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Wow. Like just wow.
Empty, I don't wanna write a long comment again but damn I have a ton to say.
First & foremost, Fuck Celestia! Good on Luna for not backing down.
Now, I thought Cerb & Sniff had it rough but I was fucking wrong man. Benny lost EVERYTHING back on earth. He's very lucky to be part of the stranded 7. To know that he could've ended his own life without the aid of his friends is just depressing. I'm very happy for him to have people & a pink pony to care about him. I hope he's okay now that it's all out there.
Again, the scenes between Chris & Starlight remains GOLD in this story. Way to make it harder for him to sleep with that blowjob offer Star lol.
Applejack may not know it due to the pain killers but what she's saying out loud, especially in front of Lumberman? It's gonna get really interesting. Lumberman has not got to the point of wanting to do more with Applejack so how he will react to more of the farm pony's words will be interesting. At least this confirms that she definitely wants her Woody 😂
So it's not just Fluttershy who picked up on the situation between Twilight & Sniff. Shining & even Luna are definitely seeing something brewing there even if she denies it. Her reaction to the gift & how she behaved before in regards to Sniff is just astounding. Also we gotta talk about good guy Sniff. That gift was beautiful & heartfelt. You can tell just how Twilight means a lot to him.
"Trying with all her might to kill the desire she so desperately wanted" Poor Twilight.
Come morning for Breakfast? There's likely gonna be tension between Oven & Twilight again & that gift from Sniff might come into play. That's gonna be some good entertainment. *grabs popcorn
Also Shining, make your own gift jeez, I wanted to smakck him too Luna 😅
Lastly, I KNEW IIIIIIT! I'm so happy for Fluttershy! Rarity still has to wait but this shit was fucking awesome. Fluttershy is gonna have so many wonder rushes just thinking about that kiss. Rarity? I feel bad for, don't worry tho. You'll get yours soon. Cerb has given in, at least I think he has.
Another amazing chapter in this very intense story. Next week will be a crazy one.
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I think tia needs a good talking too she is pushing everyone away and it seems like she is afraid of letting daybreaker out if the ''holding back'' or keeping in check is what I think it is but again keeping her feelings buried is just going to make matters worse the human or ponies need to confront her about it. honestly I don't hate celestia I think she NEEDS to vent to someone or somepony of course being the guy I am id let her get everything off her chest she might say some horrible cruel but if after apogised or tried to after what she said to luna id let it roll off me. celestia is not a bad pony I think she is just as damaged as the humans are so I think they could relate or find some common ground
This chapter was very powerful. I think this might just be without question a top 10 Fimfiction story of em all!
Oh no.... Twilight please don't give up!
Both Benny and Cerb seem to have let down their defenses and are coming to terms with their respective PTSD issues, thanks to their pony friends positive influence.
The feels were reals in this chapter, the humans and ponies are having to deal with some heavy hearts right now...
But Pinkie's summation of Benny beating the hell out of the Pony of Shadows was pretty funny!
"That would've taken 1 or 2 episodes!"
HAH
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Yeah... dear sister Tia has some issues. But Luna has her priorities straight.
Evreyone has their share of tragedies and different hangups. He's a lot better off where he is now, and tomorrow will be the start of many more bright days for him... hopefuly.
LOL. Oh, Starlight. The thirst is real, but at least Chris kind enough to inform her that he has a built-in straw.
I still got nothing but love for these two. As for where these two stand with each other... probably gonna have to wait till the next day to find out, or at least get some hints.
The fued between her and Oven Fresh was a tip off, but every interaction between those two that day only further added to the case. But both the value and quality of the gifts, along with her reaction ended up giving her away. Although, it was a bit of a tragedy for her to realize only after she encouraged him to leave and go back to a mare he was unsure about staying that she both finds out she could be close to him, and finally accept how she really felt about him.
It will be eventful, I'm sure.
I probably clown around a bit too much with Shining. But yeah, he desearved that swat to the head.
