Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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worth the wait, nice work!
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I could have sworn I replied to you earlier, but I guess I got caught up in finishing the last chapter. Otherwise, yeah. I tired to sprinkle in as much humor as possible. The confetti bit came to me as something to throw off the intensity of the moment, but making it an actual party popper is the only way I could work it in.
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Thanks! And I can't believe how much work went into this one.
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mhm
Holy shit. The darkness that feasted on countless realitys got consumed by a broken portal spell...
Genius!
What will the future bring? No Harmony or chaos to change things... Freedom. Its for everyone to make the best out of it...
Well.......fuck me...
Gruff, Fucking DISCORD!, and Trixie....jesus...this was just sad. They went out like heroes for their final act!
That it is but you can't say Gruff didn't do right by his boy in the end. Rest easy soilder!
He really has been reformed. Such a gentle & sincere goodbye from the chaos God.
And is that a possible hint at Justin & Shy's future? 👀
Well said...may she be mourned & loved forever
Fuck that bitch up Sparks!
This was so worth it! Harmony is now dust in the wind & what a way for the bitch to take a permanent dirt nap! What an amazing journey this story has been for our crazy group of humans & creatures!
And it's not done just yet as we get to see the aftermath of the sacrifices we've seen. I know who's aftermath I'm waiting to see & I hope a happy ending awaits everyone in this incredible story along with a genuine reconciliation between Celestia & our cast of characters for her behavior.
Been following this story since I first found this website last year & it kept me coming back. Can't wait for it's conclusion.
A great & powerful 10/10!
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It's a whole new world everyone is walking into once they walk out of that cave.
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Had to finish strong, and finish they did.
it could be safe to say that after Harmony exposed herself, Gruff started to see that all the events that ruined his life and made him so bitter, turned him into someone he didn't want to be. The same life that he hated, he could now see he created for Gallus, and made the choice to finally break the cycle.
To be fair, Discord was clearly playing favorites with Fluttershy, and getting even with Harmony also played a major roll in his actions.
... but also, yes.
That seemed to be the logical conclusion Discord thought Fluttershy was leaning towards. As for seeing the future? I wouldn't give him that much credence in of that much accurate foresight. Afterall, he did technically botch the first pact with Harmony and didn't see that outcome happening.
Let's just say he's hoping for the best.
Trixie missed virtually every opportunity to help until the very end. So, all she had left was her final act as a way to contribute after she decided to take control of her own destiny.
They slapped the shit out of Harmony. Had it not been for The New Six getting caught, it would have been so much worse for her.
The fantasy controlled world of Equestria is over. Now... it's anyone's game.
Still more to come... sometime down the road.
1- NOOOO! why discord?! (Even though I've been expecting it ever since he joined the fray tbh it still hits hard!)
2- FINALLY!!! HARMONY IS DEAD!
3-I hate and love that you managed to return everything back to her apology tour. I almost forgot that's where you started this story.
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Because Discord made himself the biggest obstacle for Harmony to overcome... Even though the dynamics of the conflict changed dramatically after Harmony saw what he couldn't.
Itty biddy pieces everywhere.
Trixie tried to run from her responsibilities, but in the end, she could see that just like apologizing to Starlight, she had to make amends. Only this time, she couldn't rely on one to pull her out.
Even still, there is one final chapter to go. So who knows what else may come about or change.
NGL. the second half of the chapter required a reread to grasp what was going on. though I would blame that on my poor ablity to focus.
it was a rollercoaster ride, certainly.
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To be fair, there was a lot happening. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.
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You hit the nail on the head with that prediction.
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I tried to make these humans as grounded as possible, despite their extreme behaviors and personailities (or back stories). As for the smiles... There's plenty of spots in this story to get a few smiles out of ya.
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To have such a pretty lady like Becky die off so easily? What kinda pony fantasy world you think this? LOL!
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It's safe to say that Chris might have some unhappy feelings about how he was treated. And, actually, I don't think many are looking forward to seeing Starlight again.
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Cute thoughts, cute thoughts, cute thoughts. Gotta keep thinking cute thoughts.
