Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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the hand joke with lyra.......anthropology intensifies
Prince
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Girl's got her interest, now.
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• Interesting developments involving Ember. Seems like a dope character & based on the info you gave me last chapter, she sounds like she was a pretty cool addition to the show so thanks for that.
• It also turns out that the ponies aren't the only ones who don't know or forgot what sex is. That seems to be a very shocking revelation to them.
• So Celestia has found out about the "practices" that have been happening between the humans & ponies, most notably her own star studded student & she doesn't seem like she's in the mood for any of that shit. She sounds very annoyed in Lyra when finding out how she basically fell for Sniff's magic fingers. I'm not gonna lie here, after her moment involving Sunset, good King Sombra, &.....herself plus seeing how pissed off she was? I'm scared of her intense anger lashing out on anyone, most of all Sniff!
• I get the sense that Sniff is very close to his breaking point with this line but wants to control himself. The fact that it ends with him going to her private bedchambers really gives off the vibes that BIG things will occur. Very sad that he has to reassure to himself & Twilight that he isn't a monster when so far he hasn't given that vibe off whatsoever.
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• Twilight will take any & every opportunity to brag about Sniff & his magic d*** & that will always be a riot!
• Well damn, I wasn't expecting Butter thighs
(that's a new one) to still be going at it with Cerb. Guess the slow process is the best option even though she can't be rutted like he was trying to impregnate her....at least....not yet. Cerb wanting to fuck Rarity again is the cherry on top for that scene.
*Also really nice to see him thinking about possibly settling down with Fluttershy & Rarity in case of being stranded forever*
• Dirty boxing....damn Chris! Below the belt will always be a stinger but at least he had Onyx's back when Onyx was beating himself up about the loss. Good guy Chris, that he is.
• Round of applause to Chris for getting Starlight off his dick.....literally. Also fucking hilarious with how she just said "BYE!" upon mention of Prim being free.
• Hard Hat taking all the necessary steps to better himself & Applejack & Lumberman squashing their beef with him was very nice & sincere. This honestly shows even more of how good those two are as a couple as they keep each other in line with anything & everything. Past James would've held the biggest grudge but present James is really something else, now elevated with AJ's involvement.
• Swifty & Sniff's dynamic is so adorable that it doesn't matter to me whether they get together or not, I just really enjoy their cute bond with the little flirts in between.
• Octavia, Benny, & Vinyl once again being the most intriguing pairing this story has to offer so far. Benny is a damn sweetheart with how he's treating Octavia's dilemma. I hope she's glad to have him along with the oblivious Vinyl.
• You're telling me that this doctor was avoiding Becky & many female patients because he got hard & had morning wood, something that every male goes through in life?
That is some funny shit, especially when Rainbow used it perfectly to her advantage. Becky thought the walk out game was over? Nah get to stepping girl! Ya got played!
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This was a really good chapter that gave me chuckles, made me think, & more. But to put it simple? This chapter just all around was...well....fun! XD
Couldn't really find anything that I didn't like so a great 12/10 for this chapter! :)
Chapter 83. Dignitaries in. Discord Out
Not saying anything because this shit is unpredictable & that's the best kind. See you next Wednesday.
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She brings a level of intensity that so far only Rainbow Dash has brought up. Plus, her struggles to deal with different aspects of pony culuture is fun to watch.
The conspiricy is broadening.
So far all Celestia knows is that Oven Fresh is sort of dating Sniff, and that she invited Lyra out for a date with Sniff. All the sexy stuff and who else Sniff is involved with has yet to be discovered by either Lyra or Celestia. Well, that and how good Sniff's hands can feel in general. Sexy stuff, not so much.
As for her anger... that has yet to be seen.
Sniff was weak after only a few days of not getting laid. After getting frisky with Ovens, then Twilight, then Mayor... and only finishing with his hand? 'Ole boy is hurting for the chance for some internal squirting.
But what he's willing to do is going to stay in conflict with the fear that he will become the moster that abused him if he allows himself to act the way he was trained to.
Not just his d***, but in private conversations, that seems to be the case..
it was a struggle, but Fluttershy powered through and lord knows how much enjoyment she was able to get out of that. Not that she seemed to mind. Then for Cerb to say he was ready to go again? May God have mercy on those two mare's bodies.
And yeah, looking at the long term options, we gotta love our Devil Dog.