Rarity will get hers too? Dang, I guess I should have made it more clear that when Cerb first turned his head away from Fluttershy, and she saw Rarity's ear snap up and then ease back down... that was her getting the first kiss. Fluttershy was the second of the two he kissed there in bed.
You'll love next weeks.
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Celestia does need to open up, but having her own issues, she's turned down every offer. But... holding back Day Breaker? What ever do you mean?
I never really wanted Celestia to look like a clear cut antagonist. Everyone acts and reacts the way they do for a reason. We'll find out her's eventually.
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Top 10? LOL, I'm still rated 70,113th. So, I guess I got a long way to go. Always glad to see your reactions, bud. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Give up? Guess we'll have to wait until breakfast to see if she's really going to give up or not.
That they are. Cerb is just a lot farther ahead in this.
That's why they got each other.
Gotta love it when she goes full Meta, only to turn around and forget it.
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Now i just have to buckle down and shoulder that oh-so-familiar burden once again.....
the wait for next Wednesday and another bite of this incredible story!
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If I could pump'em out faster, I would. Sorry.
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I did not think Rarity got kissed first. Yeah you probably could of made it more clearer but no biggie lol.
Also, Cerb is now 100% on giving them what they want or as you say what they want that's comfortable for them.
You : "Remember though, be careful what you wish for"
Very ominous
Like Chris, this could get a little heated but unlike Chris who's enjoying this to the fullest, who knows just how these new developments will affect Cerb & Sniff. Hell even Lumberman if he accepts Applejack outside of her drunken confession which btw were so adorable. Love how she calls it "our bed" as if they are already together & her sobbing deeply as she lets everything she felt for Lumberman go was really sweet.
Damn you for making such a great story. I've read many on this site & I'm not even a fan of this show but I respect the talent y'all put into a show like this. You keep it alive even after the finale & for that you get my all time applause. Keep it up Empty. 👍
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Yeah, the whole kissing of his two mares will be brought up later on, which will hopefully make it more clear.
For Cerb, living with all his torment for as long as he has, he's rationalized that he's safe with Fluttershy and Rarity. At the same time, he's even admitted to them that he's enjoyed being physically close to them. He's enjoyment, and mental/emotional stability has only increased with the more he's been in contact with them. In fact, there's a lot of what Cerb is experiencing that was already explained by Sniff in Chapter 51. The Power of Touch: Is That How You Really Feel?
"There's a lot of psychology that goes into the power of the human touch. Or just physical contact in general. What we've come to understand is that every important and impactful relationship we have involves some type of touch."
...
"Well, as we humans grow older, the types of touching between us changes, but we never stop doing it. Handshakes, pats on the back, our weird side hugs and bro-hugs, fist bumps, and other types of contact that we only do with people we know, like, and respect. The more contact between two people, the more we can tell how close they are. And even over time, more touching can lead to longer-lasting, deeper, more intimate relationships. Especially the more intimate or comforting the kind of touch is. The kinds that give us comfort or are meant to take away pain or help us heal can change the way we view our relationships with others. Sometimes it’s not even intentional, but the more positive contact between people share, there’s a chemical reaction in the brain that reinforces the desire to seek out that contact."
Humans by nature require some form of contact to maintain healthy relationships. The type of physical contact can drastically how the relationship develops and evolves. For Cerb, being someone who's been emotionally starved and physically deprived because of his PTSD, he's having a stronger response because of how long he's gone without. Compile that with the trust Fluttershy and Rarity have earned by just being loving and accepting of him, it's not hard to see how easily he fallen for them.
Yep. Intentional as well. The question is how was that meant to be taken? Hell... I might have said it just to mislead you. I do like to keep my readers guessing after all.
It's going to be hard to compare any of the parings against each other since they're dynamics, intentions, attractions, and desires are all so different. I mean, Chris might be living his wet dream, but he lost his virginity to Starlight before he even took her on a date, after making out with others she introduced him to, and he's still suffering with his self-conscious issues.