Certainly does seem kind odd, doesn't it? Almost unrealistic.
Not remembering could be a lot of things, but the books coming up empty for results? That's beyond a red flag.
Well, stay tuned, as things only escalate from here.
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While not giving anything away, I will only say that I have a knack for delivering something to exceed expectations.
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By US standards, 19 is still underage. So even if the humans were used to drinking underage when they were younger, it's another thing to allow it to happen to other kids as adults.
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I won't lie. What few stories I have been following, I follow by having the site read it for me.
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Pinkie is unpredictable, but such a treat in the right writer's hands.
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And to think of all the trouble that caused for days to come. Good on ya, Benny boy.
Hey EmptyPlotFiller. I have a few questions:
- What about Spearhead? Since Harmony try murder the humans, did he and his fellow ponys get a pardon do to the chance Harmony trigger that event. Only the reader knows that not so after all.
- What about Sunset Shimmer? Sunset was manipulated no doubt into her actions.
- What about the Sirens? They rebelled against Harmonys actions!
- Will all it be resolved in this story or a sequel?
- Will Rainbowdash and Becks ever get laid?
- Celestia has still Harmonys powers in her crown or? If yes... Can she help Luna Rose?
- Is everyone still imortal with old Harmony dead?
How about there plotarmor?
Most imortantly ... ... ...
- Did Trixies hero Monument get a Derpylices grouphug? ♡
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You'll never know until you find out.
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Alchohol! The Friendship Maker!
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Butt naked vs an entire house and three vehicles. Yeah. That's a huge difference.
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Tis a rocky road to travel. Many dangers ahead.
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If you're referring to:
"Yet... the many bright worlds of hope and longing can save us before the fifth year passes." Spoken by Harmony, try to think of it more as her using pretty words to make her plea sound more important.
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Well, Flash Sentry has come around after getting put in his place. Even joining on the final fight, I think that gives the guy some potential.
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Ha! If only that were the case.
Angel bunny can suck it.
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Granny Apple Smash!
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They'll make do.
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I get a few good ones in there from time to time.
Clothes do hold many advantages. However, going nude = full body tan.
100.5. The End. Part 6.
I'm way ahead of ya on that. Waiting on editing.
Sunset had been manipulated to put her through the mirror, though her actions seemed completely out of character after that when she came around. She also seemed to know things others didn't. One might think there's still more to her story.
So did Discord.
So impatient. There's still more to read before such a question should be asked.
That'd be some good sequel bait.
Celestia took in all of Harmony's power when she went full Day Breaker. Thankfully, a Day Breaker in control.
As stated often, they are very durable. However, as clarified by Harmony, “Every creature has its limits,". Otherwise, that incredible durability was a gift from Harmony, which she took away without giving back. Such plot armor could be given back, it could only come about from another Harmony.
I think you might get a better idea of how things turned out with the next chapter.
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You'r the best ♡
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Yep, that's the point. I gotta keep you guessing. But, knowing you must be much further along now... I'm sure you can see how I can work this story.
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Because they are so cheesey.
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=sTqwP-9SFeQ
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I didn't want to write every scenario as a straightforward love story that anyone and everyone could connect the dots to. One or two, sure. That shit happens, even with the "Oh, they'll get over that obstacle real quick," type of storytelling. Why and how does or doesn't end up with who happens for a reason, and not always as expected, or at all.
As for Sniff, he could have easily been a one-note character. A horn-dog. Instead, there's a lot more to him going on. Something that's always made him fun to write, given how quickly he can adapt and control a situation, even if he's a total mess inside.
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Yeah... I never could explain that one. It's almost played off as if she's afraid to take on that much cheese, she's afraid of the temptation, or just had a bad experience. I could imagine that as a youngster, she ate one and the cheese ruined a book and she never got over it. Something dumb like that.
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Poor Peter. Always sniffing up skirts.
The poor poon-hound wouldn't stand a chance.
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Twists and turns abound! The highs and lows that come with this story have produced a lot of different reactions from the various readers over the years. This chapter, 63. Make Sure You Hold Her Tight, and maybe one or two others left a major impact to make the readers question what the reading.
