Seven friends are thrust from their homes on Earth to the world of Equestria. Two unfamiliar worlds will have to learn to adjust to each others rules and how each others interactions can bring change or create new influences on one another.
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worth the wait, nice job! About Swift Hoof, I take you have it worked out but if you need an experienced doctor/nurse, I might have 2 OCs for that could do the job.
JUst a friendly offer
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I have some plans for the three guards involved in Kelly's attack, but I might need some more medical staff handling his care. You can feel free to PM me your character's info.
And I'm glad you enjoyed this last chapter. I've been waiting for an interaction like that of the last portion of the chapter that finally came to a head.
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okay then
How many chapters more do I have to look forward to?
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2 or 3. Dependinghow some of the future event's are written out.
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I shouldalso say, there is more story to tell. 2 or 3 more chapters will only close off this arch of Crossing The Trixie Bridge.
Aaa... Yesss the good classics... I remember when i played AVP2 singelplyer... With age 10-11 i was so fucking terrified i needed three day to work up the courage to contine playing as Marine... Good times...
More classics... Very good times...
They grow up so fast
for - needs fixing.
No Flurrys Innocence
Dawww... So cuuute ♡
Y-e-s! Celestia getting her tail wet after all if were lucky they let em stay after all ♡♡♡♡♡
Looking good is always important for politics...
Im sure he could teacher her a few things...
Yeah... Hairy day...
Boot to the head referance?
Dawww... I guess we settel for less than
Huh... So Harmony and Chaos prevented this Equestria to become a Fimfiction grim story... Neat lore!
Death is a waste, life is whats entertaining after all.
Very clever! Keeping her alive for all her benefits but almost no draw backs ♡
O crap... I expected Luna...
Classic villains with style, class and a code of honor. That why i love them often more than the hero...
In ever story Twilight seem to be fearfull of Celestia... Or rather her... Expecting of result no matter the price!
And we readers love it [♡_♡]
A men of dedication and true understanding of friendship. Discord has my full respect now!
Reeeaaallly hope they stay... Discord is the best he can be... Don't want him gone either
Discords most brilliant masterplan incoming ♡
Never see lore and background for Yaks that well crafted! Congrats that certainly the first i read on Fimfiction!!!
I am pretty mindblown of how deep this was. Especially from a Yak
Snarky reformed Starlight Glimmer is my favorit non villain/ex-villain. ( best Bugwaifu dont count )
HA! TOTALY SEE IT COMING
The referance is brilliant...
In her crown... O fuck me... Can it be stolen?!
So humbel... Hope this Q version of Discord the Draconequs get more mindblowing moments. To bad he cant snuggel humans without getting hurt
You really outdid yourself ! Epic chapter.
For ones Celestia is free to do her will without manipulations. Wonder what she is like. Until now we learn of Tia the puppet but now its about Celestia the mare that is her own. May some character development finaly happen? ... Awesome
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Unlimited i kinda hope
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Interessting
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Like you than continue on a sequel or stuff if wrapped up and new things start in the next chapters?
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if you think so
Holy crap, thats a lot of backlash.
Hopefully, what discord and Celestia are planning doesn't end up as more string pulling...I kinda want Celestia to mend things with the humans.
(mostly to see which one will bang her. )
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I think I was 8 when I saw my first Chest Burster... I wasn't ready.
Very good times. Gotta love the classics.
Trixie or Flurry?
Fixed. Thanks for catching that.
It even had Trixie crying. Actually, that scene was hard for me to take in the first time I saw it.
Shy Tavi is such a cute Tavi.
From the very start, Sniff had amused Celestia. It's only fair that he would be her favorite.
There are so many things he could teach her. Twilight sure has learned a lot.
could be worse.
Nah. Just him saying that Celestia kicked/booted him, Chris, and Benny out.
Out with the old Discord, in with the new.
Equestria and the lands around it wasn't always such a fairytale it seems.
For Discord, everything he did was for his entertainment. And once something dies, there goes all the fun.
One exception might have been Harmony, but she was going to stop all his fun, so that's understandable coming from his old point of view.
Anything to keep the game going.
Nope. Even Discord knew that his best chance to get close enough to Harmony to screw her over was the one pony Harmony put so much focus on. But, since Twilight was exposed to so much Order, Celestia was the only other sure-fire bet to take.
Style, class, and a respectable villain. Discord was always about playing the game.
Fearful of upsetting her or disappointing her. She would compromise herself if it meant appeasing her princess.
I think even he's enjoying it.
It was about this time Discord really started to turn over a new leaf in life, as well as show his dedication towards Fluttershy. It was simply within his character to act this way.
Most of the Stranded Seven want to stay as well, but none of them know the truth of Trixie's involvement to bring them there. Things could change.