Cerb just got out of denial of their being any mutual interest between him or his two mares, while Sniff has been fighting his need for pleasing others while seeking his own sexual gratification. That doesn't match at all how Lumberman has been trying to take care of Applejack, and is in many ways confused if he's still doing it out of some compulsion to repay her and her family and what he actually has come to greatly enjoy about sharing her company.
Even for all the mares, looking back, what are their initial attractions stemming from or even their core desires?
Funny thing about me and the show. I enjoyed it, mostly for the characters, but what kept me into it was the fandom.
At the same time, thank you saying as much. I'm just glad people can enjoy my approach to trying to write a story that's as complicated as real life... only with ponies and supernatural dark forces looming over the destruction of the world as they know it.
Man, I think the thing that has stayed with me the most about this chapter was Twilight finding out she could finally get close to Sniff & accept how she truly feels about him. It's just such a bummer that she essentially threw him into the hooves of a mare he isn't even sure that he wants a romantic relationship with.
As she read that plaque & note, I could just see the tears that stained her face as she realized what she had done.
Poor Shining & Luna could only watch as the heartbroken nerd left to her room without a word likely to cry even harder, not for the gift but for what she believes a chance she missed & basically allowed.
As she said "I'm so stupid" 😔
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Not only did she push him towards her when she snapped at him, she encouraged him that whatever he was doing with her was fine. Then even hinted at how she hoped and supported there being more between them after he went to go visit Oven Fresh after their debrief. All because she thought she was doing the right thing when she had no chance to be with him. Or that she wouldn't allow herself to accept that she even wanted to be with him. All because she cared that much about him.
You have to wonder how much of their short history she must have been running over again to see where she missed the signs. Asking her about her dating habits, telling her how unsure he was about what he was doing with Oven Fresh, how the other mares that made him uncomfortable. Then how even after she snapped at him even asking about her dating habits, he presented all those grand gifts that she didn't even look at with him, told him she wanted help find a stallion of her own (not him), and how quickly he politely accept her suggestion to seek out Oven Fresh. How could she not blame herself?
Beyond the heartbreak, you might expect some bitterness to set in. But you are right, there will be many more tears shed as she goes to cry herself to sleep in the bed that is still rich in the scent of clovers.
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Clovers, that has been mentioned quite a lot in regards to Sniff. I find it very tragic how that could potentially be the only way of Twilight getting to "feel closer" to Sniff if she doesn't reveal how she feels.
Might I say that while the pairings of :
Cerb, Fluttershy & Rarity
Lumberman & Applejack
Chris & Starlight
Are some of my favorites in the story. Sniff, Oven & Twilight have slowly entered the top spot. The dilemma within that egghead's heart is intense. Oven knows exactly how to get Sniff in his feelings.
Speaking of Sniff? If & that's if she can't take the heartache anymore & confesses, how he will react is gonna be quite interesting. Again I agree with Cerb that I wouldn't want to be between those two like Sniff is.
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Every human oddly has their own unique scent. Not all of them have been revealed. Notably, Cerb smells like spices and citrus with sea salt. Chris somehow smells like champagne... with sea salt. Sniff has clovers and sea salt. Becky smells like Sunflowers and honey... Only the males have that sea salt scent attached to them.
I've had a lot of fun with all of them, but that's always going to be the way things go when there's a build up. Kelly started off great, but with the distance put between them and her already commiting, their now in the getting comfortable phase.
LOL. Yeah... women fighting over their man is dangerous. Can't wait until breakfast.
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Thanks for the response.
Should be quite the chapter next week.
I've been meaning to ask this though. What would you say has been the most difficult in the making of this story? I mean aside from making the Pony characters stay in character to an extent & making sure that what you write for them to say sounds natural.
I feel the humans have got to be a tiring process. Trying to tie them with the already established characters that are the ponies (since you have Chris & Becky talk about moments that have happened in the show) have to be even more tiring right?
