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O my Luna. This update made my night. Time to play it until the phone battery dies
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This is not a long chapter, but arguably my most intense.
Best day/night ever for many of them
Every day a event. This event day/night is so far the most juicy. Hope Celestia get add to one of the humans... She need love and passion perhaps more than anypony else.
Well...that uh...that was quite a chapter now was it? 😳
Chris gave it to Starlight really good & surprisingly the sex managed to last long which (correct me if I'm wrong here) was a problem for Kelly with her wanting the sex between her & Mac to last longer?
Maybe, through more sex experience, it becomes longer now so there's that miracle for Kelly to actually enjoy her desires with Mac.
Also sex is now confirmed a super power able to cause magic exhaustion, would ya look at that?
Cheerilee & Red at the end taking from Chris 😏 Have fun but rest up for work.
Not much else to say about this chapter. Chris did in fact go swimming like you said he would lol.
10/10.
Chapter 79. 4 No Turning Back Now:
Let Sleeping Devil Dogs Rut.
Not sure who this one will involve but if I'm gonna be guessing here? Cerb, Fluttershy, & ol Diamond Thighs?
That's my guess at least but I'll be anticipating the release regardless of who it is.
So are just the humans magic resistant or also there stuff ( clothing etc. ). The glass and booze don't seem to be or not strong enough to resist the 'copy-paste' spell.
I wonder... Ponys have fully functional bodys. How do they bear children/foals without detailed medic knownlage ?
I guess they have no afterbirth to deal with?
The mares can be quite wild once awakend to sex...
If they spread it to the Stallions perhaps one could find his way to Celestias lonely heart? That marehood could need a good pounding to get some stress realised. Since Alicorns have greater strength and endurance perhaps Celestia needs to create the first royal harem? Lucky Guardponys
I'm mad as hell this story actually had me look up what a reverse cowgirl position was. 😂
That shit is fucking made for someone like AJ! It's too perfect with the name choice 😅
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Yeah... shit got a little... heated.
The sex did manage to last longer, but Starlight didn't. Then again, it's not like she was able to do a lot.
One can hope so, but there also might be a lot to do with the things that Chris pointed out while helping Kelly that male horses are by nature quick shots.
Confirmed? Sounded more like a question to me, but we'll see where that goes.
Rest up for work? LOL! Oh, you're a funny one.
Well, he did have Redheart and Cheerilee swap turns trying to drown him.
"Cerberus, because I joined the world's finest military fighting force, the United States Marine Corp, Devil Dogs. The god damn hounds hell, and I led the charge..."
Who else could it be?
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Well, the humans certainly are magic resistant. As for other inanimate objects, that hasn't been properly tested. Nothing outside of bullets and an ax doing excessive damage to constructs.
That is a good question. I wonder why no one in the story has asked that same question.
Now there's an understatement.
Well, it certainly has effected Big Mac. Maybe there will be more.
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What? Really? I thought that was common knowledge. Damn... My bad.
Hey, man. Once them's hooves are healed.
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Drunk Pinkie might be something Equestria isn't ready for.
That might end up being a thing.
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Crap. I think I was writing that bit on my phone and "trators" was auto-corrected to "traders."
Then again, that was an earlier chapter where I had a lot of stupid mistakes. Either way, thanks for pointing that out.
She's got the thunder doesn't she?
Btw it's no biggie about the sexual position thing. I just never really seen it before at all.
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That was Cerb first really introducing himself when they first all sat down to talk. What do you mean by "She's got the thunder," though?
LOL! It's all good, bro. Some things are going to be new to a lot of people. Some things just surprise me.
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I was thinking Thunder Glide because of the charged line but then I remembered these 79 point chapters were showing us what's been transpiring between our humans & their pony counterpoints after the initial post battle party.
Guess it's time for some serious shit between Cerb & his ladies huh?
Oh & to bring it back to Chris & Star to end off this chapter, a first date is inevitable right? It can't just be the sex that while incredible, odd but incredible that's keeping them afloat right? They do genuinely like each other correct?