Funny how he had to emotionally manipulate Celestia before could convince to help him so she wouldn't be manipulated any more.
I don't think the show did them justice. It was a trait they all shared, but never got explored or even highlighted.
Like many cultures have tried to explain to others, what they pride themselves on for keeping their people safe isn't why they value the most. It's their people as a whole that they value, and in return, those who share those values.
Starlight is so much fun to play around with and haver interact with others because of how unrestricted her speech is.
And you didn't even need the 3D glasses.
Discord was honest about being a snake in the grass. Only this time, he choose to bare his fangs on the right target.
Sure. Why not?
Discord was my biggest hurdle to overcome when I first even thought about starting a story. His powers are so incredible that involving a human cast made logic a problem, since they could use him to use his magic to solve just about any problem. However, adding in some Order to limit his influence and a danger that would keep him busy made it all work. At the same time, making him a more likeable character makes his separation and isolation all that much sadder to see.
What will Tia be like now that she is free to exercise her own will? Well, I'm sure once she gets her mind sorted out, she'd like to know that herself.
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There are tons of options after this arch:
Following along with our Stranded Seven.
Celestia's new life.
Discord's future.
The backstory of Sunset Shimmer and how she made it to the Mirror World of The Good King Sombra.
Trixie Rose's back story.
Luna Ring's back story.
What's to come of Spearhead and his fellow guards.
Let's just say I have some options that I've already started to mentally map out.
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Ha! Yeah. Seems like something that could happen, right? Celestia hooking up with one of the creatures she wanted to send away? Not that she doesn't favor two of them already, but lots could change.
As for the pulling of strings? Egh... I'm not sure either one of those two characters really knows how to manage a relationship without doing that.
Wait wasnt it Twilight with the 3d view from Discord?
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Still hoping to see bugwaifu at some
Be funny after using a failed mind spell she ends up having a personality like Faye valentine from cowboy bebop or urd from ah my goddess or maybe ryoko from tenchi muyo complete with outfit and mannerisms either that or a complete otaku tsundere with a tendency to cosplay in sexy outfits either in bug pony or anthromoric form to entice a few humans she likes but won’t admit it
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As for the pulling of strings? Egh... I'm not sure either one of those two characters really knows how to manage a relationship without doing that.
Fair point...I wonder what Twilight/Luna/Cadence would think about the tree of harmony and this "contract" that was made...
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Twilight had the 3D glasses and shared her story, but Cadance has her own spell that allows her to see and detect magic, which only would have shown a fraction of what Discord can reveal with his glasses alone.
Celestia'sreaction was from seeing so much more than what Cadance was able (prior to this story), while developingthe spell.
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Bug Butt has a future in this story, but where and how she'll come into play, that will have to wait to be seen.
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That might depend on if Tia or Discord even bother bringing it up.
I'm now flip flopping between rightfully hating Celestia because of her selfish desires plus hidden disrespect towards my species & yet I'm also understanding Celestia because I do 100% agree that she could use a break after so many decades have passed while ruling.
Cerb still did nothing wrong with getting in her face like that even though he gave a good explanation of why she would be rightfully furious. I'm just glad someone ain't give a damn & told her what's what for once.
I was right all along when I said Celestia needed to live a little like Luna was doing. She in fact was bitter & jealous of everything happening & while yes it sucks that she's had no such time for fun & games because she's a leader, it doesn't excuse her behavior towards others.
Discord....motherfucking....Discord. What else can I say about him but "You clever bastard". I'm sure we'll see Harmony once more, perhaps sooner than we think. Her final message towards Celestia was....ominous...to say the least.
I know I keep ragging on her but Celestia making this deal made me flip between understanding to downright hating her guts. In my opinion, she made this decision for herself & HERSELF ONLY no matter how she tries to rationalize the situation. She'd be fucking with the happiness of others so can she gain her own & I just can't vibe with that.
.......Just realize she'd really fuck over AJ who is IN LOVE with Lumberman & I know I said this already but she was willing to LEAVE EQUESTRIA to be with him. You're telling me Celestia is willing to break that kind of love up?! Man for now it's fuck her til shit gets sorted out!
Sniff has a way to ease a lot of tension but I worry if he runs his mouth too much, he's gonna run into some shit he can't talk down. He's lucky it worked in this case.
Discord wanting Cerb as the only human to stay for Fluttershy's sake is interesting. I actually look forward to Celestia possibly being a complete dumbass for once & slipping up like Flash....possibly.
Round of applause for Becky saving that fucker's life
Cerb was right regarding the guard's panic attack. Betcha feel stupid now huh Sunhorse?