I can see why a week is needed for each release ( the surprise release on a Friday or Saturday is cool tho) if there's so much thinking going on.
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I'd say the most challenging is keeping the continuity. Everything that the pony characters reference and react to, or at least story l elements I can build off of, can only exist before the No Second Prances episode. It last in terms for how the world is presented and the the few human characters to be able to know about.
That, and everything the humans have, can reference, or music they play, can only exist prior to April (16th?) 2016. There's so much good music i wanted to use or have played in the story, but can't because it stogie have been created after they got there.
Overall, though, keeping the continuity of the characters and the events of my own story. Every piece of dialog, reaction, thought process, level of influence, or progression of something has to match what I've already written. Things like keeping Cerb's progressively growing attraction to Fluttershy and Rarity doesn't have him looking at them a certain way without looking to a reason as to why he would feel that way. Which ponies can swear correctly has been a common problem, because t's hard to keep track of which ones where explained how to use certain curse words.
Just the same trying to remember what each character remembers or has to be explained when they encounter it. Although, funny story, Benny remembered the events of Twilight losing her ability to use the elements wrong in the story because I remembered it wrong, wrote it, went back to watch it again, and realized that I screwed up, and decided to work it into the story that he got it wrong on accident.
But otherwise, not skipping over something and leaving issues unresolved in a timely manner is something I've been trying to avoid... that and working and grammar. I need my editor so badly. Holy shit.
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Wow that's a lot. Nice usage of a irl mistake & being able to work it into the story. It makes total sense that Benny would fuck it up as he's not that big on the show like Chris & Becky. Will there be more moments of this or was it just a one time thing?
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There will be other instances. Things they won't get right the first time around. Other examples could be Chris not knowing if their world had movies, but Becky remembered the CMC's at the movie theater, or again with Chris pointing out that he's confused why Cream Heart is there. Technically, she's not canon and shouldn't be there.
As to what to expect with other, more subtle, details like these getting worked in. Eventually, just none that I can think of off the top of my head.
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Thank you for explaining the more difficult side in the creation of this story.
You mentioned that every thing the humans reference can only be from about April 16, 2016. Have you ever had a year set for when this whole story is going down? For as long as I've been reading this, I feel like I haven't heard what year this whole situation is going down in & If I missed it, that's my bad for getting too invested in the story & not paying attention lol.
Forgive me for not knowing about No Second Prances as again I'm not big on the show but I love that your taking episodes from here & there to work it into the story.
Is it possible that you could work more modern years into the story say 2018 or 19 or is the year specifically 2016?
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On their 9th day, in Chapter 51. 'Is That How You Really Feel?' Chris and Starlight have a conversation:
Chris tried again, "What's the last day you do remember?"
Only one thing came to mind.
"Uhh... The Great... Crystalling day?"
Chris stopped petting her and Starlight groaned into a couch cushion she pulled over her head to vent, "I don't think I even own a calendar." She popped her head back up "Do you know what day it is?"
"It is," Chris started to answer as he looked at his watch. "Saturday, May seventh."
Starlight grunted indignantly, "Oh, yeah? What year?"
Chris turned his watch for Starlight to verify.
"2016."
So, I was wrong about the day I told you originally. I was going off of memory, but the day they arrived was the 30th of April, 2016. The day after 'No Second Prances' was aired in the US.
Fun fact, the UFC fight they were planning on watching was UFC Fight Night: Teixera vs Evans.
No Second Prances had a focus on Starlight being tasked with making a new friend, a short rundown of the episode can be found here. A better review of that you can listen to, can be found here, with Dr. Wolf.
The most I'd be willing to do would be possibly trying to make some of the canon songs. It wouldn't make sense to bring more modern songs or movies from Earth into the story at any point after they arrived. Believe me, it would make things easier, because there's a lot of movies and music I would have loved to have worked in, but can't without breaking continuity.
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That does make sense. Gotta keep the continuity.