I ask this because it's been mainly a sexual thing going on here & while it's fun & all to read, to see slow bond between Chris & Star like he had with Derpy would be pleasant, especially because she was his first.
I guess Star slipping into her old mindset of "I can do this & that" is a bit of a block in the road for that....hopefully not a permanent one. I really wanna see some romance between them.
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Ah. That makes sense, but I make no claim as to who all will be involved for each of these 79 point chapters. Even Mayor Mare got a little attention without officially being with Sniff. So, I'll leave that all up in the air.
Let's hope so. Well... I'm sure those two mares will.
I do feel bad about this whole setup with Chris and his girls. On two fronts, they had a good thing going. Dating his girls one on one, staying close to Starlight, sharing and getting to know each other... then things went too far and Starlight found something new to focus on. Of course, that would have been all well and good, but Starlight saw fit to share this information with the others and swarm Chris with it, to which, he caved.
I do want them to have a chance to really slow down and get back to trying to formulate a real relationship. However, that's going to be an issue with Chris until he stops letting them set the pace for him.
In some ways, given Starlight's thought process while getting Chris in the mood, it could be argued that what she was still using manipulation to get him to give them what they wanted. Not just Chris, but she even pushed Cheerilee into a position to seduce him, knowing what was needed to get him there.
Hell, if you think back to the speech she gave to her harem, compared to the one by Twilight and Ovens, it could be argued that Starlight gave an ultimatum while Twilight offered options. If you recall the speak she gave the other girls, one key phrase she gave was in Chapter 68. Compensating: Part 2 "Comparing Fantasy to Reality.":
So you all need to make the call. We can share something together, or risk going on with nothing apart from each other."
Compare that to Twilight in Chapter 77: Post-War-Party Party: Part 3. Leaving an Impact.:
"Peter has a lot of knowledge on dating and has helped many girls find lasting relationships. So, if all you want is advice then you can just talk to him about that. Things like what you should do on dates, what to look for in a partner, what your strengths are, or even the more physical side of intimacy. I’ve seen what he can do, and there is so much I didn’t know could be shared or experienced with something as simple as the caressing of his hands or a kiss.”
Part of which could be attributed to her guilt from upsetting him aftre the movie night, nearly giving him achohol poisoning while trying to make up, finding out later on that she took advantage of him in her blackout drunken stooper, nearly blowing him up in the failed gas replication attempt, and then setting him up with the confliction of having so many mares to date in secrete when he would have been happy with her.
A good example of the guilt she carried can be seen in her dialog from Chapter 42. Theories, Introductions, Missions, and a Question.
"I don't ever want to see him hurt by another pony again. That's the agreement I need from all of you."
Regardless, they will be given the opertunity to have some more one on one time once they're done with their mare on mare dates... which should also help Chris in the long run if they can get along and rely on each other and not keep dog piling him.
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Well, you certainly got the real take of how such relations would be viewed in a legal or philosophical view. You'll come to see that even with their intelligence, they're non-human form is still going to be an issue. That's largely just human nature. At the same time, you're going to see a similar rational point of view start to come into play with some of these characters. (Not really giving anything away there.)
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Was rereading this response & damn! Like things went far beyond than they should've
Chris could've just had Star & we all would've been good as fuck but then all this happened in a flash. What a major blindside!
Do you think Starlight's over that guilt & do you think that she knows she's been a little manipulative in this harem.
A harem btw I honestly hope gets smaller & smaller by the second because if I'm going to be completely honest here?
Chris is good with simply just Star & Derpy as they had the most 1 on 1 time with him.
A date between Chris & Star would be a great look into what they could be like as an actual romantic couple without the sexual side completely overshadowing the more sweet & affectionate side.
Chris is a sweetheart & he deserves nothing but the best & nothing would make more happier than to see him be at peace with someone who equals him.
Star & Derpy 100% would be that for him in my opinion.
Alas this story is a twist & turn kind of thing so I never know what you might do. Wishful thinking at best.