Ahh...Cadance, Candy fucking Mi Amore Candenza Cadance, you gotta watch your mouth around your favorite human, you almost slipped up. I know damn well that she was reveling in Cerb's arms. At this rate I bet she's gonna jump his bones with or without Flutters or Rarity's approval & well before Shining so much as kisses Becky. Funny thought tho.
This was quite a chapter. On a scale of 1 to 20, this is a 20 because it brought out anger I used to have when reading stories with flawed characters like Celestia. There's so much happening & I can't wait to see how it goes.
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I never wanted to make Celestia a clear cut villain in this story. She has some bad opinions and points of view, but they come from a place of vulnerability, and yes, selfish desires. As for how much influence Harmony has played on her, that's really difficult to pin down. She doesn't like how some of the humans choose to operate but doesn't actually hate them. At the same time, it's not likely that her wanting the humans not getting to close to her ponies didn't really seem to come from Harmony, but likely her own intuition, if not jealousy.
Just like before, we'll have to wait to see how things progress with her to determine where she truly stands with their future.
This one was a mixed bag. Cerb and Benny were right that while what they did was the right course of action, they did jump the chain of command. And speaking from my own military experience, that never goes over well. It disrupts the command structure and compromises good order and discipline. In the real world, even if it did lead to a positive outcome, it would lead to counseling and possibly even disciplinary action.
She tired of the life she's lived. That's understandable, but still not excusable. In many ways, how she chose to go about exercising her authority was a sign of poor leadership.
Harmony knows more than likely any other creature or entity in their world. It's safe to say she has contingoucy plans.
There's more than one way to view this story and its characters, so I can't say your take on the situation is wrong. She wouldn't be the first or only one to take selfish actions. Even Rarity exploited Sniff just to get some better insight on how to woo Cerb. All of the ponies are still holding onto the fact that they know Trixie cast the spell that landed the humans there. Hell, even Luna led Kelly on about seeing into their dreams to know there was already some level of attraction between them.
Many characters have taken advantage of one character or another for their own reasons. Some more selfish than others.
Let's hope it doesn't come to that.
There's a strong chance that he might try to bit off more than he can chew. That, or find some are not as willing to listen and that could land him in hot water.
Discord never said that Cerb must be the only human to stay and that the rest HAD to leave. He just said that no matter what, Cerb has to stay for Fluttershy.
Gotta be careful about how you phrase those contracts and what you agree to.
Swift Hoof was unfortunately at the wrong place at the wrong time and ended up paying the price for it. So, while misguided, he's also partially a victim in this mess.
That's what training is for, and for someone like him, he's been trained to avoid these kinds of situations. As for Celestia, this now falls on her head.
She came rather close to saying way too much, but I still feel terrible about the position she's been put in. If only Twilight would have actually sat down with her to explain the birds and the bees.
Let's see how these two get along in the days to come.
Always glad to hear about my readers enjoying my work. There will continue to be new shocking revelations in the chapters to come.
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Check his blog. Should take you to a website. Derpibooru to be exact. You can find some art for the chapters from artist like Peachez & more.
For example : https://www.derpibooru.org/images/2514793?q=artist%3Apeachez
You should check the tag (Crossing the Trixie bridge)
You do get to see Lumberman but you need the filter off. It's not explicit but it still suggestive due to implied human on pony shit.
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Any picture related to my story can easily be found here:
https://www.derpibooru.org/profiles/EmptyPlotFiller
or by searching the tag, Fanfic:Crossing the Trixie Bridge:
https://www.derpibooru.org/tags/fanfic-colon-crossing+the+trixie+bridge
10842407 88.5. Growing a Herd, Deep Under Cover.
There is a threat that Celestia still sees from the humans towards her ponies. It will be more clear later on though.
10842420 88.6. A Night of Three Together. A Night of Two Apart. ·
Egh. Both genders tend to have their emotional weak points that will have them act out. For Luna, much of her emotions were of her personal pride and wanting to take responsibility, on top of protecting the subjects that she had, in some fashion, let down. In some ways, I'd argue this was more of a masculine reaction than an effemonate one.
10842560 Gossip and Gucci Perfume. ·
You got a good perspective on Celestia as well as Bon Bon. As for the humans and their pony guardians, you know they would throw down if any pony tried to mess with any of the Stranded Seven.
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Amazing how well they catch on.
Still love that movie, by the way.
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Fixed, and thanks for catching that for me.
I'm gonna be real with you, I understand that Celestia just wants a life of freedom after ruling for so long & yes, I know temporarily having to send her sister to the moon for a thousand years, losing out on a romance with the good king sombra from another reality, having a very personal squabble with Sunset, & probably so much more has for sure damaged her physce but I can't help but still have some lingering anger at her behavior towards our fellow humans.