So, along the way it seems to that me that Celestia is not all that great. Almost villain like in a way. At this point I'd consider her one. That was cold with what she said towards her little sister even if she didn't mean it.
Would you consider her a villain or someone with the best intentions but going about them the wrong way?
Also I'm concerned for Twilight regarding this. She's already in a big dilemma about her true feelings for Sniff, someone Celestia wanted her to keep at a distance & now she has essentially "disobeyed" that rule with her voting against her own mentor. That egghead has problem after problem.
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Some characters are not meant to be viewed clearly one way or another. She hasn't actually done anything truly "villainous" when you stop and look at it. She's been both a vehement protagonist, coming to the aid of Kelly and all her support for the humans. She gave them rights, protection, land, status, cash, and left them with her most trusted protege.
As a protagonist, she told Twilight and her friends not to get too attached... Okay, she's also keeping secrets from the others and has had virtually nothing to help sinse. However, she hasn't actually done anything any of them know about to actually hurt the humans or punish anypony, other that Spearhead and his two subordinates.
As for the cold statement towards Luna, you need to ask yourself:
"Did she say that to imply she was so disgusted with her sister that she couldn't stand seeing the home they shared any longer because it only reminded her of what she lost?"
Or.
"Did she say that to imply she was so heartbroken with losing her sister that she couldn't stand seeing the home they shared any longer because it only reminded her of what she lost?"
More will be made clear as time goes on, both with others interpretations and more insight into what she's been up to.
Not this next chapter, but the one after that, you might start to see that even Twilight has some opinions on this.
You know? I don't see why Sniff is so concerned on his relationship with Oven. She's a pretty cool chick & isn't afraid to play his game.
Also Twilight was talking about not "seeing the signs" when she was going over his gift. What did she mean? If it's what Shining & Luna thought it could be, I'm afraid I'm lost there because in Twilight & Sniff's short history, I haven't really got the vibe that Sniff was crushing on Twilight but that's not to say I oppose these two becoming a thing, especially now. What signs could have hinted at Sniff wanting Twilight?
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Chapter 51. Protection, Lust, and Trust:
Realizing how much he was lusting after certain mares and trying to seduce them after just trying to be kind to them.
Panting under the downfall of water in the shower growing too hot for comfort, he slid down the wall and sat in disgust with himself.
They didn't want it.
They didn't need it.
They didn't even know what it was.
Yet he wanted it.
He needed it.
The truth was that he didn't know how long he could stop himself before the temptation would be enough to convince him to show them. He wasn't even strong enough to stop from throwing himself headfirst into the compromising positions that he knew would eventually lead to it happening. He even wanted to help Chris just so he wouldn't be alone in this, even if just for the excuse that he wasn't the only one, or at least the first one. Or that it was too late to go back.
Chapter 63. Make Sure You Hold Her Tight:
A flashback with his psychology professor trying to help him, telling him what's wrong with him.
“You’re addicted to the gratification of pleasing them just as much as you are receiving it. You’ve spent so much time convincing yourself that these one night stands and on again off again relationships are still going to make your mistress happy, which makes you happy. It’s a learned behavior you picked up. And doing all of these generous acts and charity are just to mask over what you really want from them.”
After his private flashback, he beats around the bush with Twilight about what he's really concerned about.
“I need to make others happy. I have to help them, make them feel better. If I don't, I self-destruct. I've been this way for so long I can't tell if I'm being selfish or selfless half the time."
If not for the seriousness of the moment, she would have sworn he was pulling her leg again.
"Peter… I don't understand why you think being nice to others and making them happy is a bad thing."
Sniff shook his head, it was clear she still didn’t understand what he was saying.
"I hate the idea of being disingenuous. Good deeds aren't good if they're done for selfish reasons. And I think you’re the first one that I’ve gone out of my way for without these old feelings of thinking I might be doing something for something I wanted in return. I haven’t with Oven Fresh either, but with her, I’m… scared it’s going to happen and-"
Twilight laid a hoof on Sniff's shoulder and raised his chin to look him in the eye.