However, like everyone else, I'm sure you'll enjoy the ride as it continues to play out.
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The perfect gift for any occasion. More alcohol.
Chapter 28. If the imortality still exist... I wonder how they will talk about it... If anyone will be able to fix the world in any timely fashion, than it will be the immortal learning from the humans and improve the world that was build on a shallow husk.
- The building of citys and individual constructs
- The medical knownlege for small and big injurys and sickness
- Sex ed and how to raise foals
- Death, graveyards and how to deal with anything around it...
- All the knownlege old Harmony supressed and horded...
Sooo... Since Pinkie Pie is a huge character in my currently running story. Is you'r staying a 4th wall bending one after Harmony and Discord bite the dust? Always wondered how it worked or originated from. I personaly love the fan version where she is not a pony but a old being, simply enjoying a peaceful life and having fun messing harmlessly with mortals.
Or in the show how Pinkie Pie had Discords powers for a moment and it would possibly effect her past, giving her the 4th wall bending in the first time...
Guess the Changelings will be at best in the sequels
Wonder how Bugwaifu will react being free of Harmony influence, making her a villain. Symbiotic relationship, instead of parasitic, it will be mutual perhaps? I can point out a lot of points for that.
Just for the love of anyone... No Rainbow colored Changelings
Chapter 32
Wonderbolt
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Lots of good content in that one. Something I look forward to re-reading and correcting the spacing issues for.
I need more art in general.
There's gonna be a lot of changes in the days to come. Really hard to say how they will all play out, given how so much has changed already.
At least she wasn't trying to duplicate a can of gas.
Mass chaos.
Looking back at that note, I think I phrased a few parts wrong and didn't clarify enough... Maybe something I'll fix after this arc is finished.
Oou! I like that idea. Sneaky sneaky sneaky foreshadowing.
Perhaps some hints could be foreshadowed in the epilogue.
Pinkie broke the forth wall when she was supposed to. How much of that chaotic magic will hang over has yet to be seen, although everypony else's abilities have increased dramatically after being exposed to Order and pushed to their limits. Pinky kinda missed out on that aspect, despite her exposure to Order. Perhaps in the future, we'll find out a little more and see what she can really do?
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I had those two set up right from the get go.
Only time and the answer will tell.
I would love to have seen that whole game go down as a live stream... if not be there myself.
Good things come to those who wait... usually.
I think, given a little more time, we can expect to see a lot more from her.
I still love how resourceful Rainbow Dash can be. That, and Starlight's resilience.
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This is the path Pinkie has chosen, unfortunately.
On the bright side, you're at one of my favorite parts of the story. I love the Post War-Party Party portion.
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If Cutter is to be believed, and the narrative showed it, she was not holding back.
Damn....... lost Gruff, Discord, and Trixie........ Honestly Trixie hits me the hardest, always liked her character.......
So the realm of Darkness that consumed other realitys just got destroyed ? Thats one hell of a accomplishment
saw or see - or am I missing the context?
So is the threat of the darkness gone or just delayed I wonder? Trixie killed a Empire of hopeless magic all eating darkness all on her own.
If this isn't worth a legendary entry into every historical book ever, don't know what get it done.
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In this context, it could be either saw, as in "that light you saw that you have questions about" or "that light, you say" which is more of a phrase of "You say that what you saw was one thing, but really something else happened." or something along those lines.
That's a good question.
She finally earned her title.
Harmony wanted to fight them all, she won a impressive Darwin Award:
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Harmony wasn't ready for a situation where she could be overpowered. Not even when that reality was being slapped in her face, she couldn't accept the fact that she couldn't out-plan, out-smart, or simply overpower her problem.
That overconfidence was made even worse when she started tapping into that new power that was overpowering her, and logic gave way to emotion.
fuck damn this was good as hell
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took a lot of work to bring that all back full circle. However... I left you a few more goodies to follow up with. Enjoy the outro bonus chapters.
It began with opening that bridge, and so it ends by closing it.
Now to see the aftermath of it.
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It all comes full circle. Now for the bonus material. Also, don't forget the sequel.