I gotta say it man, imagining the possible scenario of a forced separation between Lumberman & Applejack is just heartbreaking. Not only would AJ have no way to stop it, she'd probably never see it coming, no goodbye kiss or nothing & all because of the selfishness of two individuals. I say this because these two have the most...to put it best "human" relationship in the whole story. Their thing is pretty much organic & I don't think I need to mention their little cute innuendo moments with each other. Unlike the others who I'm sure would do fine without their humans because they've found others with their help, I'm scared for AJ to be honest because she found a genuine one out of all of her friends. Not to mention what affect this could have on the other Apples like Bloom who might as well be a "daughter" to Lumberman. It may seem like I'm rambling but I just really like those two together.
Plus it's sooooo RARE to see a black person represented in something like this of all things, so that's a plus. Never thought I'd be excited to see a black man in his late 20s get in a romantic relationship with a sentient orange, stetson wearing pony from a show I didn't care about until it's conclusion but hey here I am in 2021 reading just that & enjoying it surprisingly. If MLP was on some R rated shit like what I'm reading in this story, trust & belive I'd be watching. Shit is like a movie at this point.
Btw you're top 2 stories on this website for me. Yours & TheSillyAnon's 'It's Complicated'. Really great & intriguing HIE stories.
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it's good that you can sympathize with her, and you have no reason to excuse yourself for how you feel about her actions and views against the humans. She messed up with how she handled things, even with her prior issues taken into consideration.
I made it a point to take extra care with those two in how they could come to be together. Also, I didn't want any of the characters to come right out (aside from Chris) to want to have a relationship with the ponies. Even when others did, going poly wasn't on their radar. Even Kelly and Sniff broke down after wanting to go down the straight and narrow path of going the straight and narrow or trying to tame their behavior.
With Lumberman, his past has led him to want something more simple and traditional. Add in Applejack, things could have been different, but she just wants it to be her and her man.
Race wasn't a big concern when developing my story, but realism was. The reason I have a more diverse cast was largely based trying to create a realistic group of friends that I could associate with. What I ended up with was a mix of childhood friends and people I served with. No specifics to give out on either of those fronts. However, much of their histories are a mix of my own and their, with concerns to abuse, neglect, loss, failed relationships, and various degrees of family issues.
Regardless, Lumberman was the character I felt best suited for being the most level-headed of the group. Given his past, and his friend's influence, he's become the kind of person who has pursued and enjoyed everything he wanted, but found something better. it's really made him an enjoyable character while not being a cliche or a stereotype.
I've seen that story but never got around to reading it. I still got a few I fell behind on I need to finish/catch up with.
Swift hoof said something about mind control... I don’t like that. Not one bit. Those two words can be taken in so many different ways that it really makes them quite ominous
10846531 96.1. A Night to Spoil or Be Spoiled.
All in due time.
10846621 98. The Old Rivals Pact. ·
It would appear that Swift Hoof thought that Kelly had Big Mac under mind control. To believe that Big Mac was a victim in all of this, that's where his logic led him to.
I guess we're having a delay for next week?
Also I seen that you might start drawing art for chapters yourself?
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Unfortunately, yes, next week. Between the broken foot, not feeling all that well, and helping a friend, this next chapter has fallen behind.
Also, yes. I would like to start doing art for myself again.
1,438,668 words and growing... One of my favorit finished storys is only 715,544 words long...Your sure have earned every readers respect!
Funny enough the story i referance to is 'Off The Mark' going after the Canterlot invasion to beyond season 9. Its amazing how you just started there adventure but killing them dead with beautyful worldbuilding, character development and storyline Mad respect my dude 👍
chapter 98. wait harmony agreed to give her power back once all the humans were gone. if cerb stays that condition is never met.oh Discord you sneakier sneaky bastard.
Did Discord & Celestia ever planed to let others know of the Harmony construct existence and betraying them from start to end?
Starlight Glimmer still needs to copy-paste all non alcoholic drinks. Cola, Sunny-D etc etc etc.
Also their party snacks, once the original runs out, they are gone for good.
Harmony is surprised that her 'insistent suggestions' taking away freedom to think for themselves is taken as betrayal? Harmony sure had deserved this kind of treatment.
How is Celestia ever to retire with so mutch borrowed power? The again... Alicorns are usually immortal and making Twilight truly ready might take decades if not centuries... Cadance and Flurry Heart as well.
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I thought about it, but soda and juices are common in Equestria. They should be fine.
Maybe, but alcohol is a priority.
You'd be surprised how often power makes people blind to the reality of their situation or their own actions.
After 1,000 years, I don't think Celestia really cares anymore.