"Be honest with me. Have any of the kind words or acts you've made here while you've been with us been done with the expectation of getting something in return or done to guilt somepony into doing something they didn’t want to do?"
Sniff rolled his eyes. Of course, the answer was no, but he couldn’t tell her that it was because he didn’t want to fuck any of them until just recently.
"No… but I'm afraid they will … I dunno. They feel so obligated to try and appease me that… l... and I don't want to take advantage of anyone. And I don't want anyone falling so deeply in love that when I can't return the feelings that it breaks them. Especially if we get close."
He's doubting himself in his ability to follow his lust and eventually hurt someone, but he's addicted to it and has started to tell if he's trying to give others what the want to please them, or using them to please himself.
At the dance, he chose to dance with her.
Chapter 38. After-Party: A Game of Kings:
While in the pool:
Sniff was quick to put down her self-deprecating questions. "No! No! Hey. Look. All jokes aside, Twilight, I actually like you. Okay? So I don't want to be the guy who screws you over on this bet. And honestly... I don't know you like that."
Chapter 43. To Prove One's Worth.
While walking back from the hospital:
Twilight chuckled. "Of course, I know it's a real word. But if I didn't know any better, I'd swear you were trying to sound smarter than me."
"Au contraire, mare friend," Sniff replied with a terrible French accent but then switched to that of a British intellectual. "I am but merely attempting to convey, with the utmost levels of my most scrupulous use of scholarly vocabulary, to match your luminous intellect without any indignation or prejudice towards your studious nature."
Chapter 40. A Different Kind of Love. A different Kind of Missery.
While comforting her after Luna came down on her:
What had happened? It wasn't long ago that this human was snarky and impatient. So easily dismissive and rude, overbearing, egotistical, insulting even. Now?... He was happy, helpful, caring, generous, thoughtful, brave enough to stand up to an enraged Luna, and even putting himself in a vulnerable, if not compromising, position... trying to comfort her.
Later...
Sniff took a deep breath and forced a smile. "I hated it hear. It wasn't just a hard time for me adjusting... I wanted as close to nothing as I could get to do with anything here. I thought it was all the most unfunniest joke I ever heard and wanted out... But now? Because of you tolerating me and helping me see how great this place is, I gotta tell ya. With the friends you've introduced me to and everything else you've done has turned me around."
Chapter 48. Can I Get a Hell Yeah!
Virtually everything that they talked about before she snapped at him. Then all the praise and defense he gave her while talking to Oven Fresh that Twilight overheard.
Up to now:
Him trying to talk to her about how he wasn't sure about being with Oven Fresh, the flowers, and the extravagant gifts he got for her.
Looking back at everything they have been through with Twilight's perspective, all the talks they shared, his interest in getting to know how their world worked, trying to get closer to her, the discussions about relationships... From her point of view, Sniff was trying to win her over and looking for an opening to see if she was interested in him. But, in the end, she asked him for help finding a stallion for her and encouraged him to go back to Ovens and hoped he could have more with the baker. "And if you stay there for the night, that just means she’s that good of a friend, or more if it ends up that way.”
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Damn Empty, after reading your explanation? Twilight royally fucked up & might've lucked out. I just know her heart is breaking right now. I know Sniff politely accepted her suggestion to be with Ovens but after everything you just said, I can't help but think Twilight has not left Sniff's mind. He did all that just for her. What could he possibly see in Ovens other than lust? Twilight will always be at the forefront of his mind. Hell he might even ignore Ovens all together because of Twilight but that'd be a dick move of him. They both need a serious talk with one another & if there's gonna be some drama with Ovens come breakfast morning? I'm afraid for their relationship. :(
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Oven Fresh has been kind, considerate, helpful, fun, understanding... and essentially is the reason he has any interest in mares to begin with. They share a history of having bad relationships with their parents. And while Sniff has already admitted that he's not in it for the long run with anyone, that he's not capable of it... that kind of puts both of them on equal footing. At least in terms of who he would potentially consider being with.
