Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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This emoji "ðģ" is all I got the say about this chapter.
Those girls got IN THERE!
Cool chapter & great conclusion to the lustful 79 point section.
Relationships have expanded far past than what I or even they thought possible & now there's bound to be more interesting events now that in Rarity's words "Things are different".
Now back to more story driven events like Trixie's dreams, Celestia bottling up some intense angry, & a lot more & I can't tell you how ready I am for it!
Back to our regularly scheduled programming of Wednesday releases with the occasional Saturday bonus.
Bring on the story!
Chapter 80. Same Song, Different Lyrics.
ð§ All around the world, Same Song! ð§
Sorry, I just like that song & it introduced Tupac for the first time so that's a plus for me lol.
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I think you got more words than that for what happened in this chapter, but you can keep your secrets.
With no complaints, I hope.
There will be more with these two. They've startred a complicated relationship, which will only grow in time... and probably get more complicated.
Things really are different, and while some feel like they've filled all the gaps to make such relationships legit, some still feel rushed. Granted, there's a lot of contributing factors to everything, but as the story goes on, lots of it will get the time and attention it needs.
I'm still going to try and do at least on bonus chapter a month, but these last few chapters took a lot of reviewing and re-editing on my part, which has cut into my writing beyond this.
LOL. It's all good, and the real story is going to pick up, and this next chapter "Same Song, Different Lyrics," is one that has heart and development that will help to show why some parts of the word are the way they are.
It's going to be an interesting morning for our stranded seven and the mares they're with when they wake up. Lots of different perspectives and outlooks. Even a few new discoveries that should be interesting.
Magnificent first time. Totaly worth the waiting.
Guess Celestia and Pinkie Pie are the only ones not getting any action.
Luna will get the biggest powerboost of em all. No matter how loaded a male is a females floodgates are no comparison in amount of fluids.
Perhaps Luna can share some snuggels and mouth service with Celestia?
Pros:
- Emotional bond grows and deepens
- Celestia get a lot more joy and pleasure than Sombra ever give her
- She can fill her longing heart with someone else
- Indirect powerboost since she get human fluid indirectly into her system
- Celestia depression will fate and a fullfilled life will take it place at last.
Should Luna share her experiences with Celestia in word or action... Perhaps she could bring it to Chrysalis. Seriously! If Ponys are falling head over tail on there lovers Chrysalis would fall for Celestia and we have a Pony-Changeling Alliance âĄ
Changelings dont have to starve and are dedicated to protect there pony for more than just protection of foodsource
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I'm sure both Kelly and Luna agree.
Well, not really. Rainbow Dash still isn't without a stallion of her own, neither human nor pony. Sure, she has a wing-boner for Cerb, but Butter Thighs and Diamond Thighs are in the market for sharing their studd with a third mare. Swifty seemed to have a crush on Sniff before the party, though with the events of the party, her chances could go either way. Unlike Thunder Glide, who clearly had an interest in Cerb, but knew better than temp the wrath of Rarity a second time.
Hell, even Cadance has her stallion, but seems to be having the same technical dificulties that Rainbow Dash briefly described. There might ahve been a mare or two at the spa that started a curious interest in Benny as well. Who know's how many other mares out there have the hots for a human or are still waiting for their first chance for a date with Sniff?
Oou. That's a good theory on both accounts. Kelly has a good drip going, but who really knows yet?
That would be a good quick fix, but we don't really know where Celestia stands with the humans. Also, both sisters are very much on bad terms with each other. Plus, I doubt Luna is going to risk Kelly's safety with her sisters unclear intentions.
Man... you really want to see changelings to have chance withing sex a human. But with Chrysalis in the mix, that's more than likely comeing with the risk of exploiting and weaponizing the humans, which is already a fear by the ponies from The Pony of Shadows or other unkown forces.
That might be true if given the chance, but that just isn't the case at the moment.
Now we know why Kelly got nicknamed 'Drip' & Luna of all ponies got to see just why ð
What's more? She DEVOURED that shit. ð
Mac definitely gotta be dreaming about those two.
I hope he can manage to hold out longer for Kelly though.
Oh well. Practice makes perfect right?
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Girl was thirsty, bruh. Then, once Luna got a taste, she realized that she was thirsty, too. Now they both know where to quench their thirst.
Hopefully, he won't be having wet dreams about those two. He's staying with Granny for the night while Kelly and Luna got closer. However, I'm sure there will be plenty of days and nights for practice.
Oh I wish I did but frankly I'm just happy Luna got laid. ð
That & the fact that our stranded 7 are now being as close to the ponies to the point of engaging in sexual activities with them.
I do have an inquiry though outside of this chapter. The sexual activities of which they engage in are rather.....detailed.
Do you....try to picture the characters in the situation when writing & if so have you felt....perverted but in a funny way like "I know this is weird as hell to write but IDGAF ðĪŠ"?
It's kinda like R34 artists knowing that what they draw could be considered fucked beyond belief but they shrug it off with chuckle & do it anyway.
This is no way saying you shouldn't write what you're writing. I & many others are loving this story as is. I'm just wondering if you've done that before.
Visualizing can be fun at times, especially when it makes you creative ya know? ð
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I doubt you're the only one.
Well, 5 of the 7 at least. Benny is still watching movies and having conversations while Becky is accepting of her friends choices, but uninterested for herself.
Yes to both. Part of this story is them crossing that line where those involved have to acknowledge what they are doing, while also giving a reason to why they would allow themselves to continue. Unlike some other stories where the sex is heavily implied or suggested to have happened, or merely described as a passing comment, there isn't much of an impact.
