'd likely brag about it online with not one person believing him & that possible scenario is funny as hell to me. The boy is living every perverted bronie's dream right now. Cant help but laugh at the outrage that would insue should Starlight prove Chris's story as true.
Oof. Celestia is feeling it now!
great chapter as always!
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I was worried about the slow start when I first began this story but moved past that when I remembered the kind of story I wanted to tell. That meant taking the time to allow these characters to be properly explored and not just expose exposition or spoon-feed background through narration.
Also, each character needed time to act and react to what was happening to show where they were mentally/emotionally so their history would eventually make sense when explored to show why they are they way they are.
Pinkie is an anomaly all of herself. At times she has a loose grip of reality or what any form of personal boundaries or discomfort looks like. Now, all of them have changed to some degree. For Pinkie, I would describe it currently as her struggling to understand how to balance her wants and desires. She wants to help all of those around her and keep Benny happy, yet her desires for at least a physical relationship is getting in the way.
So, she's obviously confused on what to do when faced with love, lust, and friendship seemingly available in nearly every direction, yet all of them out of reach when having one means still wanting the other. Even for as much as she wants to be with Benny, she's inquired to get with nearly every other guy and had to back away from Chris when she realized how tempted she was.
Then again, when you look at her character, why would anyone really expect her to have any real deep or mature feelings towards Benny or the others when she's been nothing but a goofy scatter-brained party pony?
Pinkie has had to pull away from her advances and confessions out of fear of either getting her ass whooped by the likes of Fluttershy, Rarity, Starlight, and even Twilight. Not only that, Luna made it very clear that fucking things up for Benny would be grounds for punishment.
So, sadly, Pinkie is without a proper avenue to approach how she might truly feel about Benny. That has left only Sniff knowing that she wanted to be with Benny, but it's not difficult to see why he might have his own reservations about such a union. Becky knew that Pinkie did feel something at one point, but much like Benny, is going to believe that given him away to Octavia and Vinyl was a sign of her now lack of interest.
Cerb knew something was wrong at one point, but again... bad history with her earlier on mixed with Pinkie hooking Benny up with his two music mares leaves little room for questioning she might want more.
All that being said, Benny still seems to be close, if not only getting more comfortable with Pinkie as time goes by.
Applejack is stuck on Lumberman like white on rice. Ain't no doubt about that, and he seems just as settled on staying with her by the looks of things. If given the option to return home, it's hard to say what any of them would really do.
Sure, Lumberman is comfortable with a life alongside his little Apple Hat, but if given the chance to go home and put his life back in order, would he take it? Just the same, if he was really committed to AJ and took her along with him, could they have a life together in our world? Wouldn't it also go against her own commitment to her family? Them Apples stick together afterall.
Well, the next episode is Rainbow getting inducted into the Wonderbolts. However, presumably, in the real world that would be only one week away, but could be weeks or months away in the Equestrian timeline. So... would the show that's been animated in our world be changed, or is this world so far removed from the original that what happens there couldn't be seen back home?
Guess we won't know unless they make it home.
Oh, Chris is deep in that perverted brony dream, although I doubt he would brag about it. If sent back to Earth, I'd almost imagine he'd keep quiet about it with the hopes of going back uninterrupted.
But if his story was discovered and verified as true, he would be the envy of a great many bronies.
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Tia is getting a face full of what she tried to stop and seems to have no way of stopping it. Then again, she has no clue how far things really have gone.
Thanks! Still more to come!
Loved the cameo of Flash Sntry there. Franky, I never understood the hate for pony flash sentry, he didn't do any wrong
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Apparently being a character in a show where another character is the target of many sweaty waifu fantasies is enough.
From converstaions with bronies, both writers and non who have an opinion about this:
I imagine most of it comes from jealousy that Flash had the potential to be a love interest to the waifu. (which never even happens) that this could happen canonically in the show instead of fanfiction is what makes it so igregious.
So Flash is subject to revenge fanatsies and defematory representation by the monkeys who have decided their waifu must stay unattatched to retain waifu status.
So yeah, a group of socially inept incels decided to raise a big enough stink over loosing their nerd horse (cause you shouldn't jerk to an attached woman, guys. That's apparently the line... right there....And nowhere else...)
and the rest of the fandom saw this and most of them thought 'ok i guess this is part of fannon now.' either because they didn't give a shit enough, were worried about not being on every bandwagon or are the kind that think hating on something is fun.
there is also the bullshit going on about how they don't like Flash because he was a bad character.
no, he was a gimmic character. he had a narrative purpose and he filled it. just like CMC griffon, McColt dude. kirin girl and hundreds of others that I cannot even remember let alone vaguely reference.
and so we have poor flash Flash hurting some bronies' fantasies and they have to hurt him back in the only way the socially maladjusted can. they got very loud about it. other bronies saw this and thought, 'I have to do the same or I won't fit in', because of cause they did. While others were happy to have another thing to hate, cause it's fun.
in the end he was a bit-part that had the same canonical presence as Capper or that Cinch lady, had significantly less importance than either, was genuinely more likeable than both and received substantially more hate for being somehow threatening to certain fans' egos.
If all of this sounds rediculous to you. congratulations: you're an adult.
thankyou for coming to my ted talk.
Hooooo boy, seeing both Gallus and Gilda verbally tear Gruff a new one...... can't say he didn't deserve every word of what they said, he's been nothing but a right bellend since he was introduced into this story.
Becky should improve thanks to the Tea, yet I wonder what they substitute her medication for...
Kelly recovers from blood lost surprisingly fast.
Luna sure will be a Anal fan once decent Lubricant is used.
Big Mac is quite the lucky stud
Abesinian sure got a funny entrance to the story.
I wonder what Celestia will think about the Humans all staying
I wonder who will be Celestias special mate once the joins the Human fan train
Gonna guess, and I'm sure I'll find out if I keep reading, but Becky's wager was she would have to go on a date with Shining Armor if she lost the bet
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Wha? Forcing Becky into a bet to date a married stallion or royalty? Now that would be pretty ballsy for Dash to put on the table, let alone for Becky to accept.
Probably would have been a great plan if Cadance had been involved behind the scenes somehow, but we'll see how things turn out. You know I like to keep things interesting.
Great event, with the usual hiccup here or there, but still surprisingly calm and desaster free.
One can hope it stays that way.
Dawww... Kelly and Lunas picture is so cute, yet sobering for the situation they are in.
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I mean in another story they might be a nice fit, since Discord said why it couldn't be Pinkie Pie he fall for...
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Can't have an multi-species stampede everytime the Mane Six show.
They're so cute when they're not... you know... doing smutty things.
Oh, I thought you were talking about Pinkie or Discord still be partners for someone else in the story here. Otherwise, I'm sure that paring has been done before.