But then again, for how long and for what purpose?
Have a serious talk? It sounds like the sensible thing we shouldn't expect from this world. Well, the next release is only a little under 51 hours away.
This has bothered me for some reason but....
Starlight is the only one to admit that ponies do have sex, confirming their knowledge of the act, it was just that her (before Chris arrived), the main 6, & probably even the princesses never engaged in the act.
So now that we know that they know what sex is & what it's for on account of Starlight. Why are the humans (aside from Chris) so uncomfortable about just asking the ponies if they know. Even Sniff can't bring himself to just simply ask Twilight if she truly knows about the act. You think she would with her being horny for knowledge.
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No pony has ever claimed that sex doesn't exist or that it's not done by ponies. Everypony that's been asked simply couldn't explain what it was. Starlight even admitted that she didn't know what it was until Chris explained it.
Chapter 60. The Fear of What Follows After:
Starlight grabbed Chris by both sides of his face and forced them eye to eye.
“Will you please stop acting like you did something terrible to me? You have no idea how relieved I am to know what sex actually is and that we can do it all we want? More than relieved. I feel powerful. Like I could take on Twilight and Rainbow Dash at the same time.”
As of right now, Starlight is under the impression that she's probably not allowed to be doing what she's doing. It's a safe bet that having sex with Chris is probably going to be classified as getting too attached. In chapter 64, it was voted to remove the restriction, however... Twilight went to cry herself to sleep. None of the other ponies know and she wouldn't think or even have a reason to ask... well... not yet at least.
LOL! Oh, just you wait and see. She'll have a reason.
Before the next chapter hits, I'd love for you to explain this.
"He blamed himself if she was fucking around with Big Mac" Why would Sniff blame himself for Kelly doing anything with Big Mac?
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I wondered if anyone would catch that. You'll get a better idea as to why he blames himself in about 2 hours.. Kind of has something to do with what was shown when Sniff worked seamlessly with Kelly to sneak Twilight away from Luna.
Fuck me that end left a heavy feeling in my chest, I really do wonder how the breakfast between Twilight and Sniff will go. Well... Only one way to find out I suppose, but I’m not so sure if I will like what will happen or not.
Careful Sunbutt, your Daybreaker is showing........
31.10.2022 , I still get misty eyes from the beautiful chapters end.
Thank you EmptyPlotFiller
O hope rarity and Fluttershy can handle cerb he better be big enough for both of them
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Cerb is a not one to disappoint. But... getting there will be a whole other issue.
Can't expect anything to come along so easily for him, let alone his two sweethearts. What kind of up-hill battle would that even be?
Magnificent chapter, this picture is a masterpiece that is as impressive as the first time I see it.
Beautiful ♡👍
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There are still some things I would have like to have done better on that. Probably should have done it in some 3D program like AudoCad or something, but too late for that, now.
Otherwise, what did you think of the new introduction for The Pony of Shadows? You didn't have that to see you're last readthrough.
Benny's theory about the Stranded Seven being affected by the Mane 6 in a good way isn't too far fetched. It's not like the literal magic consisting of growing crops, walking on clouds, and blasting it out of horns, but perhaps a figurative kind of magic that can only be felt by the mind and heart if you decide to let it in. Reminds me of this riddle that's brought up a few times in the Yu-Gi-Oh! manga(RIP it's creator): "Something you can show, but can't see"
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There's been so very little for the Stranded Seven to go off and work with, it makes sense for Benny to put this theory together, given his own experiences. Granted, his friends pointed out some potential errors, but it's a good starting point for them to build from since so much of it does make sense.
It's not a dead topic, regardless.
I grew up kinda poor, so I never involved with that show or its content. I think the one time I saw part of the show, it had the main character speak in the super deep adult voice and not have context, I was already checked out.
As for the riddle, I imagine the answer is something abstract like "emotions" or "truth." Either way, it's a good one.