I want there to be some level of emotional connection and mental evolution when a couple shares their physical intimacy. Viewing their partner's body, how touching or being touched makes them feel, how their emotions might change. To me, this was important enough not to merely glance over. Eventually, the sex will be over and they'll be left to their thoughts or be confronted by others what what they've done. And sure, the author could leave much to the imagination, but I wanted to reader to have a better understanding of what these characters would be dealing with.
For some it could be shame, acceptance, despeartion, or a whole cast of other feelings.
As for the perversion aspect of it... Yeah... Don't really give a fuck. I went hard on the paint and don't care. If people find it sexy, cool. Pretty sure my story runied at least three paires of socks accross the world.
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Also, I wanted to explore the character's self-discovery of their sexual nature. It's a confusing and messing experience that can be complicated by outside influance, emotions, or just going off of instinct and a best guess. For some characters, what they end up finding attractive or arousing will surprise them, and it's interesting to see how the mind will addapt.
Pretty much... but I probably put too much thought in my work.
I got some more chapters coming up, and done what before? Written a story, written smut, or had gratuidus amounts of sex? Because no to the first, but yes to the second two. Otherwise, I'm not sure what you're asking.
Wut?
Wut?
That was me saying that being able to picture something in your head can lead to an idea you never thought of before.
For example : I got a music video idea & it plays out in my head each time as I close my eyes & picture it. I open them & boom! "I got it!"
It's kinda like how you are writing dialogue for the characters & seeing if it fits well & if it doesn't, it gets scrapped. It's that but with the situations you put the characters in hence if you couldn't 'see' them doing it, then that gets scrapped too.
I hope that helps your confusion.
Btw the question was whether you had pictured the events in this story as you wrote them. However I think you already confirmed that you did when I asked previously.
Sorry for any confusion as I should've clarified what I meant.
Visualization is just one of my favorite things to do, especially when reading a story.
If I couldn't see a character doing this or saying that in my head, it breaks the event or dialogue being convincing to me.
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Yep. That cleared it up.
To answer the question, though, yes. I visualize everything... and that includes the naughty stuff. That's one of the reasons I include where characters are, the positions their in and all that stuff. If it doesn't look cool in my head
or make my dick hard, I don't write it.Wait...
I kind story board a lot of events in my head or write a timeline how for how things are supposed to coordinate with each other.
No worries. It's all good. Also, what have you visualized so far that got you the most hyped, and/or what got you the most uncomfortable?
Same... outside of how ciertain events have created a change of habit or preferance. Good example would be Twilight cursing. Oh! Or Fluttershy grumbling in a tent "Dying for dick."
Let's start off with uncomfortable.
I think the only time in this story where I was been uncomfortable was Starlight continuing to suck off Chris after he already climaxed. Reading it was already yikes but seeing that shit clear as day in my mind?!
One word : JESUS!ð
As for hyped?
Seeing just how changed the ponies would become due to the heavy influence of the humans. From them coming to understand their ways of life, watching movies, listening to music, getting used o the very naughty humour & putting that shit to good use I might add, & so much more is the best thing regarding this story.
Btw I NEVER actually saw AJ & Lumberman happening. I only saw it as AJ just being a good friend to help out James who was in a bad spot when he & the others arrived.
Never would've guessed it'd lead to a very convincing romance between the two. I smiled like a bitch at Lumberman's confession to Applejack.
It was made much cuter when I pictured it. AJ sitting in James's lap in that worn out chair with a lovestruck smile, happily content with the one she truly wants, foal or no foal.
Then to dampen my mood, I could just see the struggle on James's face when AJ begged to go with him if there was a way back to Earth. (I've made my concerns about that possible but depressing scenario known already)
Overall there's plenty of things I've visualized that's gotten me hyped & whether it's an erotic scene, a depressing scene, an action scene or anything else? This story continues to deliver a thrilling one that keeps me on edge for the next release!
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Yeah... that was made to be just a bit uncomfortable. That shit's great for like.... no more than ten seconds. After that... Might have to slap a bitch.
Some people might start reading the story and think that the greatest threat the humans would present to the ponies would how destructive they could be if angered. In reality, the most dangerous thing they could provide is a bad ideology.
Lumberman was the kind of person to be so completely disinterested in the posibility of finding love in this new world. Hell, is the big brother/father figure of the group, he was originally gonna be the ultimate cock block for the group. In the end... he gave Benny the advice and encouragment needed to accept what he was offered.
That would be truely heart breaking.
I'd say my biggest hype moment is a tie between the Battle in the Everfree with the Timberwolves, the second would be the fight between Ovens and Cutter.
The most uncomfortable is toss-up between AJ getting cut open Sniff contemplating talking about his trauma as he had his flash backs.
... or Benny's flash backs.
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He's got his work cut out for him.
I hope for Kellly's sake, that Luna in your universe hasn't any royal guard that takes this the wrong way/is a bit too protective of Luna
This chapter works better than any Energy Drink.
A funny way to keep oneself awake after a day of work
Most definitely one of the very best pony X human lover interactions of the story âĄ
Perhaps Kelly becomes the Queen of lust, teaching Princess Cadance all the ropes âĪ
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One of my favorites as well. One of the few occasions where all the fears and restrictions are let go of so they can just let go and enjoy each other.
I'm sure so many would love to have happen. There are so many lessons to learn.