A boxer not ready for dirty boxing will likely get hurt. Throwing the other boxer off balance, head butts, throwing elbows, drawing them in or creating distance that opens up their deffenses can be brutal.
Small victories, and she didn't even say bye. She just up and dipped out.
Hard Hat was a victim of his own securities and ego. It wasn't until he had Lumberman and Applejack put him in his place that he realized just how wrong he was. But, deep down, he really wants to be the good guy, somepony helpful and respected.
Let's just hope that can still happen.
I have lots of fun with Swifty. We're gonna see more of her.
There is going to be a lot more with those two and Benny. They're a really fun couple to write about.
Yep. Doc didn't know what to do with himself. And after reading about what he thought his medical condition was, that shit's scarey. Though, I wonder what research he was doing with Redheart when he started to suffer from his problem. Maybe it was what Redheart was focusing her studies on that led her towards Chris, but Doctor Horse couldn't stand around for it?
Makes ya wonder, if that was the case, what could have happened between those two?
I had fun with it. The next chapter is going to be more story driven, too. Lots more to take away next week.
Now you're learning. Expected the unexpected.
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I tried looking for the picture of it, but in the comic, there's a gag of those two guards turning over duties with that dialog.
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Got to love it ♡
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I love both of those videos, and I have no shame for working in the hands joke.
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Jokes that come in handy are puns there for my favorit kind of jokes
What i wonder is: Can one see a Telekenesis field? If yes would a hand shaped TK field be a magic job or a handjob? Lyra comics often use a TK in hand form after all
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Well, so far, when using telekenesis, their auras have been visible. As for Lyra or any of the others forming telekentic hands? Umm? Uh... That's hard to say if it will happen or not. Tiwlight hasn't been given the chance to explore more of Chris's crystal copy of his phone. He also has an enitre laptop that has yet to be explored.
So, only time and sexual curiosity based on new ideas will tell.
I swear to MY god Celestia, if you even think about taking out your salty ass feelings out on the humans, there's gonna be hell to pay!
Maybe I'm wrong with how I'm interpreting this part but if i'm not, i have every reason to be mad at Celestia for how she's been handling this whole situation so far.
You royally fucked up your highness but that's on YOU & whatever happened to specifically YOU, not them.
Personally I'm just really concerned for Sniff because I imagined Celestia potentially weaseling her way into the relationship he has with Twilight but in an even more harmful way than before where she just prevented attachment between pony & human.
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Well, as we know so far, according to Bon Bon, Celestia's view point is:
It's not likely that tearing them apart would keep the humans placid or calm. Not at least without having a good story to back up a need to keep them apart.
Not related to the chapter but I just seen the updated cover art for the humans of Benny, Becky, Lumberman, Sniff, Chris, Kelly, & Cerb.
I love it so much.
The homie Lumberman actually looks like how I pictured him. I feel kinda honored to see a person of color in something like this & he's done well. Him & AJ being togteher is just the cherry on top plus I already like country accents. They're so cute.
Guess you could say for me that AJ is....
(I really thought this over before typing it)
Best pony? 😅
That feels weird to type out. Curse you bronies lol.
See I had this mage of Benny having brown hair but him having naturally red & or orange, maybe dyed hair is also cool.
How in the hell did Sniff pull any of the smooth shit he's done so far with hair like that?! 😅 Mans got game & once again it's good to see another brotha.
I'm not surprised at Chris's appearance but like Benny, I pictured him with brown hair but I actually do like the idea of him being blond. It's crazy how many girls he's gotten since he's been to Equestria. He looks like someone dealing with some issues. Hope everything works out for him.
Becky looks so precious with her brunette hair. Such a shame that a cutie like her has been given such a heartbreaking illness. At least she's got her favorite loyal pony backing her up. Also she definitely looks like someone who played with ponies as a kid.
Look.....at.....KELLY! 😍 Ayo Mackie & Princess Moonshine, Ima need y'all to treat her right ya hear?
Cerb with blond hair. Ya know what? I dig it.
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Lumberman did pose a bit of a challenge to me while working him into the story. I didn't want him to be a token character (despite Sniff being half black), nor be a stereotype. Making him act and sound real based on where he came from and those who have influenced him was difficult. Mostly because at times he'll put on a stronger front that's usually a persona, but act very differently in other situations that more like his current friends. At the same time, getting him pissed off enough brings back aggressive and confrontational nature he had ingrained in him (much like Cerb slipping back into his Marine ways at times). He's balancing and choosing when, where, and how to act with his inner city mentality or the calmer urban/country influanced behavior he had taken on since moving out of the city.