I only hope Star, Chris, & everypony else gets it good in the end.
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I'm playing a dangerous game of not being explicit with how I word choice and actions actually reveal what type of characters each human and pony is. Even as far as the mares in Chris's harem reveal something about themselves if you really look into it.
-Derpy is willing to commit to anything so long as it gives her companionship with someone who isn't going to judge or label her, or possibly is more concernted with simply giving Dinky a father in the home.
-Cheerilee feels like her time is running out and her prior failure with Big Mac, then seeing him with Kelly has scared her into the thought that with the shrinking number of stallions, Chris's interest in her might be her last shot.
-Cream misses having the support of having someone to share her burdens and responsibilities with. Even the brief time she spent alone with Chris on their date was a relief she hadn't been allotted since losing her husband. Then the physical intimacy alone is something that she longs to have again. Though I'm sure what Chris provides is probably more intense and appealing than what she even remembers.
-Prim has expressed her hardships from being a single mother, but at the same time, appears to very much appears to be a pleasure seeker.
-Redheart started with a physical interest in Chris, mainly wanting to better understand her field of study and sex with him, but has gained a deeper appreciationg with how he treats her patients (the foals). Beyond that, she's been accepted by the other mares while trying to get closer to Chris. So, lust, compatability, and access to real friends would all be answered by staying with Chris.
At the point in time where Chris's harem were given the choice to stay in together or walk away, she addressed each mare's concerns by either tempting them with a resolution or (softly) coercing them to stay in by reminding them of their fears. Even Cheerilee's concerns of not being a mother herself was side-stepped by Starlight and presented as:
"I don't claim to know exactly how a harem is supposed to work, but if we're going to make this work, and let everypony get what they want, this is our best bet. And if Twilight and the others can find a way back to the human world, we could be the one thing that keeps him here. Otherwise… we all lose him in the end anyway."
I'm not even saying it was being done maliciously, but even subtly, she guided and tempted all of them into staying together.
There will come a time when she is asked why she wanted to share him like she has and not keep him for herself. Every character makes their choices for a reason, we'll have to wait and see what her reason(s) were.
Over her guilt? No. She hasn't grown enough to forgive herself for things she has directly addressed and confronted head on. Well, she's probably over nearly blowing him up, as that was mostly Chris's fault for standing there like an idiot. The near alcohol poision, probably mostly to a large extent, given how they were both drunk and she didn't know any better. Insulting him during the movie night has already been addressed and she accepted that it was a just a bad situation she was pushed into and he didn't blame her for how she reacted.
That only leaves her taking advantage of him in her blackout... Even if she knows that now he wants it because they were open about it, her first time with him she forced herself on him in a way that went against the kind of person he was. Her first time has been the only time he's refused an advance from a mare.
it's hard to say how things will turn out in the end. It was all horribly rushed and the way they cornered him put a lot of pressure on him. It's going to be a bumpy ride I'm sure.
I totally agree, but with raging hormones on both sides and being new to the pleasures of sex, it can be easy to be distracted by the physical side and the instant dopamine release. It's not really Chris's fault for his girls getting overwhelmed with desire, but it is his fault for not putting his foot down.
I look forward to the chance of allowing Chris to explore his relationships with the other girls so they can all figure out where they want to be and how to work everything out. Starlight and Derpy though... top tier choices.
If they do, it will be the first time and these series of timelines.
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https://www.dictionary.com/browse/goddamnit
It's spelt wrong, but in the right format.
Always a great re-reading. Chris might try 4 Mares at once, but that takes practice
CMC totally going bonkers once they learn Cheerlie got a special-some-human
Human spreading love and tolerance, Cadance is getting some seriouse competition
Celestia was never a mother like Cadance, quite surprised that she isn't contemplating it for her future, when she is no longer needed.
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I'm sure that's only adding more fuel for her fire. She seems rally into that kinda thing.
I blame Harmony for that. Otherwise, she's wanted to be more free, but everything always gets in the way... Such is life.