In truth, Lumberman is based heavily on two particular people I've known. And even though I don't have Lumberman bring much attention to it, how he presents himself and the kind of identity he chooses versus what many would expect of him is a conflict of his own.
Growing up where getting jumped and wittnessing streat crime, and even getting caught up in himself became the identity he grew up with. After changing to a new loaction and schools, it was hard to addapt to, and in some ways, felt like a betrayal of who he was or was expected to be, or at times, rejected who he thought others wanted to lable him as.
He's flawed, but still such a strong and standout character. His character's natural development from childhood to now gives him a lot of versitility and personality. Adding in how important his addoptive family with the other six are, he's probably the most well rounded character (Benny being a close second I think).
AJ is hands down probably one of the best written characters, in my humble opinion. Mostly because of just how grounded she is.
It was mentioned right off the bat that Benny had fairly pale skin and thin red hair. Even later on he pointed out his Irish heritage,
"Depends on what I'm drinking. I mean, don't let my size fool ya. I got a strong liver that burns through alcohol so fast it turns my hair red."
AND
"There's a country called Ireland where we come from. The people there, the Irish, they're known for their whiskey and high tolerance to drinking. And for some reason, red hair. So, I inherited a high tolerance to just about everything except vodka and saki. A real shame too. Warm saki is nice... I just tend to black out a lot."
The hair style didn't transfer over as well in the concept art, but that's more or less with him just leaving it sloppy... ish... Let's just say he cleans up very well.
Chris had the unique combination of getting his father's hair (it's suppossed to be dishwater blond, but I couldn't get the color like I really wanted it) and eyes, but his mother's complection and his mothers height... or less, as it turns out. A real shame about his past and being an unwanted child.
Was the type that was always pretty and cute, but never really filled out. Poor health and less than stellar (often liquid) diet, held her back. However, that underdeveloped beuity never left her, and there's always those moments when you catch her at the right angle and the perfect lighting that makes her look stunning.
And as you said, growing up playing with ponies as a kid, despite being smart and strong willed at times, much like Chris, she often found herself living in a fantasy to escape her reality.
Kelly was another character I had some struggles with putting together. Having a Brazillian mother and Japanesse father left for an interesting composition, but also helped to avoid her ended up just another busty blond (much like I didn't want Becky to be either).
She's not the sports model cover girl. Instead, she's more alluring and tempting with her subtle attributes that never come off as too big to wow you, yet have grown past the stage of being so underdeveloped you might have overlooked them. Even her blending of brown and amber hair is not so common enough that captures the eyes rather quickly.... that and she knows how to dress to drawn even more attention.
Cerb was supposed to be a sandy blond... but that's a little hard for me to convey with my limited experience in coloring art from the lineart up. I'm better at color adjustments and editing.
Otherwise, I'll admit that Cerb is the most generic looking character type of the bunch, My goal with him was to make his stereotype character look generic, but build him out in the story to not fit that mold with his personality and history.
If Ponys and Humans are not compatible, maybe Dragon can do the Hybrid thing?
All Kingdom get potencial freedom with contact to Humans would be a great step. Further can knowledge and science be shared for collective progress!
Do they have electrical heating or ventilation?
Reading this chapter reminded me that the house probably was gas heated and has now no heating.
Further by copy pasting vents and electical heating elements the house can be made more liveable plus they could sell of stuff to other nations for trading.
Twilight could build more electrical thunderbolts boxes in general, the humans sell copy-paste ventilation and heating elements to Yak, Abesinian etc etc.
Vacuum cleaner might be a nice addition as well.
Wonder what else than money the nation have for trading, Griffons could perhaps sell crossbows and arrows at bulk to Equestria and the Humans.
Perhaps the Yak sell discarded fur for winter coats?
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The level of tech ranges from medieval to (I'm assuming) common household appliances available in the late 1800s to the 1940s, minus a few exceptions. Some locations would seems restricted to candles and oil lamps while other locations had electrical lights and appliances. There was no way to tell if it was by choice, economic restrictions, infrastructure, or simply bad writing.
If you mean Benny's house, gas heating. Any house in Ponyville is up for debate, as I haven't mentioned it yet.
Wide-scale production could be a problem. Quality control would likely be an issue as well.
That might be a problem for yaks with dirt floors.
That will be something to cover in later chapters in arc 2.